XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pink & Blue]

Very well done

You have some very well done texture and a great design behind this one it's well done very nice work indeed love the cloud like feel around it. I do think even with that cooud you could still ad some borders or frames on the edges so nice just an idea to think about for improvement but with all that said I don't have much more that can be said about this it's a solid piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames on the edges

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[7]

Simplistic

So this was simplistic but then it wasn't but I like the shadows here it does seem the back end of the area needs more props like little things here and there maybe some more men in the distance or something that would be kind of neat and it would fill in some of those blank spots or gaps and holes just something you can think about and really go with some ideas there anyways nice designs here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some filling in of some blank areas

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[3]

Some nice pixel art

And well what do we have here with this one it is something nice something different and a little bit pixelated I like that you have a nice idea here and a nice style about this with some cool shapes and colors really nice idea here that you made work pretty well with all the simplistic to completely nice visuals so really nice work here I can see you adding some shine to some of the edges on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shines on edges and corners

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[Cream]

I like this kind of stuff

Now this is what I call creative not sure how you got this one to form out like that but this is one of those types that you could really push some shine especially on the top part as it's first falling with the drip so more shine on the goo and some sparkles in the background but anyways a very creative style here with some unique design to it all anyways nice creative creation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very creative style here as some shine and sparkle

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[Portrait of Mar]

Very detailed

This was very detailed stuff I just love the fine work on line detail and especially the shading so well done so impressive so very good it's almost perfect I think all you need here is some color maybe some shine and sparkle on the glasses that would be pretty cool must have took you a long time to do this one but it's very well done lots of talent here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the glasses and maybe even some color

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[Batman - Work In Progress]

This is nice

It's nice to see how the progress is I think one step further you could have made some more photos of the progress in steps that would have been a great idea but it's still nice to see how it's done and you have the perfect work area with nice lighting very clean I like that but with all that said there's not much else I can review about this piece so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing was maybe more pics of a step by step progress

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Dry-Art responds:

Thanks, and sure I'll try to take more WIP pics next time.

[Gamster]

This was nice

Well this was cute I like the glasses so this was a cute charchter I think the background should be lighter like a great there should be more texture in his green clothing and maybe some shine on the glasses like a sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small additional changes that may help as mentioned above

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Polybox responds:

It actually doesn't have a background :D

[Internet IRL - Jazza's COTM - Professor Google]

This finished project

And here we have the finished project you show all the details and all the talent really comes alive I'm really impressed with the end results here I still think you should have a light beaming down on the chalkboard of some sort but the color and textuture you got here is really good I like your talent and your style of art work anyways nice detail and nice colors here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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Dry-Art responds:

Thanks! I haven't really tried different digital effects, but I'll definitely experiment with it soon!

[Professor Google - WIP]

Very nice style

And another great piece from you and a nice style of art I like how you showed some nice progress of how it's done and the progress was very nice the color and texture on finishing points was great I think in the class room you can add more lighting though but also maybe not needed but besides that this was a really nice piece of work with some real talent here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly some lighting effect

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[Batman - Jazza's COTM]

Now that is unique

Now here you have some very unique idea here and I don't think I have seen anything done like this at all on newgrounds so this was a pleasure the process is probably pretty intense and time consuming so very nice job indeed would love color but honestly this doesn't call for it and you have done pretty good with all that you have done here as for improvement I'm really stuck on this because it's on it's own creation and has it's own style so I'll leave this one alone

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this is a style and creative art of it's own kind

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Dry-Art responds:

Thank you!