XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vince]

Cool art piece

So this was another cool, picture here, The black and white style of art is ok, nut with the nice drawing here seems like some added color would have been the perfect touch, maybe a prop or the backround or something in color allowing for a focus point of some sort, So thats one way of detailing it up with color, Its a strong resemblance, to one of the fulpboys, regardless this was pretty funny, just too much black and white and does need a touch of color. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed.

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An impressive piece of art you have here, now ofcourse there was some changes and upgrades that could be made to it as suggested in the review but for the mostpart this was a pretty fantastic piece, just look into some more ideas as suggested. starting with some color and even some backround work. but besides that this was pretty good i thought so keep up the decent work.

[House]

Wow this was nice

I love this piece because it has an interesting yet "SIMPLE" touch to it, also the whole black and white style is notbad, Now the black and white style is always fun I do think you can add a touch of color though, maybe a spot here or a spot there maybe a border or just something that would bring more focus to it. With this particular pic maybe the daisyleaves could be yellow and the rest all black and white, but regardless this was a pretty neat art piece. everything looked great and the black and white was notbad, very unique and differant.

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Well this could use a touch of color as mentioned, and maybe a tad more in the backround scene.

[Red Arremer]

Nice texture

This was neat, the color really comes thru good with this one, love the bright and vibrant colors even on the demon, the orangish colors cameout well, and was pretty impressive, you even gave it some "SHINE" so that was a real plus, and everything on this was pretty fantastic, i think the best art was that it had some vibrant colors, so awsome job there indeed, You may want to think about adding some borders seems fitting espceially with your signature at the bottom would give off a sort of galery tyle and style of art piece.

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And some advice on this one probably as suggested some borders would be great here. other then that this was pretty good.

[Ruh Ruh]

Tree people.

This was very "CREATIVE" i love these tree like people, and i thought there was a "SIMPLISTIC" feel about them with some "SOFT" touches of color and elements and that was kinda neat and made it interesting, also want to give you some props on the backrounds as you presented some related stuff it was again simple and that seems to work here so nice effort there, So very creative elegant and something exotic you have here.

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This was a cool art piece, some more darker shadow like feel in the backround would be a plus on this piece, but overall it was welldone.

ConnyNordlund responds:

Haha I thought the " were you being sarcastic at first.
Thank you!

As for the background; That's a good point. The piece was actually going to be a concept piece more than a illustration, I just dialed in the background in a few minutes so that it would make the characters more interesting. I know what you mean with darker shadows but I didn't want to go too dark so the characters become too unclear, since they had to work as concept pieces in the end.

[Digital Farmer]

Hmmm interesting

And this was an interesting drawing, its not exactly Black and white, but kind of is, but it is neat, the backround seems to have a base color and that was a nice touch would be nice if there was more color though maybe the backround base could be a sharp red or something, or even in this case his "HAT" could be a red or green, something that stands out and has more focus to it, just something to think about and you never know it can make it better, just have to experiment more with differant stuff.

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So i was suggesting Experimenting with new ideas and stuff, some color would be a suggestion some odd part having some color or even the backround some vibrant color.

[Western Zombies]

Zombies cool

Very nicework here, this was my choice of something to review today and the zombies really stuck out, you really gave it the dark touch and feel of it and such, I like how you put a couple of "ZOMBIES" in this kinda like they are in some attack phase, even the backround was pretty decent and was notbad atall, the drawings are good here, nice use of color to give that dark and grungy feel but really good in giving off the dark touch to it.

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So an idea might to put more "BLOOD" more dripping blood, and maybe even farther aproach put some "SHADOWED" zombies in the backround like in the distance.

Artist-Lost responds:

Thanks for the critique ^.^ I see what you meen, some dripping flesh and blood like they have just fed would be a great touch, and the zombie silhouettes would make a good impression of a horde rather then just a cute zombie couple out for a wilderness picnic

[Algebra.]

Nice drawing

So here is a nice drawing, its well done actually this was kind of interesting and funny at the same time not sure if the legs and body portions are supose to be that way, but you did a fantastic job with everything else and the "SHADING" was fantastic nice detail and nice eye for detail with everything else so it was a clever little piece of artwork i thought, nice effort all around, as for improvment onlything i can think of would maybe to add some color and some sort of backround aswell just a little something to improve on here.

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So some suggested ideas and tips, maybe a backround, some color and or some body portions but it does look interesting in that sense.

[Dem Hips]

Nice pose

Haha so i must say that this art piece was something differant has a good pose with the girl even all the skin tones and texture really cameout well and made for some really nice art style here, i really like the"POSE" and you have a view shot of looking upwards that was something differrant but i guess it allowed for more view of the texture and was something differant so notbad there, the onlything i thought could be better was the "BACKROUND" as it wastoo dark maybe some differant color choices in the stripes would work, well something to think about in anycase.

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I thought could be better was the Backround as it was too "DARK" maybe some differant color choices in the stripes would work, well something to think about anyways it was notbad, good art piece.