XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adoptable #8]

Wow amazing

And wow some amazing work you have here the detail of the dress alone is just so amazing it's detail like that that just jumps out at me and you presented it well with some nice visual points here now I'm always saying ad something more to your background and you have done just that it's a subtle background but still very impressive and I enjoyed it very much keep it up

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I don't think this piece needs changes it's solid and artistic

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holikrep responds:

Oh gosh I feel so bad i've been away I only just now saw all ( or most, still reading!) of your kind comments/critiques/suggestions ; u ; I can't tell ya how much I appreciate you going through and taking the time to do that <3 it means a lot to read them all so thank you very much! You're too kind~

[Pointless]

Wow nice work

The "EXPRESSION" alone on this piece is really amazing those eyes so deep, your painting here was deep in texture, really some nice work here, love the painting style you have going on here, and would love to see more of your work sometime soon you are very talented and you have shown that here.

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No changes this was a beautifull piece of work.

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RannitX responds:

Thanks. I keep messing around with painting; glad you toke the time to give some input.

[Stan Lee Remembrance]

Nice

So this was pretty "COOL" So for me Stan lee loved his spiderman and I think you should have had more of that, but regardless this was pretty good, the glasses were nice you have a nice amount of detail, but anyways nice rememberance here with stan lee, hope to see more.

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So for me Stan lee loved his spiderman and I think you should have had more of that

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JackSquatJB responds:

Thanks for the comment. I agree about wanting more Spidey. Originally I was going to have webs coming off his collar but it just didn't look quite right. Honestly I started out simply wanting him to be The Watcher but it snowballed into including his other works and the Spidey hand just ended up being the best spot for it, albeit less prominent.

[Tentacle]

Very Nice

Love the color on this and that art detail on the tongue was very nice, here was an amazing piece of art that needs no changes, This one actually gave a decent vibe of things so I do hate to end on that note, but I did like what was repped here. so hope to see more of that. So this was a nice submission into the portal, You know, I think this is a nice and creative piece, I like the simplicity in this aswell as the detail that you presented, The design itself is intriguing and brings a style of its very own, and even seducing in its own unique way.

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here was an amazing piece of art that needs no changes

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Sevi responds:

Wow, thanks man, everyone's been really nice, and I wonder where is that newgrounds that other people talk about where people would strap you down and shit in your mouth?

[Blood Moon Akali]

Really nice

So this was something nice here you really did bring in the "BLOOD" theme on this but its the expression on her face that I really like making her suggest that shes ready for busness, but regardless of all that you have made some nice details here some really good character detail at that.

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Maybe more reds in there more blood theme elements

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Zakuga responds:

Thanks, I probably won't change this one much or anymore since it was featured on league of legends official website.

[Overlooked]

Nice

So this was something interesting, this one had a nice wavy animation about it, you made it very wavy and that made it "UNIQUE" a nice piece here and nice art style great character even, no changes here on this one its fantastic you should make more like this one.

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A unique piece doesnt need any changes its a fantastic overlook.

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Jogurt-NG responds:

back at it again with the feedback thank you!

[MegaTankMan Spritesheet]

This was cool

So sprite work is a dime o dozen but but this sprite work here of yours was very "NIFTY" you have some pleasent visual here with some really nice flavor, I like what you have done here and its this kind of sprite detail I really enjoy seeing, so keep making sprites.

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Some small color added would be cool.

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Lambtaco responds:

Colour would have been nice, but off-model.

[Basquiat]

Love the color

So with this one you have some really amazing use of color here and just all the different colors really jumped out at me more with this one then anything else, maybe adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus, I love your creative use of color.

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adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus

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DocLew responds:

Not to be rude or anything but you're leaving all these reviews to 'help me improve my works' but they're just your personal opinions, not real constructive criticism.
And no, sparkles and shine won't be a plus on Basquiat crown.

[Disgusting]

Nice

Nice work so you have some nice work here, the "REFLECTION" comes off well the red eye was nice I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here, but thats my imput on it all, you have some nice character work here and a nice portrait even so nice job.

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I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here

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RannitX responds:

Thanks!

[31 Days of Daisy Day 2]

I like the yellow

The yellow backround was nice maybe some texture or yellowish design in the backround, This could use a tiny bit of Polish, but this one does have a lot of detail and it shows, This looks like a blend of artistic quality to me, which makes it very beautiful looking to me. If you ask me its pretty Symbolic and you have got everything down Appropriately well. Theres so much you can do with this and you added some nice detail and its that detail that is so nifty, anyways nice work here.

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The yellow backround was nice maybe some texture or yellowish design in the backround

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loveboxf responds:

Hey thanks for the comment! I feel like I really need to make better backgrounds than just solid colors. It'll be something that I try to tackle more with my drawings from now on. Thanks again :P