XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doom City (with painting video)]

Very intense

Now this was something really intense the view shot from bottom and going upwards is just a beautiful piece so nice job here looks like flames are rising and I think with that view shot you should have a light beam comming down from sky hitting parts of building but anyways nice work here

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A light beam or source from the sky

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[Breakfast on Charon game concept 1]

Wow

Now this is something really well done a very intense piece here the texture alone is very impressive with all the detail and texture you really gone out of your way and created some fantastic character a hungry one at that very nice work here indeed so nice work on this one

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Honestly nothing you have outdone yourself here

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[Redwhisker Swordshrew]

Very nice piece

And here was a very nice piece of artwork love the detail of this love this as you have a polished charchter here and just fantastic piece you have here here even the background was pretty impressive so nice job indeed here make more great stuff soon

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Very nice work here just make more beautiful stuff

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[Bullet Smash Hell Crossover]

Wow nice job

Now this was a nice job you have here all the colors and beams and even all the Bsss that was pretty cool this was another one that didn't need any changes at all it's very impressive work well detailed and needs no changes what so ever so props to you on a fine job

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Awesome job here fine detail and no major changes or edits needed

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[Nintendo Hard way]

Very nice

This was cool I like what you have here and the different animation here didn't know you can do that much animation on an art piece your works shows nice detail and really nothing to improvments here as these are pretty impressive already so nice work indeed

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Really nothing with these pieces

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[NG user fanart: DJDarkDash]

Very cool

Now here was something really cool I really love the flames as arms I think you could actually make those brighter and more glowing just a nice effect that would give off a much nicer visual. And could be my opinion but thaught I would throw that out at you

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Some glow on the flames would be nice

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[Battleblock theaters co-ops]

Wow

Wow this is really amazing work I love the effects on this and nice visual and nice style of idea as well you have a nact for making some fresh and sharp looking sprites and pixelated characters and scenes just like you did here and I'm very impressed

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I would live to see an extra bit of shine and sparkle added

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[Eskimo Bob Arcade]

Instant fan

So I'm an instant fan of this one I have always been a big fan of Eskimo Bob he is so adorable and to see him in Sprite and pixel mode in a game visual was kind of nifty so nice job here I like this one very nice indeed love your work especially this early stuff

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My suggestion is make more stuff of Eskimo Bob

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[Stellar Arms fan art]

Very nice fan art

I really enjoy the fan art here the pixel is at it's best her very sharp view and a beautiful setting for some action scene something about to happen you bring some real good stylish stuff here and I was pretty impressed with how this just leaps out at you

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Adding more slashes like the white ones but maybe put a glow on them

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[Three Little Mothers]

Love the creativity

So i like all the different elements in this one I do think you could ad some type of fancy border though, This piece here speaks volumes and jumps out at me with some nifty creativity, These types of submissions reall bring new insight to the style and craft. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, This was Appropriately done well in a very symbolic way, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far. But honestly you have some nice talent here.

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I do think you could ad some type of fancy border though

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AdventVoice responds:

Borders would be nice. To kind of emphasize each character. It might have helped if I had a back story for them as well.