XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lexia]

Awsome

I love what the artist was trying to do here. It's a good piece. The colors and lack of details, particularly on the face and clothing make a little plain and simple for my taste. The orange glowing on the character doesn't match with the background. Where is the source of that light? Maybe add a little campfire or lantern light? So it's a little less confusing

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Once again no changes needed.

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[Little Red Riding Hood, Marridelle]

Nice work

very cool, I love how you made a point not to expose the body, rather cover it up instead. The fact that they used a tight looking garment adds to the sex appeal but does it in a tasteful and elegant way, Not in a vulgar way, which is so common with this type of art, The shape of her face adds a sense of youth and innocence to the character, While her eyes appear wicked and cunning

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no changes it was nice work.

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[Erylia - Blueberry haul]

Really nice detail here

The backround I especially enjoyed while it was subtle it worked well, and the main focus was a great element here with some great focus on detail it ecen looks very realistic so really nice job here and love your artistic style here, I have no changes here im pretty lost in this piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no changes here im pretty lost in this piece

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[Ryuko Pijamas]

Nice character

This was a nice charcater design you have here I love the look on there yes here and that pose with her arm up above a very natrual pose here, the backround was pretty nice I wouldnt mind more glare from the back lighting of the windows, but other then that this was pretty good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind more glare from the back lighting of the windows

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[Magik Marvel]

Very nice

I love the angle you had this character in, the shoulders and head piece seem like you could ad some shine and glare to it and let it shine off, the texture in the backround was really nice the character itself was really nice work amd a very talented piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added glare snd shining points.

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[Double]

Deep color

wow you truly have amazed me with this one its so deep in color and design no changes at all needed it is fantastic, I wouldnt say this is a perfect piece but Appropriately pushed the limits with this one and gave it that extra touch and really put some grace into it all so nice work indeed

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no changes at all needed it is fantastic

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[The Legend Himself]

Love it

Well I do have to say that you have outdone yourself here with this amazing art piece a fantastic character love the green eyes as a suggestion maybe more glow off the green would make it more impact, but anyways you have amazed this reviewer keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
love the green eyes as a suggestion maybe more glow off the green would make it more impact

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rio-is-ok responds:

Thank you!!

[Poot Puff]

Simple

So this was a rather simplistic piece here with a nice outlook on it all, I like the style of it still very simple and the pixel was a nice effort on this one, I think backround detail could be added here with some props and backdrop scene here anyways really nice work.

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I think backround detail could be added here with some props and backdrop scene here

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[Experiment Number Six]

Talented work

the darkness of the colors make this seem to be a very sad or melancholy piece. I like the textured look of the face. That's very original. The contrasting colors in back are blended together very nicely. The face is very unusual but there are details in it that get your attention in it, rather than having you look away. I wonder what the mood was the artist was trying to convey to us?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine off of his head might be one way to go or think about

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[Kasa]

Very good work

So this was some really good work you have here, maybe as an idea you could have the sunlight or lighting source beam through more, this art work we have here seems to come from some interesting imagination, thats always a plus on what I like to see so please do make more of this stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as an idea you could have the sunlight or lighting source beam through more

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JessxJess responds:

I tried to keep the light as muted as possible and have the earring and sparks really pop out and draw attention. I'll keep your comments in mind for my pieces going forward though!