XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mogleo!]

Nice

I like this very nifty looking the text in the bubble was hard to read maybe because of the view of the camera and that sword could use a sparkle at the tip of it just some little ideas that could help improve on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a couple of points of improvment

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[Seagulls]

Wow

I love what you do with color here it all just flows with vibrant touches of color and all the little details and props make up the difference as well as the story and that ending was funny so you put together everything in it's ever growing success so nice work here as always keep making these awasome comics I wouldn't mind a new main character to come along or even a side charchter maybe even a side pet

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A side charchter pet would be funny

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[Office Party!]

Probably uour best work

So this here is probably your best work to date because you put alot of energy into this and it comes out with a vibrant touch as well as all the colors and charchters the amount of detail is magnificent and the deep color is even better then that so very nice work I love it so keep doing what you do as you have done here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed it's a beautiful piece

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ChazDude responds:

Saying nothing in 'THINGS TO IMPROVE ON' while giving four stars out of five reduces the integrity of this review somewhat.

[Phantom Pumpkin]

I like your style

You have a good style and you seem to enjoy the pumnkin style this was a cool drawing you should as an extra effcets have the eyes light up or something might give it that spooky feeling but I will say that it was a nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Light up the eyes

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[Kupomkin]

Nice work

And you have some nice work here I like the color on this I think you should put some cuts and bruises on the pumnkin to give it more of a realistic feel to it but that's my imput on it you have some nice work though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some bruises and cuts

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[Dapper Pumpkin Spriteling]

Really nice work

And here was some nice work I love the structure of this all now I would love some color even if it was just the head part of this or maybe have the eyes glow somehow but anyways you are very talented and hope to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow in the eyes or the head itself would be nice colored

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[Infinite Shadow]

Love it

Very nice I'm a big fan of dragons and this is cool I love the detail and most of all I like that eye that's the part you should have in color like a green and red or one or the other and would really accent the whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the eye

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[Flinthook Illustration]

Very stylish

So this one has a fresh look fresh print and fresh all the way around now I can see you making that green gem in the middle jump out more with some transparency shine and even a sparkle. Just one idea that may work and would make everything else look good too so try it out but regardless love the freshness of this whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shine and sparkle the green gem a bit

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[Vixi]

Very well done

Wow first off the colors here are fantastic and even mystical that deep red is so very nice it allows for the shine to come out a bit more I like it and I would even go with even more shine points and even brighter and as for the background somewhat darker might be better but not too dark but with all that said you have a very good design her nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker backround and more shine

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[Borkshire's Baby Raptor]

Wow

Wow what can I say this one is pretty wickedly good with detail and very nice sketches here love the detail and love the shades aswell you are an outstanding artist I would love to see some color added maybe just the dragon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like just the dragon

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