XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alraune (Disgaea)]

A really nice piece of art here

This was something special with the creative design and nice elements backround was somewhat bland but maybe thats the way you meant other then that this was pretty nifty work some nice artwork here really like the style of your efforts here a fun art piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes it was a fine piece.

~X~

Noscium responds:

thx =p

[Chibiday #2: Cat on work]

Cute and something different

love the cat hahaha! This is so great and cute! It's very clever! Simple yet perfectly drawn. It doesn't even need an explanation. These are the types of comics I see and am a fan of on Facebook. It's because of their simplicity and cuteness that I'm such a fan. You can laugh so easily, they're relatable and not difficult to understand at all. Awesome!!

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvments needed you are a pro at this

~X~

[Super Meat Boy- Alien Hominid]

Very nice

Now this was cool I love the lighting effects you have here, some really nice work, love all the shades and detail on this one, I think the outter edges could have some frame and borders on this, maybe even yellow to represent the character color theme, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frame or borders.

~X~

[That Magic Spark]

Gotta love some Comics

As always you make some great artwork but this one had some very deep colors thats what I liked most of all, I have no suggestions for improvments because you always seem to amaze us all with your talents, This was a great looking comic just from the outlook here some "NICE-VISUAL-POINTS" in this and it all stands out, Really gotta love some comics and you have presented some really "NICE-COMIC-WORK" here with this one, so keep doing what you are doing and keep making some nice details here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no suggestions for improvments because you always seem to amaze us all with your talents

~X~

[Commission - TyrantWolf]

Cute

So the pixel style is awsome and you made it even more entertaiing then it already is In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here, but overall this was some fantastic art style you have here really nice submission.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here

~X~

YawningFox responds:

Well, it was a commission and they just wanted 3 hearts. A backdrop would have cost more money for them. Haha, though definitely would have been nice! I just wasn't paid for it.

[The FAB tank]

Nice

This was cool, I like the tankman and the tank, I like all the pink mode here also was kind of cute, would have been cool if the canvus was larger and such, but anyways nice work here I like the style love the color just wish the canvus was larger and you showed more to it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the style love the color just wish the canvus was larger and you showed more to it

~X~

[ALBINO]

An interesting Comic

I am enoying this for the slanted and stylish humor in this one, You should continue this on and make them longer, This was something special here with this entry the comic itself was very exciting, The adventure this one brings is really nice and "EACH-NEW-FRAME" of the comic brings on some new elements very nice submission of this comic a "WONDERFUL-FIND" if you ask me it was exciting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should continue this on and make them longer

~X~

[Celene's room (New Banner)]

Really nice

Really nice art piece here I am enjoying the lighting effects almost makes me think that if it was darker it might allow the lamp lighting to be luminating more around, but regardless this was some nice work really great style of art that you have so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as mentioned above

~X~

[Gravity Rush2]

Amazing

Amazing work as always your character designs are always smooth and fresh looking, some added detail in the backround like a bird or flock of birs would be interesting, very cute and sweet. There's a balance brought out by the two characters. Sweet and seductive, dark and light. There's some things though, too much open space and lack of details. The characters appear to be rather small, or not complete, so the piece doesn't really hold your attention. Also there's a dark hue to the colors making it kind of difficult to see.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
added detail in the backround like a bird or flock of birs would be interesting

~X~

[The Hollix]

Artistic

Depth is given to the creature’s eyes through the added light which is also made effective by adding the lighter shade of green over the darker one and the dash of white, The eyes are drawn in a way that the area of focus is apparent the surrounding glow amplifies an unearthly quality too, Lack of darkened lining for the water and land maintain the feature of speed regarding the creature’s force of suction and the impact it is having.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some sort of glow on the eyes just a small one.

~X~