XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Very nice

So clay works is always something nice and you have presented some nice clay characters here I love that you added a bit of backround here, I think all this needs is some shine on some parts of the characters, but you have created and presented something really unique here.

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all this needs is some shine on some parts of the characters

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[Falling man]

Brilliant

So this was pretty brilliant here some nice "SCENE" here I like the lighting even I think the lighting should come down more like a beam of light and maybe even deeper within the element to show off certain details here and there just for extra measures and such, anyways really good and "SOLID" work you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the lighting should come down more like a beam of light and maybe even deeper within the element to show off certain details here and there just for extra measures and such

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[Pastel Girl]

This was nifty

So this was a nifty "IDEA" you had here I like the pastel idea I think you could have some more colored pastels in there, but the idea is really good you should make a series of characters in pastel style, but besides that this was pretty good and I enjoyed it so nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have some more colored pastels in there, you should make a series of characters in pastel style.

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[Azuberry (2016)]

Cute and funny

This was cute and made me giggle. I dont think I would eat her, but her hair does look yummy. And you gave it an entertaining value by making me chuckle so I was happy with it very well designed and drawn out. The colors are good and the coloring from line to line is good too. I wish you didn't have so much white space tho, because a lot of white is in your character and that can get lost in the art to the background washing it out. I would add a bit more of the vinagrette style background or a full background here to get rid of as much white space as you can to really make her white details pop and not get lost in translation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A background to lower the amount of white space

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lukisart responds:

Yeah I am quite afraid of designing backgrounds XD

[Succubus Meloetta]

Cute

Really cute character here love what you did with the "HAIR" here its very flowing and vibrant I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look, I would suggest some backround detail also, but regardless this was a nice character work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look

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ZedrinBot responds:

That doesn't seem like an improvement, just an idea suggestion (I don't think it'd fit with my intentions or would have a solid impact on the piece personally, especially considering this was a commission where the commissioner paid for a set level of detail).

Thanks for the review, though.

[Shadowrun - Suwi]

Wow nice

Now here was something really nice I "LOVE" the this character design and you gave her some nice expression too, wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good, you have presented something really nice here and it was a pleasent piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good

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MLeth responds:

Thank you! Although I would argue that the lack of a background is a choice (it was not part of the commission) rather than a flaw to improve on.

[Cartoon Girl]

Cute and cartoony

So this was cute and "CARTOONY" you have some nice "COLOR" the little puppy was cute as was your little character here even the backround had some nice color about it so I really found no changes that need to be added here as its a nice art piece, I look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really found no changes that need to be added here

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[Volpina]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I actually like these animals so that was interesting way you made one into a lady. I wonder if you are a fury fan? You have some decent skills with the brush work as you blended from color to color well and kept that animal fur look and a good amount of detail, the only thing I would suggest would be ad some more background details, the green is interesting and draws you to focus on the animals lady but it needs a bit more, or if not, try a border around the entire piece to just balance out your white space. I did like your name above the tail tho, that was a nice way to sign off the art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background with more detail or try a border to get more white space off of this, but good job

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lukisart responds:

Thank you for your advice!!!

[Phoenix]

Nice

I love this, it almost reminds me of a dragon but your "PHOENIX" is really good the pencil portion is very nice and welldone, I feel like you should have flames or a fire glow on the outter shell of the phoenix or something like that, regardless you have an amazing deawing here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have flames or a fire glow on the outter shell of the phoenix or something like that

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[Imaginary friend]

A nice B/W

Maybe you should ad some backround detail like some simple props or a city view or even just a tree, And this was a nice black and white drawing and sketch you have here, I love the detail and effort you have put into this piece, there is some "GOOD-ENERGY" surrounding it and your deep effort "SHOWCASE" there hard work so really nice job on this fantastic piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe you should ad some backround detail like some simple props or a city view or even just a tree

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