XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

['Project Apples']

Another cool piece

So here was another cool piece of art no animation this time but I found it to be pretty interesting I do like the use of color you use and do like the view point of how it comes in I do however think you could ad some shadlings to the apples maybe even some shine on the apples and that's just a small idea too but overall this was a nice art piece simple but still enjoyble for the simplicity of it all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight shading and shine on the apples

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[Rooster Walk]

Cute

So I found this piece to be really cute the walk cycle is notbad and flows pretty well I like the color and how the animation reflects off the animation and makes it a pretty decent walk cycle going on here now I think this would be just right if you had added some background detail to this piece with maybe some props maybe others walking birds or something along them lines

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background elements

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[The Great Below.]

Nice work

So this was cool the small animation adds to this piece with it beeing a good action scene the art and animation together are really nice together I also love what you did with the trees here some nice work indeed I like the element you have here it's almost like if you are telling a story here even I think more elements in the background like small details maybe more distant trees and stuff on the ground would be a plus on this piece but with all that said it was a very nice art piece of work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few details as mentioned above

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[Fund The Charity Room's Platformania!]

Nice

So this was a nice piece here it looks like an intro to a game or something I like the animation you put into this and like the art detail it has a fresh look and a very nice visual with some good charchter detail on top of that so as some form of improvment I would say ad some more sparkles more shines more glistering shine all about even on charchter work just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some shines and sparkles

~X~

[My Lizards And I]

Very nice

So this was another very nice "PIECE" love the bearded dragons, the painting was very pleasent on the eyes and this was a very beautifull visual, so nice work here, I cant find any need for any changes as it was just a beautifull piece as is, anyways keep up the brilliant work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I cant find any need for any changes as it was just a beautifull piece as is

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[Napoleon and his girl - COTM Feb'18 PimpMyClassic]

Neat

This is cool and has one of those rag doll effects to the body parts and characters. Lots of nice shades and coloring. I love love that you actually have a backgrouond and use the space to tell a story here and not just focus on the characters. You even have a nice neat border here. I like this very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change, good job here.

~X~

[Alicca]

Beautiful

Now this was an elegant piece I love her "EXPRESSION" on this kind of like she is looking deep into something the sunlight was nice behind her, I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there, but anyways nice work here I like this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there

~X~

MatthewLopz responds:

this is such an old piece lol

[Neutrality]

Awsome as drawing

This is one of my "FAVES" from all of your work I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this, So here was once again another great find of a black and white drawing here, good shading and a stylish visual, even though no color here its still pretty amazing, so props to you on some nice drawing and sketch here now maybe one day adding some color or even just a little would be a good improvement for this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this

~X~

[Raiden!]

Subtle

So this was notbad it was a subtle peice of art good toony cartoony here, I think the white "WORDING" blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice, but other then that this was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the white Font wording blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice

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