A great idea for a comic
So even though this is B/W it is still nice I do think some colored frames would accent this more, each frame brings on some new elements that makes it better A great idea for a comic indeed, and thats why I really enjoyed this film you have created here, and really would love to see you continue this one and maybe even longer versions it was a great web comic.
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I do think some colored frames would accent this more
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