XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Halo Anniversary]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i got a kick out of this one, i like how this one was more on the simple side of things, you did present the humor with the simpler side, great characters good expressions and it seemed to flow ok, kinda like a short comic here but honestly i think this was your best work as the story worked well here, my only issue and there can be some improvment with it would be, that the ending frames, would be you should show the result of him, but other then that this was notbad at all, i got a few kicks out of this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A funny comic gave off some laughs good design and story with this one, as mentioned i wouldnt mind seeing end results of the guy though. that was the onlyissue. besides all that this was a pretty good piece if you ask me.

[Skywards Part: 1]

Its pretty good if you ask me.

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good as always, nice funny characters, a good humor related comic, and funny as just mentioned, you seem to be in a comic style as of late, while those are good, i do miss your other pieces, of artwork but as this comic version, you dod awsome job on this, i do like your comc styles but wish there was abit more flare and flashhy backround designs and even some color that really pushed the use of color, now if thats not your style i tottallyunderstand that, anyways great piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something abit more maybe with the borders and frames like some flashy design, i think i mentioned that last time, anyways overallthis was pretty good comic and i look forward to seeing more soon, thank you for contributing great art to this site.

[red baron]

Love the color theme

~~REVIEW~~
I love the color use on all this, respecially using some color in the name in the backround, so in this cse the "TITTLE" fits very well on this piece, and while its red colored based, theme was pretty awsome you didnt over do it either, now i can see where this could be slightly better even i thought, such as with his big sword you should have it dripping with blood onto the ground that would have been a nice extra use of the red color aswell, but anyways great piece here and again the tittle fits so perfectly with this one, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some red blood dripping but other then that this was pretty good stuff.

dommi-fresh responds:

man you sure love that blood don'tcha thanks all the same

[Symbiotes Ex: Demon Sess]

I liked this

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so that was notbad, i really like that as i go through some of your art that you have some just black and white stuff and some color this was brilliant with the red jacket, the white backround was ok but i guess this was more for the sketch and thats ok too, what do you use as in brushes for the color, the texture seems off at times, but i must say you did pretty good and while the texture is not the best it seems to work, so on those aspects this was notbad, also glad to see you keeping up with the detail and such, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sorta backround something faint so as to not take away from the main drawings.

[Hank is Chalk Full of Madness]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we have some nice mess of art here, i like how everything is all over the place, you do have some nice detail and some good creative ideas to place on the canvas, why not make this all on a much larger canvas base as it would allow you to push even more detail through, and i love that you added some color in this one, in this case the blood but that was pretty good i thought, there were a few, bland spots you could have filled in but i loved it for the color and detailed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few improvment ideas, some more use of the canvas aswell as making it larger and filling in the bland spots.

[Abby Ink Concepts]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well i must say these are differant and nice sketches, i guess you are going with the black and white style, would be really nice with some "COLOR" in the mix though, its really nice and detailed, even a splash of color here and there wouldnt hurt, or instead of the sketches why not just add some sorta comic style so that you have it in frames somehow, its a good drawing and good detail, the black and white is cool but could be better with some color mixed in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some suggestion of color, and even comic style would work on this

[Massive boner]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
ok so as a fan myself of the whole star trek era this was very amusing, i like how you have it set up top too bottom, and the frames are that of differrant from the normal ones, this was a pleasent and funny comic, you may want to add some faint backrounds nothing to take away from the comic focus but maybe in a faint color tone possibly showing reflections of scenes from the ship episodes and what not, and some more sci fi like borders wouldnt hurt either is always something new to throw in there aswell, anyways great piece i really liked this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some backround of fanit color tone could be places, and some nifty sci-fi borders maybe enterprise ships somehow, nice work all around i thought.

[The Vampire In My Dreams]

Somewhat bland but it was pretty decent.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was pretty "GROOVY" kinda had a creepy look even reminded me of jack nicholos, so i like the dark feel you gave this, it really showed off, but was also bland with the backrounds maybe you could add some sorta scenery or colored base in the backrounds, You showed off some nice "DETAIL" all in the face, another improvment point might be some better texture in the shirt just a little, but other then that i did think this was pretty fantastic anyways hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture issues, and some backround area could be worked on.

linda-mota responds:

Oh yea I agree wholeheartedly with you. My older work lacked some sort of background. Probably will be redrawn.

[Vader]

Very neat

~~REVIEW~~
Wow very nice, a very good sketch of vader maybe give im a more broader presance more dominating from the smoke, also i like the smoke like feel from the backround, but maybe some "EYES" in the distant of the backround, also having the sabre lit up would have been good too, just a few ideas to show more of Darth vaders Domination and evil that he brought to the films, So anyways i suggested some ideas, but the rest was great and a great idea you have here, anyways nice idea, hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as suggested more prop stuff like the lit up sabre, and some more darkness like eyes in the backround and such.

[Ketazia and Frisk]

Nice color tone

~~REVIEW~~
Very cool with this i love this for a few reasons actually, first off im a leo by birthday sign so this was kinda neat, second you did fantastic with everything from colortinesto some shades, kinda reminds me of lion king style of characters, even the backrounds cameout well, really nice, i could see you working on some sorta comic style with this, for the mostpart this was pretty good, as for improving onlything i would personally suggest would be maybe some darker tones with lighting and the lions themself, anyways good drawing here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i wrote above, some darker feel would be intersting but from what you have here it was pretty awsome.

toshema responds:

Thanks soo much for your review ^_^ !!