XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Harley Quinn]

Cool

So this was really cool a great character design here, I like the huge hammer I think you could have some more shine and sparkle on the metal brackets, maybe even some more sunlinght from the backround, but other then that this was a really good art character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have some more shine and sparkle on the metal brackets, maybe even some more sunlinght from the backround

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[Epic Story 20X6 faux page.]

Now this was a nice comic

Nice sketched up comic style some small added color might be an idea maybe just props or borders, You kept the viewer interested and you kept the viewer wanting even more from this comic, So I was glad to find this comic entry it was an "EXCITING-SUBMISSION" and a great comic here, it was "VIBRANT" with detail and a nice topic of choice too so nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some small added color might be an idea maybe just props or borders

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[Gardening Owl]

Pleasent

This was a nice and pleasent piece love the detailed backround even if faint but gives off the ellusion of a world there the character was very pleasent a really amazing piece and there are no major changes needed its amazing work so please do keep at it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no major changes needed its amazing work

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[Black canary]

Nice effects

So you have some really nice effects here love the energy and power she is expressing espically on her face you have really captured that and shows the emotion in her face so really nice work here, Another one of your pieces that needs no changes, the character is amazing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another one of your pieces that needs no changes

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[Political Blahs]

Nice comic Idea

Love that its black and white, maybe the borders could be color and the rest black and white, I do look forward to much more of what you bring to the portal especilly if it was anything like this, this was "SOMETHING-SPECIAL-HERE" with this entry the comic itself was very exciting and you bring on some "GOOD-BUZZ" with this comic so I was pretty pleased.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe the borders could be color and the rest black and white

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[Scarlet Witch]

Another beautiful one

This one here was a beautiful piece here you do some nice work and you showcase some nice effects like the glowing rings, love the lighting effects in the backround aswell, great form on the character aswell, the face looked more like a barbie doll maybe that was the intense.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I didnt find the need for any changes to take effect on this one.

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[Zeroes 11: Firetruck Go Boom]

A nifty Comic

I love the bright colors like a real comic style, would love some more detailed borders though, You really kept me excited from frame to frame and I was pleased with the outcome of this it was aswome "FROM-START-TO-FINISH", But I do have to say you have some "NICE-TALENT" when it comes to comic stuff like this one, so nice work here and hope you bring even better results next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love some more detailed borders though

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[Lexia]

Awsome

I love what the artist was trying to do here. It's a good piece. The colors and lack of details, particularly on the face and clothing make a little plain and simple for my taste. The orange glowing on the character doesn't match with the background. Where is the source of that light? Maybe add a little campfire or lantern light? So it's a little less confusing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Once again no changes needed.

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[Little Red Riding Hood, Marridelle]

Nice work

very cool, I love how you made a point not to expose the body, rather cover it up instead. The fact that they used a tight looking garment adds to the sex appeal but does it in a tasteful and elegant way, Not in a vulgar way, which is so common with this type of art, The shape of her face adds a sense of youth and innocence to the character, While her eyes appear wicked and cunning

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes it was nice work.

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