XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Baleful encounter]

Intense

And this here was an intense "PIECE" I love the creature in action I think you should have added a swoosh as his arm comes across and also the backround characterers eyes would be glowing would be a plus, but besides all that this was pretty good work here.

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I think you should have added a swoosh as his arm comes across and also the backround characterers eyes would be glowing would be a plus

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[MerMay2018 (render)]

OKAY

You wrote at the bottom this was still in progress, but what part is? Is the coloring additons the progress? Because this is in serious need of coloring but if you plan to keep it black and white then work on the exposure elements of the whites as they all seem too grey and are getting lost inside with the blacks and shades. I love the design of the mermaid type girl and the circle border background behind her. I think that alone is good work, but the coloring and shading do need to be improved on.

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As stated above, just work on coloring and shading as you progress.

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[Pixelated Vodka]

Cool style

Wow I love the pinks and how the "PIXEL" blends out, wish this was a tad bit larger would have allowed for much more detail in the backround, So these pixel styles are always great sometimes I can never tell if its pixel or not but for the mostpart this is really good and has a very artistic style of art and you can never go wrong with pixel art so its a "PLEASURE" to review this art piece you have here.

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wish this was a tad bit larger would have allowed for much more detail in the backround

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[A Shinto Shrine]

Fantastic

I love the "ELEMENT" here a very sharp and pleasent design "HERE" Would have been nice if a rsbbit was hopping around maybe even some shine and sparkle comming off the stone or something like that, Fantastic use of art in this one, This one kinda blew me away so very nice work on this one, and this is the sort of stuff that I have really come to love. you have Captured something great with some Flair and you have some good insight on the art world, so nice job here. And here is the Extended part of the review, And Now that we have most of this review done, Just remember that I have enjoyed your work here and do look forward to more of what you may have in store for us. Finally something decent from the art portal.

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Would have been nice if a rsbbit was hopping around maybe even some shine and sparkle comming off the stone or something like that

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[SUBWOOFY [L]]

Funky

I love the use of color here. Nice patterns and details and textures. I love the way it captures your attention with vibrant bright colors. So this was a nice charterer you have here, I like the armor and the background the most but I would suggest some deeper use of effects of glows and lighting. I would even add a border to this one for sure. The main issue tho here, is that your lines are very very pixelate and they need to be smoothed out, unless you want this effect, but it tends to make your artwork seem sloppy. Good work tho and good eye for color.

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Just fix your issue with pixelated lines and more effects inside this.

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megawolf77 responds:

The pixelated style is intentional since this was drawn on MS Paint with just a mouse. I'd love to add the anti-alias effect, but I let the pixels stay for aesthetic purpose of MS Paint work.

I still appreciate your comment!

[Helo]

OK

Ok well I do like this one and this one here is very cute. The typo you have seems to be intentional and the overall look of your creature guy is pretty neat. I like the headphones they are wearing and the look they have in their face. I think the color you used for the guy himself is nice and the way you had him hide his face with the sign was actually really cute, and given the fact that the sign is not spelled correctly, the face hiding with the typo just added some extra cuteness, like the guy doesn't know or understand in that innocent way. The background here is lacking and it would have been really nice if you did something here other than just using a white background. I think that white can work at times, but there is so much of that going on in this. Why not add more to the background, maybe a setting or a theme? I also think since he is wearing headphones that you should add up some music symbols to make it appear that this guy is listening to some music, because otherwise it seems like he is just having them on without a purpose. Maybe you intended to do that and maybe the headphone are more of hat, I am not sure, but I do like the look and think the music symbols would really add something here. As always, your original font and text are nice to see again and I do like the idea you had of not spelling it right with that text. I think overall this was a nice okay piece of art but I hope you add more in the future.

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Please add a background and maybe some music symbols around his head to really make you understand the character more.

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Cyberdevil responds:

You keep going about those backgrounds. XD Sometimes they just aren't meant to be... but I shall respect your opinions. Thanks for the review!

[Madnessgrounds]

ok

So not sure what to think of this one it does have an interesting "ACTION-SCENE" here with lots going on, my advice for this piece is that you need to ad more form to your characters more backround detail and take more time with your designs and creations, just an idea to think about.

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my advice for this piece is that you need to ad more form to your characters more backround detail and take more time with your designs and creations

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[Relax]

Entertaining

I like the "SHADING" on this, would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here, This particular entry of the comic is pretty good, you have a nice humor that you bring to this, I like your ideas here and you made this one a very enjoyble comic, its a greats series and cant wait to see much more of your work but mainly enjoy this comic for what it is.

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would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here

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[Hose]

Nice

A nice submission if you ask me not your best one of the series but it has its ups and downs and really comes alive later in the end so for me I liked it but didnt jump out at me till later but still some nice work on the series and another adventure in the books, Really nice work though.

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Wish these were in color and had some more backround detail

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[Colours]

A nifty design

Nice use of color here maybe you could have made some color more brighter then others and more with a glow effect, So this was a nifty design you have here, its always amazing to see the different design paterns people can come up with and how much depth there can be, and with this one you added some nice depth and detail and that alone is why I liked this design of yours so nice work there.

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maybe you could have made some color more brighter then others and more with a glow effect

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