XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Charcater Design - Laurel Gladeos, Disgruntled Realist Genie]

Nice

You seem to have a lot of these doodles and sketches now don't get me wring they are cool but would love much more color some frames on the canvus or view screens and more designs in there they are a cool piece of charchter work so I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few tid bits of suggestions

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[Bob of Sponge Character Designs]

Oh cool

This is another one of those pieces that I could see you adding some frame and or borders on the canvus edges just to give it that gallery style feel about it besides that it was pretty good and was a nice piece of art and good charchter designs anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and frames

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[Luka]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like this even if it was a doodle or sketch or whatnot but it's a nice piece of work the character has some nice linework and some decent quality I think you should ad some nice and fancy borders or frames on the canvus edges other then that this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders

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[First Encounters - Trapinch]

Cool

So this was cool the thing that I'm conflicted with on this piece is that the background being white doesn't allow for the shine to show off on the creatures head or some of the details in the running charchter maybe if the background was a base darker color it would be cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background base color would suffice

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[Broadhill Ward Nine]

Decent

So not sure what all this is but has some nice black and white tones to it and seem to reflect off eachother I think you could actually ad more color and color tones to the black and white for an extra touch about it but overall it's a simplistic and decent art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be really cool

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[Uuhhhhh, Tree Between Two Slopes or something I dunno]

Cool

So this was cool I like the tree and sun I think you could do a few things here like have more sun beam beating down on the ground and tree and more green grass and such growing but besides that this was a good background scene so nice effort here I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added grass and some added sun beam

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[Spooky Trio]

Nice spider web

So here was another fine spooky piece love the added head in the web speaking of the web you should have some web points sparkle a bit like silk threading might and some added shine on the hair tops would be another suggestion anyways keep up the interesting work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on the web and shine on the characters hair tops

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[Hello]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like the vibrant colors here and like all the spooky flavor you added to this I think the only area of advice and opinion I might go with this would be having some stars in the black background but that's just an idea and suggested idea at that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some stars in the background

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[Alternate Reality Mockup]

Quality work

You can really see the quality of the work I like these before and after mock up types you really creat the detail and shine they deserve I could see you adding more shine and sparkle maybe even giving it some greenish effect but other then that this was pretty solid stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things mentioned

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