XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mermaid Me]

Neat

Well notbad at all, and great for a mermaid piece. I see that this one had all the elements like decent characters and whatnot, but the detail in the tail was the best part in terms of effects and style, and great drawing of ocean life aswell. I love the use of lighting in this aswell, you've got ocean underwater light down pretty well, in the future you may find me reviewing your work alot, so hope to see much more soon...

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Most-High-Studios responds:

Thank you very much for your review! I'm always looking for feedback.

[WELCOME TO NEWGROUNDS]

Apocalyptic

This is so good and wonderful. I think this is like a post apocalyptic time where no one is going to the site and the world is ending and over. I think this is a good looking piece for something that looks dead and abandoned. The way you used the browns and dust like colors gave it that old and used and abused feeling. The fact you picked that old orange yellow brown type of coloring really was a smart choice and give off an old photo or deserted area feeling.The kind of feeling you'd want to have here in something that would be abbandoned. The way you have the sign on the skull is cool, so is that skeleton Tom then? The T.F. in the skull really hint that is who you have here laying about all dead and such. Poor Tom...He just wanted his site to be good. I think that the line detailing and the skeleton details are really good and accurate. I think the way you have the people off in the distance is also good and something very interesting. I would have loved to see more detailed on them, but nothing drastic. They are just really blacked out and hard to tell a few things going on with them. I see a weapon and their gear on but more white lines of detail would have been nice, mostly in the facial area, but it isn't too bad as it is now. The vast space they walk in, the desert, is pretty good and looks like sand or a western type scene. I think the spacing here is the best part because you've shown how much there isn't left on newgrounds and balanced it all with the prospects of lots of sand space and the apocalyptic theme. You have really impressed me with this and I would love to see more of this type of submissions from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more detail in the two characters in the background as they seem a bit meshed and lost in certain detail.

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[Here goes nothing...]

Nice

So this was nifty I like the scene here but seems like you could ad some "SHADING" and some added texture in both the backround and the character, I enjoyed your work here though very nice scene going on and some decent artwork aswell, so keep up the nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added texture in both the backround and the character

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[The Cherub Brothers: Chapter 3.7]

Unique

This was interesting brings a good scary feel to things for some reason...I don't know it just reminded me of Schwartz work of scary stories. I love the black and white or dim line work and the overall comic book feeling. I haven't read all the chapters but I am a bit lost only seeing this one, but you have a good ability to write. I would just work on proofreading and maybe add some color to a future comic. Anyways nice entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add color to future works of this

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[purple]

Very welldone

And this was very welldone, love the character design here and i love the backround detail very nice indeed, You bring some good Insight to this piece and you have Captured some interesting visual ideas here, So this one here is pretty awsome, this piece really caught my eye, I like your deep style of detail and what not, it really came out well. I am most impressed with this, But Before I start saying anything the first thing I noticed on here is that it really jumps out at you with a nice unique style, you really do have the skills for great stuff such as this piece, Now that I have that out of the way I have to say you did an impressive job here actually.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Didnt find any changes needed you have presented a beautifull piece of art here.

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cashumeru responds:

you had me expecting some big overarching flaw i might've missed lol, thanks wayne!

[Donna Orechini ("Master Copy")]

Beautifull

So this was absolutly "BEAUTIFUL" you have added so much detail this is an instant fave of mine now I do think some added shine and sparkle to some shine points like the ear piece, but overall this was some really nice work I love the passion and energy you put fourth into this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added shine and sparkle to some shine points like the ear piece

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[Shape of Water - MerMay 2018]

Nice

Notbad at all, kinda different but then again not so different, the use of just using a line to trace out the main character from the movie was neat, and the background was just a good use of the theme the movie represented, especailly the light effect shining down on the face just like you are underwater. But nothing really to note on changing. This one was nice and good to look at.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes to this one, I like it is as is.

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[Scrab remake]

Notbad

I think this is pretty good, but something seems off about it....Not the design or concept but the image itself seems blurred and overworked in certain areas. I think it needs bit of a sharpen and some shading needs to be done. I do like this piece. I like the flow of the scrab into the background very smooth there throwing in some neveda type sceneary was a nice touch. Good effort all around but why does it have abs?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just sharpen this one up a bit.

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Zelgeist responds:

Thank you for a insightful feedback. I appreciate it very much.

It has abs because its torso is supposed to be very human-like. Not utterly like human, but pretty close.

[Quest to somewhere]

This was interesting

I like what you have done here, this was actually a "BEAUTIFULL" piece the scene was a nice sight and seems to have a "STORY" as for improvments I dont think you need any changes its a beautifull piece and a nice element here so props to you on this submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for improvments I dont think you need any changes its a beautifull piece and a nice element

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[Venana]

Bananna

lol I thaught this was actually pretty adorble, I do wish you had some eyes and facial features on this would have been a nice touch up if it did, the artwork on this is very good, the black backround could also use some design or patteren or color base besides the black, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the black backround could also use some design or patteren or color base besides the black, I do wish you had some eyes and facial features on this would have been a nice touch up if it did

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