XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #23 Back Blaze]

LOL

well this one here, this one made me laugh and I really did enjoy the simple stick man's expressions of being on fire and "RUNNING". I think the flames themselves were good and the use of the text under it just made it more hilarious. It felt more like a comic panel and that was nice to me. I do find a border would have been more helpful and maybe would have brought this all together in a more comic way. I do think you give solid advice tho, back up your back ups.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border around this would be nice and make it more like a comic

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I can actually see that black panel-like border around this one. :) Would be perfect. Glad you got a laugh out of it too (and if you haven't heard of the company they're very much recommended)!

[Inktober 2018 - No. EX - Chris]

Very nice

So this was pretty good the black and white drawing itself is pretty amazing I would love some color but that might not be the intent, So I would like to say that I found this pretty interesting it was differant and has a unique feel to it, so I was glad to have found this, I like your style here its a good piece, and kinda jumped out at me. but thats what made this all the more interesting. And now as I come to the end here, I must say it was a pleasure checking this one out, a unique and interesting design you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love some color but that might not be the intent

~X~

[Sweater]

Here we are again

And boy do your comic submissions just pop up in the most random places, but anyways this particular episode had a lot to cover and had some excitemeant within it and made me chuckle a few times and for that it gets my respect, so very nice work here, keep it going strong its all good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this it was a fantastic entry.

~X~

[Snakes & Ladders]

Awsome

Wow really love what you did here with color and backround detail, Another awsome piece these must take you really long to produce or too easy but regardless you always bring some good adventure to the table and I have come to enjoy your work very much infact these adventures in this comic series grew on me as I was not always a fan, but am now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more great entries like this one.

~X~

[Smoking]

I really like this

This was really cool I really like the character here kind of out of a scary and creepy movie you have here and I love the shading and deep texture so very welldone and love the detail you have added here, even your backround work was really impressive, so keep up the great characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught it was fine wouldnt mind more darker backround and feel about it.

~X~

[Inktober #15 A Bowling Baller]

Cool

So here was a cool character really nice original and detailed and new idea to use a bowling ball to be someone's head. You have a very simple and plain yellow background that was very bland besides that cool character and I don't think the brown outfit works with a yellow background since they are so close in hue it seems too similar, but overall this is good and not too bad. I would say I really will remember the character you've created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background details that is a new color and maybe has shading.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm I think the one color that doesn't really match here is the blue, but good notes!

[It's Over]

Nice art piece

So this is a nice "ART" piece I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more, this was some nice artwork here and I really liked it and was some nice detail, theres a alot of blank space in there and that was the intense.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more

~X~

SPLATTERBRAIN responds:

Was gonna put the shadow of a giant hand coming down on him as if to press him out of existence, but I felt it'd be too much

[Feel the Wind]

Very nice

Now here was something a little different and something more unique I like what you did with the tree here and like how you added some birds in the distance I do think adding more props such as birds and maybe adding to this some leaves just floating around from the wind or something very nice brush strokes here and once again another beautiful painting so nice job indeed and I do look forward to more of your painting style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added props like a floating leaf or two

~X~

[Assassination]

Wow nice

And here was something nice I love background work and you did a pretty amazing job on this city scene now I do think more sparkles and shines are needed like more lights glowing and his weapon could have some more shine about that as well but overall this was some good paining work I have e really grown to enjoy your paintings and glad I had the chance to review some of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter city lights and maybe even a shine on his weapon

~X~

[Smiling Man]

Notbad

So a smiling man nice idea I wonder where that idea came from but regardless this was some nice strokes of paint and his smile is pretty good I was impressed with the brush strokes on this one I do think some birds or a sun light would have fit well in the background here but overall this was a really nice piece here anyways keep at it and keep showcasing your work for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and such

~X~