XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Purplex]

Lighting effects needed

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is another neat entry from you, now "PURPLE" just happens to be my fave color, and you really went with a deep purple like i like here, now here you didnt show much of the lighting effect that i am fond of, but i think it would have been perfect for thei image design, such as the "LIGHTER" center point here, i love the wave design you gave this and all and purple is a good colortone to go with, just that this needed that lighting effect you are so very good at, so work on that maybe in a differant version or just something to remember for the future, as the lighting effects you do is your best stuff based on all your works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said, the lighting effects are needed in this one as it would have worked so well with the deep purple in the backround and gave more focus to the design itself.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review and actually i tried with the glow effect with this one but i kinda liked the original piece.

[Endless Tunnels]

Interesting, could use more

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one reminds me of some sorta skeliton frame of some creature that is forming like out in space or even under water of some kind, I felt this one was lacking in "LIGHT" effects though, it had some and a nice design all around, but felt it could have more of that awsome stuff you know how to do, in really making the light just "JUMP" out at you with amazing color aswell, which you could have done abit more with in this one, it seemed t o have just a more darker tone of colors, and could have used with some mixture of brighter colors all around, But still dont get me wrong i still enjoyed it, and had a really nice design, the lighter coloers "LIGHT BLUE" seemed too bland for me and seemed as if you could put more design up there, just a thought though, So anyways it was a nice design, could use abit more though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more like more brighter colors and some more design in the bland spots.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review and thanx for reminding of my good ol lighting effect.

[Airavat]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting, i am slowly but surly getting to your other works here, but anyways this one, kinda reminds me of the "OIL" in the gulf of mexico the dark purple being the oil, and the bluish being the water and ocean part of things, and looks like the dark purple thing in the middle bottom is the tube and all the oil is spreading around for destruction, then again it also reminds me of a chainsaw lol, but regardless of all that its pretty neat, i like all the darker colors in this one, so kinda hard to review but still a nice design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Mix up some more colors in here

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review

[True Devil]

Awsome color.

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i guess you did make some new stuff i have not been paying attention, but this one i really like, it has tons of Color, all around, and correct me if i am wrong but there is a little man in there? or that would be the demon lord? if so you did a very good job, cause all the color represents the power and such that he is going to destroy us all with and i think you represented that pretty well, some improving might be that the little guy was raiding his arms and you have light coming from them hands that really just spark what is to be the color and lighting effects, I am really impressed with all the extra color added stuff alot better then some of your earlier stuff, so i was really impressed with this one, and wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this one, you really outdid yourself once again, ao anyways the only changes i suggested here would have been the raising of the arms with a more light effect coming out, anyways good job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i suggested some color fixes with the little demon as he raises his arms something like that but for the most part its pretty neat.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i didnt expect that youll like it that much :D

[Fio Ballpen]

Nice sketch

~~REVIEW~~
Ok one of your few black and whites notbad i thought, but they do look so much better in color, and this wouldnt be just a sketch with some color, hell an idea would be to have "HALF" of it in color, and the rest in black and white, something along them lines, but anyways, here is a good action scene, kinda reminds me of "TOMBRAIDER" but you know, love the detail, here is another piece that seems like it should have been a larger canvas, now with that i do understand it is just a sketch just would be nice to see more of the action of whats going on in the scenes, but you did present us with some nice details, just lacks a few things. and i think thats "GLASS" she is busting through, you shoould think about putting abit more shine or glare on some of the glass along with some sparkles here and there to give it that effect abit more. So anyways i had the pleaseure of seeing this and reviewing it, and once again look forward to reviewing any new stuff aswell, so good luck on any new stuff you got coming though the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the canvas a tad larger, maybe add some color if not all just abit of it. Also abit more shine on the glass.

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[Pico In time!]

Nice idea

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so it was about time that i got around to this, now here you have a really good scene, and there lots of action, i love how the thumbnail is of the dancing girl and it really throws you off of what it might be, but anyways great scene here and awsome how you fit alot of the characters in there and stuff, would have been nice if there was a tad more focus on the dancer hehe, but everything is looking good in this scene with lots of action going on, so with all the nice jobs and stuff said, lets get to what i think could improve on this such as, i do think it could look bigger maybe a larger canvas, and i know you have heard me say that before, but its something that might bringout the little details abit more, the color was awsome and really had that feel of that time and genr, so props to you there, so if any suggestions are to be made it is that of the larger canvas size, Now the "BORDER" was a nice touch almost if it was an old pic taken, but i think that can be improved on aswell, such as make the borders the newgrounds orange color. anyways nice job, i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the canvas size abit larger so that there can be shown more of the detail and such, maybe even ad in a few more Newground celebs of some sort. The borders could be newgrounds orange color borders, just to resemble newgrounds abit more

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[Piconjo's sword]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so another 3d render, which is not bad, i like what you did with it, like with textures and really making it shine, i think you could have still gave it abit more of a shine, more brightness on the shine part, like if it was out in the sun or something and the sun is directly over it especially being out on the sand and all, I thing the handle should be more thicker, something that holds all that blade should have more of a grip and such, and there was a little green "GEM" at the bottom, i thought this could be more brighter maybe with more of a glow and such, maybe even bigger in someway, As for the sand as the backround i thought that was a nice little backround maybe it should be more lighter like in some sorta sandy dunes type of thing, well these are a few ideas that could really help, maybe or maybe not but something to think about if every wanting to improve onto these, nice little sword or knife here i thought it was very impressive even as is, and i look forward to seeing more of your designs and artwork in the near future, so good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
suggested a number of ideas and improvments above, such as brigter gem, bigger handle, brighter shine and sandier sand.

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Manuel-Dangelo responds:

in fact this is not a little sword, this is a huge masive sword. haven't you ever played NewGrounds Rumbles? try to unlock Piconjo's charapter and you'll know what I'm talking about.

[Exploited view]

Better i thought

~~REVIEW~~
and here are some better pieces with more of the visuals more detailed then the one with the logo and all, it all seemed to be a work in progress as there was lots of parts that really needed to work together, i have really enjoyed reviewing these as i love to see how things work, but awsome job all around here very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think Some sorta crazy backround like a rainbow warp in the backround would really show off the pieces in a better light.

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[Cheese Grater Use Manual]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Ok here was more of the one of the final version, and here you show lots of differant versions everything in this one seems to be just everywhere and doesnt show much of each part as the big "LOGO" is also blocking the way, but anyways it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would remove the logo so you can the actual 3d abit more in detail and such.

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[Easy Cheese Grater]

Neat 3d

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting something differant and the 3d style is pretty neat i thought, Kinda differant from your side of things and seems like you put lots of effort in these so that was pretty neat, as a cheese grater i guess there is not much you can do there but its still interesting, i think if you had a view portion of it grading some cheese it might be pretty interesting aswell, just an idea for more of an effect of the grater and such, really there is not too much to comment on this but i did find it pretty neat, so maybe more effects next time like the actual cheese and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested an effect like cheese coming out would be something neat.

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