XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hope he was a Lefty!]

Very nice

so this was cool, I love all the detail in this one with all sorts of elements and some very good detail great characters and a great action scene here, would love some more lighting effects on this but overall this was great, so keep up the fantastic work.

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would love some more lighting effects on this but overall this was great

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[[C] Bdo Witch]

Nice

And this was a nice one I love her holding the torch or staff those crystals at top seem like they could have much more glow at the top I think even a sparkle would suffice the black background is because of a commission but would have been nice with some background detail or even in this case some lighting effects but. Besides all that this was a nice art piece you have here so make more for us soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle

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[12-13-16]

Another beautiful one

And here was another beautiful piece of art with a great charchter love the linework here and I especially love that this one has some background to it I think you could add into the background with either some shading or shines regardless you do some really nice work here and I enjoy all the detail you ad into your characters so very nice job on this piece and all your work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shades or shines in background would be nice

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[Lurantis Gijinka]

Cute

So this was a very cute piece here you really showed such a beautiful pose here and it shines I love the color theme here too as this was a beautiful piece of artwork you really have me enjoying this piece I understand the black background but wish you would have added some type of scene or detail back there but anyways you presented a very nice piece of art and charchter here

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As mentioned just above in review

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[[C] Ifrene]

Very nice

And here was something beautiful you have prepared something really nice and a nice view point as well you have shows some nice detail in the character and the outfit with some good effort

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Some added background work would be nice

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[Castle Crashers Demake vs. the World Wallpaper]

Another great one

So here was another great action scene you have made I love the Sprite work as always you really do make them shine and that's what I really love about these

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A masterpiece so no changes needed

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[Cartoon Network!]

Cool

So this was cool I use to watch the cartoon network for a bit and its notbad at all, you presented the cartoon network well on this one so nice job indeed here I really like it but I do wish you added more in the backround or maybe a frame or border like a poster pin up.

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wish you added more in the backround or maybe a frame or border like a poster

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[Nuclear Power Plant [Game Asset]]

Nice

This one here is okay, It does need a bit of textures and overall shading. You have the ability to make something 3D, but now you need to add your elements of textures, shading, and even some light. You have gradiants going on here, and that can work for shading, but you do need a lot more. Mostly you need more details and textures will help you with that the most. I do find this to be good work tho. I know most 3D images don't render backgrounds, but if you do use this for a game, do not forget your background, or it will feel incomplete. As far as shaping for the structures goes, you did excellent, nice symmetrical shapes and frames.

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Needs some details and do not forget to add a background for your game.

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jsabbott responds:

Thanks for the response. I am really a modeller and I just haven't gotten the hang of lighting or texturing yet. This model was made for a tutorial so I'm not going to be using it in real life. :)

[Like if you miss the new Cartoon Network :'(]

Notbad

So the artwork itself was notbad I would have to say my childhood was somewhat different as it had such greats as smurfs, spiderman the simpsons stuff like that but I know what you mean, your artwork here is pretty good and I like the meaning of it so keep up the good work.

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No changes on this one.

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[(Gift Art) Cap'n! (Star Trek Fanart)]

Good effort

ok so as a fan myself of star trek I found this to be fun, I like how you have it set up the face in contrast to the background. The background is a great space one, but maybe next time add in a ship or symbol to give it a bit more of a completed look, as his head just now seems to be floating in space haha, but anyways great piece I really liked this. I do think your line work needs to be a bit polished, I think if you have an art program just try to smooth out the lines and giving it a bit more of a depth, but your background is spot on in terms of star trek and his clothing matches up that as well, but good job.

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So just work on your line art and add a bit more to the background behind the image, nice work

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