XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #11 50 Second Challenge]

Notbad

So this was cool I like that this one only took you a solid 50 seconds and you still managed to come up with something that looks decent. I do think the lines are a bit all over the place in size veriations, so maybe that's something need to watch out for next time you go to do a fast drawing, but I do like the style here and for something that was going to be done so fast, it is not bad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved lines for consistency

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well 50 seconds was a challenging time limit. XD I plotted the motive before I started the clock, though. Pretty happy with how it turned out all things considered, but do agree, with time maybe I'll get both faster and better. Thanks!

[Inktober #12 5 Second Challenge]

Simple

So this was cool I like the simple nature of this one and it seems to be another one of your faster drawings, this time at 5 seconds. I think for 5 seconds this is actually pretty decent but too simple. I think you could have set the background color quick to be blue and then did a bit of green on the bottom portion. I bet you could save time by not signing the piece to give it a little extra. I mean, for a 5 second drawing, do you really need to have the signature?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort and detail

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Cyberdevil responds:

The signature's excluded in the time above, as mentioned. :) Just feels like it's a signature thing, you know? Glad you're appreciating even these rushed ones!

[Inktober #18 Cryptic Ink]

Very nice work here

Well I was really pleased with this piece the leet moris code was nice to see after all these years, and the way you included the pen itself was a nice detail that gave it some depth and realistic appeal. The only thing is this seems it's lacking some sparkle and shine, you could give much more shine and a sparkle in the corners and on the pen. But anyways nice job on this great language and I wonder what it all says?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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Cyberdevil responds:

It's binary, if you want to look it up. ;) Maybe some shine on the pen yes... but overall not sure I'd go for that style here! Thanks though.

[Inktober #19 UFO Sunrise]

Very neat

Wow this one is very neat the clouds are so detailed and deep with texture and even the sky has nice textures with your line art. A very nice work, the "UFO" is unique and actually seems a bit happy. It tells a story that something is happening with using very rich details. I am not sure about improvement here, maybe a sunburst effect where the sun is as the ufo flys over, more shine inside the ufo inself would also be a bonus, but overall good work on something neat and unique.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light on the sun

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Cyberdevil responds:

Wasn't so happy with the black outlines on this one myself, but glad you seem to see it in a different light! :) Feedback noted!

[High on Life]

Nice

The face in there is pretty good I think more more frame or border on this would be nice, I like the detail in this drawing and like the stylish resluts, this goes to show you dont need color to make it amazing and you have made some amazing things here very beautiful black and white drawing and or sketch here so nice work indeed, I look forward to much more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think more more frame or border on this would be nice

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GabrielLoganStudios responds:

Thank you very much! Honestly, this drawing was done in a very dark time for me, and maybe that shows a little bit in the black and white pallet along with the overall style depicted. I appreciate that you feel the way you do, though, and your feedback is very much so considered. Funny enough, some of my more recent Art 101 drawings include more established frames and it does make it look nicer in many respects. I will definitely take that into account with a couple future projects, as I think it might bring the overall work out a lot more.

Thanks again for the review, and I hope you stick around to see what I have in store next! :)

[Inktober #20 Monsters Ink]

Demonic

Wow this was amazing work, this one right here had some really nice lines. So far here you have really formed some detail in each character or demonic character and I think some extra shades here and even doing a color version would be nice to try out next time around, maybe with blood and hell fire, because the simple all black can not help me focus on one aspect and draws my eye all over the place, but anyways nice job, nice design as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color inside the character and hell fire would be nice

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Cyberdevil responds:

I think you'll find your feedback fully implemented a few Inktober pieces over. ;) Thanks.

[Inktober #23 Back Blaze]

LOL

well this one here, this one made me laugh and I really did enjoy the simple stick man's expressions of being on fire and "RUNNING". I think the flames themselves were good and the use of the text under it just made it more hilarious. It felt more like a comic panel and that was nice to me. I do find a border would have been more helpful and maybe would have brought this all together in a more comic way. I do think you give solid advice tho, back up your back ups.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border around this would be nice and make it more like a comic

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Cyberdevil responds:

I can actually see that black panel-like border around this one. :) Would be perfect. Glad you got a laugh out of it too (and if you haven't heard of the company they're very much recommended)!

[Inktober #15 A Bowling Baller]

Cool

So here was a cool character really nice original and detailed and new idea to use a bowling ball to be someone's head. You have a very simple and plain yellow background that was very bland besides that cool character and I don't think the brown outfit works with a yellow background since they are so close in hue it seems too similar, but overall this is good and not too bad. I would say I really will remember the character you've created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background details that is a new color and maybe has shading.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm I think the one color that doesn't really match here is the blue, but good notes!

[It's Over]

Nice art piece

So this is a nice "ART" piece I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more, this was some nice artwork here and I really liked it and was some nice detail, theres a alot of blank space in there and that was the intense.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more

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SPLATTERBRAIN responds:

Was gonna put the shadow of a giant hand coming down on him as if to press him out of existence, but I felt it'd be too much