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[Funky Dude]

Funky?

I am sorry but where is the funk? He needs to be getting down to some funky fresh beats if he has the funky. I don't even know what you were going with this one, but I do like the character. He has a personality, with those lost teeth and wide eyed smile. I love all the weapons he has and the details on them. I think the thing at the bottom is tacks? I don't really know. I'd make a point to make that a little more clear when you're adding something so small, just give more details or more text for realization of what the item is. I think that the one arm is far far too long for his body. I mean, it just comes out of no-where and then his other one is kept inside. I know you wanted him to extended his arm to hold things, but it seems very off proportions compared to the other arm. I think you really need to work on body positions of the characters you create originally, but nothing too bad, just for arms in this one. I think the overall body and character you've created in nice, but I would have loved to see this in color or with a background. You would really have spiced this up from just a doodle to a nice art submission going the extra mile in detail and colorization. Overall I do like the characters that you come up with tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, and fix the size of that extended arm.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Funky as in modern and stylish in an unconventional or striking way and/or strongly musty. ;)

Yupp, those are tacks! Of the Ouch TM brand. You know, you're delving into ancient work with this one, so I do know there's improvement potential but I probably won't be polishing these old ones. :) It's just fun to look back at at this point. Glad you liked the character though!

[Writer's Block]

Very entertaining

This was well "EXECUTED" onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail, Well what can I say that I have not said you bring so much laughs and chuckles my way aswell as the way to many fans and I have become an instant fan of your work here, the adventure continues on with all these characters and stories so hope you always make these as they are just so darn fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail

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[Under The Weather]

Nice entry

I am loving the "ENHANCED" graphics in this one some really nice work here and loved the end resluts here too, And here we are with another nice entry actually more then nice entry you have a brilliant one, the whole series is brilliant and I know I have said this before but this comic series has balance of great characters great humor and fun endings, a whole awsome adventure rolled into one amazing entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should bring this style of detail to all your comic pieces.

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[MineCraft: Can you dig it?]

Nice

So this was another cool piece "MINECRAFT" yes indeed im a fan of this game and this visual here that you have presented is perfect, as my tip here I think that the red stone there should have a nice sparkle to it, but thats just an idea to ponder on, anyways good stuff as always the talent shows off well with your art style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as my tip here I think that the red stone there should have a nice sparkle to it

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[This IS my happy face]

He seems very interested

Lol ok maybe he is not as interested as thaught and this could be him just waking up in the "MORNING" and this is what represented the "GRUMPY" attitude lol, My tip here might be to ad some backround props or a color theme just an opinion ofcourse, but anyways a nice art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My tip here might be to ad some backround props or a color theme just an opinion ofcourse

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[humans(charactersfor board game)]

Very impressive

wow this was some "NICE" elements of creatures here I like how you "SHOWCASE" them all like in a gallery piece with that I think this should be framed in a fancy border or something, also some extra added shine on the swords and crowns etc, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think this should be framed in a fancy border or something, also some extra added shine on the swords and crowns etc

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[In Mighty I Trust.]

Nice work

So this was pretty cool I like the structure here of the character but seems like his legs need to be slightly bigger the main character I mean and also adding some background detail on this wouldn't hurt either but I will say overall this was a nice art piece with some decent art charchters I think some small changes could make this slightly better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small changes here and there

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[Son Goku - Tale 26.]

Notbad

So this was notbad of some work here I like the black and white theme here and you made it somewhat simple and the linework is pretty good I would suggest maybe some small added color maybe a few lines maybe some background colored details but this was a nice piece here an overall nice drawing and the black and white is notbad at all so I do look forward to much more work from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

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