XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico Day 2018]

Very nice work

So you have some very nice work here love the character design here and love the backround even more, that gun could have a bit of sparkle to it, maybe some added shine and sparkle to it just different points here or there something that could make it jump out at you just a little more, Anyways nice character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the gun.

~X~

[Skate Chick]

Very nice

So this was pretty good the effects of this and the "ANIMATION" was really good, Now the art is great the animation is awsome I think you should have some movment in her body as she is on a board or something like that, besides all that this was a really nice art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have some movment in her body as she is on a board or something like that

~X~

[PicoDayBrawl 2k18]

Nice piece

So this was a nice piece of artwork you have here, love all the different "CHARACTERS" you really do bring out some of the best there was some slight lighting effect on the back end but maybe adding more lighting effect on this with different focus points would be a huge plus. Anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding more lighting effect on this with different focus points would be a huge plus

~X~

[death witch]

Love the style

The outter border piece could be a bit darker or even in some color shade or something, So I have always loved this black and white style but you bring a certain flavor to it making it more then just black and white drawing its talent with ink and pen or paint lol anyways great sketch design here its filled with ideas and imagination, I have really enjoyed this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The outter border piece could be a bit darker or even in some color shade or something

~X~

[Streetfighter pixel boys]

This was nifty

So I have to say that this was pretty nifty, love the streetfighter theme you have going on here, I do think that you could actually ad a bit of "SPARKLE" on some points but thats just an idea and suggestion, anyways good art piece here, keep making great stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some sparkle here or there just off some edge or corner points of focus points I think it would be a nice little effect that would work well for this piece.

~X~

[bird]

Cute

This was a cute piece the "EYES" are really popping out here I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it, but anyways really good character here and its a cute and adorble one, you have some nice linework here on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it

~X~

[Summer Fumetsu]

Deep

I love the deep style here and fresh look the backround pattern or border was nice maybe adding some design to the border would be a nice keye on this and more shine on the hair, I really liked the work you have done here as this was really nice work and I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding some design to the border would be a nice keye on this and more shine on the hair

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[Deep Dreamin']

Artistic

So this was pretty artistic here, love all the colors and all the elements its like space or some artistic splatter of creativity, a very unique and artistic style of work here, I would suggest throwing in even more colors in there, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added meshed colors would be really cool.

~X~

[Alex Kidd in Remake World]

Sprite-ville

I like that you added the group here and they are very colorfull, maybe adding a frame around this make it be like a showcase or gallery style, So here we go another nifty little sprite element you have presented for us and I have to say this one was really nifty I love the detail that sprite work "BRINGS-OUT" or is it pixel I dont remember but they are pretty nifty and this was a nice design here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding a frame around this make it be like a showcase or gallery style

~X~

[vine]

Nice work

So this was pretty cool, love the black and white of this all it really came out well and made for some nice visual you really made it allurring and a good visual here as for any kind of improvement not sure this was a stand alone on its own as is, and odesnt need any major changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes needed.

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RannitX responds:

Thanks for the input.