XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Helo]

OK

Ok well I do like this one and this one here is very cute. The typo you have seems to be intentional and the overall look of your creature guy is pretty neat. I like the headphones they are wearing and the look they have in their face. I think the color you used for the guy himself is nice and the way you had him hide his face with the sign was actually really cute, and given the fact that the sign is not spelled correctly, the face hiding with the typo just added some extra cuteness, like the guy doesn't know or understand in that innocent way. The background here is lacking and it would have been really nice if you did something here other than just using a white background. I think that white can work at times, but there is so much of that going on in this. Why not add more to the background, maybe a setting or a theme? I also think since he is wearing headphones that you should add up some music symbols to make it appear that this guy is listening to some music, because otherwise it seems like he is just having them on without a purpose. Maybe you intended to do that and maybe the headphone are more of hat, I am not sure, but I do like the look and think the music symbols would really add something here. As always, your original font and text are nice to see again and I do like the idea you had of not spelling it right with that text. I think overall this was a nice okay piece of art but I hope you add more in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Please add a background and maybe some music symbols around his head to really make you understand the character more.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

You keep going about those backgrounds. XD Sometimes they just aren't meant to be... but I shall respect your opinions. Thanks for the review!

[Madnessgrounds]

ok

So not sure what to think of this one it does have an interesting "ACTION-SCENE" here with lots going on, my advice for this piece is that you need to ad more form to your characters more backround detail and take more time with your designs and creations, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice for this piece is that you need to ad more form to your characters more backround detail and take more time with your designs and creations

~X~

[Relax]

Entertaining

I like the "SHADING" on this, would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here, This particular entry of the comic is pretty good, you have a nice humor that you bring to this, I like your ideas here and you made this one a very enjoyble comic, its a greats series and cant wait to see much more of your work but mainly enjoy this comic for what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here

~X~

[Hose]

Nice

A nice submission if you ask me not your best one of the series but it has its ups and downs and really comes alive later in the end so for me I liked it but didnt jump out at me till later but still some nice work on the series and another adventure in the books, Really nice work though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish these were in color and had some more backround detail

~X~

[Colours]

A nifty design

Nice use of color here maybe you could have made some color more brighter then others and more with a glow effect, So this was a nifty design you have here, its always amazing to see the different design paterns people can come up with and how much depth there can be, and with this one you added some nice depth and detail and that alone is why I liked this design of yours so nice work there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you could have made some color more brighter then others and more with a glow effect

~X~

[Punk Rosalina]

Love the color

So the "COLOR" here was beaufully done, that bubble gum in her mouth was a nice touch I think you could have had a sparkle come off the edge of it just for some extra measure, This just Radiates creativity, A decent entry that you have herem I like this piece as it was differant and thats what I tend to look for, so it was a nice find, but anyways make more stuff like this. So Kudo's to you on a fine piece of art and creativity, some nice effort seems to have gone into this. I like your stamp of Expression on your art style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that bubble gum in her mouth was a nice touch I think you could have had a sparkle come off the edge of it just for some extra measure

~X~

[[Gift] Bartholomew the Goodra]

Very smooth

I love the "COLOR" on this character design you have here the backround was somewhat bland but maybe you can ad some sort of detail or backdrop just an idea to ad onto it, and more shine on the character wouldnt hurt, but all in all you have done a nice art piece here with some really smooth art color here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround was somewhat bland but maybe you can ad some sort of detail or backdrop just an idea to ad onto it, and more shine on the character wouldnt hurt

~X~

[Fishing]

You Illustrate adventure

There was good "ADVENTURE" here seems like it ended short though seems like there could have been more to the story, So You Illustrate adventure with this episode and it shows off well, your characters shine in this one and you bring out the detail a little bit more on this one and thats a cool thing, A very entertaining part of the comic here, this comic keeps on going and going lol, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like it ended short though seems like there could have been more to the story

~X~

[Bending The Rule]

Love this

Ok well this one here is pretty good and very sexy. I love the way the girl is positioned, it leaves for a classy and sexy appeal to the character. The story you wrote to go with this is also interesting and give you more context. I think the body positioning does need work tho and maybe add more to the background other than that big black ceiling. I like the trunk being there to go with the story, but you could have an office background to fit with your office setting. Overall a good job and hope you do more naked art like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add an office background to fit with the setting and context of the story

~X~

[Nuts]

Yes, nice

Very nice work on this one I do think some added color would go a long ways and really improve on this, I was pleased to find another episode to this fine comic series you have here, it always keeps me interested and you always have a way of making it funny and exciting so very well done here today and on all your comic episodes, I look for more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added color would go a long ways and really improve on this

~X~