XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober day 22 (trail)]

Me again

Lol sorry if I'm hounding your work but I do like your energy and vibe you bring to the portal. And this line work is just so beautiful very nice indeed I like what you have done here and you really filled out the canvus simple yet not so simple I would how long it takes you to do one of these pieces anyways no changes needed in this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned it's fine as is. It's great as it's own creation and no changes are needed

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Haha, thanks! This is one of my favorites, that I've done. I love The Oregon Trail. My inktober entries took me about an hour a piece.

[Lupin III - fanart]

Wow nice

Once again you amaze me with your sense of uniqueness and just being different and that's what you have shown me here with this old style like drawing reminds me of something from like the 50s and such but anyways no improvements on this it's brilliant

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it's a fantastic piece all on it's own

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[porko rosso]

Great shades

Very nice work here I like the shade work I like the detail and there's a small story here with this guy flying around so I do think you can improve on something like this it's a beautiful piece but maybe ad a sparkle on the window maybe even his helmet

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine

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[girl]

Very nice detail

Your artwork is different then others I seen the hairwork and line work is really good especially with the hair those eyes are different and unique and bring something different to the table so very nice work here it's a unique piece of art style you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's very unique and does not need any changes

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[inktober day 17 (graceful)]

Very good

I am really enjoying your work you are very well with the linework and you don't need color to enhance stuff like this I love the reflection on this piece again done with out color Wich is a plus in it's own right I think the only addition you could possibly do would be so a mirror or wall on back end of this but probably not needed either but anyways nice work on this and all your work hope to see more stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some wall or mirror on back end

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Thank you. October was a very rough month for me last year, in my personal life. Most of my art was helping to get out the emotions I was battling. There weren't backgrounds in most of the art, because it stood alone, like me. I wanted people to feel my feelings. I'm doing better now, so I think backgrounds will start finding their way into my art. :-)

[Horns in Pink Hair]

Love the detail

This one has some very nice detail the colors are beyond great I saved this one such a great pose and great expression on the face so very nice job here I could see some more work on the background like maybe dripping blood or something along them lines but for what it is it's an awesome piece here keep making beautiful pieces such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood on the background would be very cool

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BONESofBURIED responds:

Yeah I thought this piece could benefit from a background, but I was low on time. Thanks

[clouds]

Hmmm

Well this was interesting the clouds do make this interesting and you do bring a nice style about it all the clouds do look very realistic and just a very real look and great visual to them so for that alone I like what you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make some birds and a sunburst

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[Inktober Day 14 - BIRDens at the Cafe]

Once again beautiful

And as always you bring some very nice artistic style to the portal always with something unique and something different always a great style of art this was an example of that talent I love the light color I love the little details here and there the only thing I think this is missing is that it needs another outter borders of the same color brown but that's just my view on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An outter border or frame along the edges maybe brown color just to match up with the centerpiece

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[Jump Up, Super Star!]

Very nice

I like the idea of this and the glow is nice on this one I think this one could use more of that glow effect maybe if you ran this through Photoshop and had more of a glow effect especially around the edges and that would give off a nice touch and feel about it but anyways nice idea here nice element and nice effect so keep doing what you do and bring more ideas to the portal such as this fine piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow effect for sure

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[Widowmaker Summer Games Skin 2017]

Wow so sharp

This was very sharp looking I like the details like the tattoo but it looks too perfect you should give some of the details more of a realistic look like the tattoo and also some glare off the water would be a plus of things and ideas but those are some small ideas that could help and make this even better then it is but I like the sharpness and fresh colors of this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare on he ocean and some more realistic details as mentioned

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