XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joe McPhee Poster]

Nice

I guess this was some poster thing regardless it looks pretty good the black and white is nice might have been nice if it had some vibrant colored border it might make everything else stand out even, just a small idea to make it stand out better but seeing as this was a piece come and gone from 2009 it was fine as is, but you have a nice art piece here very good visually nice art piece.

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No changes needed in this piece because its come and gone but would have been nice with some colored border of some type.

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[Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl]

Beautiful so here was another beautiful art design I am loving the green element and the those eyes are so deep in expression, Despite the incorrect proportions of facial features visible the amount of precision with the details makes for an otherwise beautiful depiction of fantasy that is as close as possible to reality, Shading and light line work make out the aforementioned details adding to the overall realism within the drawing, The predominant light green also works harmoniously with the exceptionally dark color of her hair, The latter part of the drawing includes an appropriate amount of sheen generating a volumized appearance, Adding that same glimmer to the eyes and jewelry gives volume to the drawing as a whole, and not just in the hair, Very beautiful.

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Another fine piece of art that does not require any changes as this was an artistic creation with your own intent of art and style so no major changes needed here on this entry.

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[Room With A View]

Another unique entry

This one was amazing especially that last scene there, this comic always seems to flow with some interesting endings and some great humor and nice outcome on this one, Another unique entry here with some really nice outcomes, this was an interesting and stylish web-comic, you have some good and creative ideas when it comes to this comic so really nice work.

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no need to change anything as this was awsome

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[Truth Or Dare Pt.2]

My daily fix of dave and carl

haha nice work here and this one had a nice ending and there for no changes needed, some moments and some chuckles to come along, I cant get enough of this comic its always so entertaining and the adventures you take the characters on always gotta have My daily fix of dave and carl because I Cant get enough of this comic its always something nifty and fun.

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nice ending and there for no changes needed

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[Fat Man]

Nifty design

Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice, you can clearly see and while there is no or little color it is a nice piece you have here and the talent shows off well, so keep making great black and white stuff like this, and remember some added color never hurts but its your simple idea from line work to a nifty design that shines.

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Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice

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[Buttface]

A beautifull Nifty Piece

Wow this was amazing the shading detail is uncanny very well done work here, would love to see a colored version of this, I actually enjoy these black and white styles of drawings and paintings a bit more then the colored versions and thats because the detail tends to show its raw form here in the black and white line work and small details now dont get me wrong the color can be amazing but I love the raw black and white theme.

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would love to see a colored version of this

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[Heading Home]

Love it

Haha nice this was a great entry and tells about awarness of drinking and teleporting lol great entry no changes are needed, I do love this comic series and hope it doesnt end anytime soon, the energy and funny jokes in this is what I have enjoyed the most from this series, its a pleasure to review this and all the side stuff like the top-tens but regardless this particular entry here gave me a good fun chuckle I love the jokes in this one.

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great entry no changes are needed

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[Truth Or Dare Pt.3]

A fun adventure

Well this one was interesting I do have to say I love the small detailed of effects and such like the fire or flames etc makes it so much better, So here we are with another great adventure with such great humor I love how far you have taken this comic series from the very start to what it is now and it keeps going strong so props to you this particular entry was really funny and full of some adventure.

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make more soon

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[Shagrath]

Very nice

So here was a very nice piece almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff, love your style here of black and white design and drawing, And glad you have not added much color yet but when you do it will be pretty amazing stuff, the style here and design of the black and white is pretty good though and cant wait for some color one day.

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almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff

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fadedshadow responds:

yeah a border probably would create a nice effect. also dunno if you'd be interest but there's a version where i just did the line-art and it was a pretty good minimalist piece imo.

[Spartans]

Nice work here

Very nice work on this one and no major changes needed Nice work, its a black and white style drawing here I do think you could ad more to it but what you do have is pretty brilliant, and I like that its not colored or has very little colored but adding some wouldnt hurt either, but anyways nice drawing here. keep it up.

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no major changes needed

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