XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commission - TyrantWolf]

Cute

So the pixel style is awsome and you made it even more entertaiing then it already is In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here, but overall this was some fantastic art style you have here really nice submission.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here

~X~

YawningFox responds:

Well, it was a commission and they just wanted 3 hearts. A backdrop would have cost more money for them. Haha, though definitely would have been nice! I just wasn't paid for it.

[The FAB tank]

Nice

This was cool, I like the tankman and the tank, I like all the pink mode here also was kind of cute, would have been cool if the canvus was larger and such, but anyways nice work here I like the style love the color just wish the canvus was larger and you showed more to it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the style love the color just wish the canvus was larger and you showed more to it

~X~

[ALBINO]

An interesting Comic

I am enoying this for the slanted and stylish humor in this one, You should continue this on and make them longer, This was something special here with this entry the comic itself was very exciting, The adventure this one brings is really nice and "EACH-NEW-FRAME" of the comic brings on some new elements very nice submission of this comic a "WONDERFUL-FIND" if you ask me it was exciting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should continue this on and make them longer

~X~

[Celene's room (New Banner)]

Really nice

Really nice art piece here I am enjoying the lighting effects almost makes me think that if it was darker it might allow the lamp lighting to be luminating more around, but regardless this was some nice work really great style of art that you have so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as mentioned above

~X~

[Gravity Rush2]

Amazing

Amazing work as always your character designs are always smooth and fresh looking, some added detail in the backround like a bird or flock of birs would be interesting, very cute and sweet. There's a balance brought out by the two characters. Sweet and seductive, dark and light. There's some things though, too much open space and lack of details. The characters appear to be rather small, or not complete, so the piece doesn't really hold your attention. Also there's a dark hue to the colors making it kind of difficult to see.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
added detail in the backround like a bird or flock of birs would be interesting

~X~

[The Hollix]

Artistic

Depth is given to the creature’s eyes through the added light which is also made effective by adding the lighter shade of green over the darker one and the dash of white, The eyes are drawn in a way that the area of focus is apparent the surrounding glow amplifies an unearthly quality too, Lack of darkened lining for the water and land maintain the feature of speed regarding the creature’s force of suction and the impact it is having.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some sort of glow on the eyes just a small one.

~X~

[am i scared?]

An interesting Comic

I liked it but does seem to need some kind of border or frames to balance it all out and more focus on the main comic, you made some nice artwork with this comic I have really come to enjoy how this comic "EVOLVES", there was some nice detail you have put fourth in this, So anyways "NICE-WORK-HERE" and I look forward to even more from you in the comming future of your comic.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
does seem to need some kind of border or frames to balance it all out and more focus on the main comic

~X~

[Lemillion]

Very nice

So as always you make some amazing pixel elements here but even some animation thats pretty talented and you made it all look so easy a great pixel like art piece here would have liked something in the backround distance just an idea though, anyways keep up the great work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would have liked something in the backround distance just an idea though

~X~

[Harley Quinn]

Cool

So this was really cool a great character design here, I like the huge hammer I think you could have some more shine and sparkle on the metal brackets, maybe even some more sunlinght from the backround, but other then that this was a really good art character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have some more shine and sparkle on the metal brackets, maybe even some more sunlinght from the backround

~X~

[Epic Story 20X6 faux page.]

Now this was a nice comic

Nice sketched up comic style some small added color might be an idea maybe just props or borders, You kept the viewer interested and you kept the viewer wanting even more from this comic, So I was glad to find this comic entry it was an "EXCITING-SUBMISSION" and a great comic here, it was "VIBRANT" with detail and a nice topic of choice too so nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some small added color might be an idea maybe just props or borders

~X~