XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cartoony Alula]

This was cute

So here was a "CUTE" piece very adorble and cute as mentioned I love all the colors I do think you need more patterens and shapes in the backround more depth in the backround detail, other then that this was an amazing art piece here and I was glad to have reviewed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you need more patterens and shapes in the backround more depth in the backround detail

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[Unattended]

Fun times

Cant go wrong with "GHOSTS" These characters are always a fun and amazing blast of fun and entertaining enough to give off a good chuckle here and there and thats what I have really come to enjoy, this is a Fantastic comic series you have here, this particular one it ends just so well and leaves me with a smile.

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you should make more ghost entries

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[Chains]

Awsome work as always

And here we are with another awsome piece of comic, and this one bringing in some amusing and always so funny moments while these are not long by any means you bring a sense, of balance in humor and adventure from the story and thats what I really like about this and alot of your comic work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Chainsaw lol make more of these

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[Anzu]

Very artistic

So this was very "ARTISTIC" I really like the portrait piece you have here some really nice talent and a great expression of the character itself the backround seemed like it could have had more color in the back end but overall this was pretty amazing work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround seemed like it could have had more color in the back end

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[Dude]

D00d!

Do it dood, this is great, this is very detailed in the character desing, but why is this not digital? I do not see much paper work from you, but it would appear to be an all paper drawing and work that isn't done by computer. How did you go about this decision? I wonder, because you've been so digital in the past. The gear is amazing with your details and line work, but the body is very very off. The hand is so huge! But maybe he has a big hand? I think if you wanted to just show big gear, there is a way to do that, by making the gear seem a bit thicker and the hand doesn't get any smaller, that would have achived your effect much better in my eyes. The face seems a bit lost and the neck isn't really there. I think he should have a neck and the expression of this dude's face is a little barren, almost emotionaless. I'd add more emotion to the face and give a neck to boot. I think color would also benefit in this piece to show off the different type of armour and maybe a background as well, but for a doodle of a dude, this was just fine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, work on the size of his hand, work on his facial expressions, and maybe more of a neck for this dude, dude.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well before I started with computers it was all paper, so this was actually the kind of content I made way before that aforementioned digital past. :) Would love to do more hand-drawn work though, it's just easier with digital these days. Yupp, proportions and angles were pretty off, but I'm still pretty happy with the detail otherwise, drawing age considered! Thanks for reviewing!

[Monster under the bed]

This was cool

So this was kind of cool not sure what the yellow backround was meant for but seems like it was too bright maybe a dark grey might work even better on this piece, but there was some nice detail and a nice character even, so nice work indeedm hope you make more stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A darker backround

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[Anger]

An awsone black and white

I love the "BRIGHT" lines here I think some sort of border or frame on this canvus piece would be nice, So this here was an awsome black and white drawing the lines are good the design of it is welldone and overall this was just some nice detail and it being in black and white is always a plus as it shows off original detail and style, before any color was added.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some sort of border or frame on this canvus piece would be nice

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[Macademi Wasshoi Falce FanArt]

Very nice

So this was a nice and "ALURRING" piece a nice "POSE" she is in the onlything lacking here is some backround detail or patteren and I think you could ad onto it even some simple props would do, but anyways nice character here and I had fun reviewing this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the onlything lacking here is some backround detail or patteren and I think you could ad onto it even some simple props would do

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[Funky Dude]

Funky?

I am sorry but where is the funk? He needs to be getting down to some funky fresh beats if he has the funky. I don't even know what you were going with this one, but I do like the character. He has a personality, with those lost teeth and wide eyed smile. I love all the weapons he has and the details on them. I think the thing at the bottom is tacks? I don't really know. I'd make a point to make that a little more clear when you're adding something so small, just give more details or more text for realization of what the item is. I think that the one arm is far far too long for his body. I mean, it just comes out of no-where and then his other one is kept inside. I know you wanted him to extended his arm to hold things, but it seems very off proportions compared to the other arm. I think you really need to work on body positions of the characters you create originally, but nothing too bad, just for arms in this one. I think the overall body and character you've created in nice, but I would have loved to see this in color or with a background. You would really have spiced this up from just a doodle to a nice art submission going the extra mile in detail and colorization. Overall I do like the characters that you come up with tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, and fix the size of that extended arm.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Funky as in modern and stylish in an unconventional or striking way and/or strongly musty. ;)

Yupp, those are tacks! Of the Ouch TM brand. You know, you're delving into ancient work with this one, so I do know there's improvement potential but I probably won't be polishing these old ones. :) It's just fun to look back at at this point. Glad you liked the character though!

[Writer's Block]

Very entertaining

This was well "EXECUTED" onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail, Well what can I say that I have not said you bring so much laughs and chuckles my way aswell as the way to many fans and I have become an instant fan of your work here, the adventure continues on with all these characters and stories so hope you always make these as they are just so darn fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail

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