XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flower Girl]

So here was an artistic piece

I love the artistic style you put in this the leavs or flowers dropping on the girl it was pretty cool, and the colors seem to come out just right, anyways nice work here as a suggestion maybe some backround texture but thats about it as this whole piece was very nice work.

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some texture in the backround.

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[mind boye]

Really nice work here, I love this "ROBOT" the vibrant colors are nice but I think you could have all those colors more glowing and even more vibrant, maybe a little more detail in the backround even, I could see the cs also with a glow on it, anyways some nice work here.

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I think you could have all those colors more glowing and even more vibrant, maybe a little more detail in the backround even, I could see the cs also with a glow on it

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[Video Game Pop Star Presidential Election]

Nice work

So this was pretty good stuff something different from your normal "SPRITE" or "PIXEL" stuff but have to say this being political was actually pretty good you actually designed them as they really are in a way, so that was nice, some text bubbles might be cool on this piece, anyways good work here.

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Some text bubbles might be cool on this piece

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[Ertot and Unbaba]

Colorfull

so this was a colorfull one I thaught it lacked some bit of "TEXTURE" in the color but maybe you were going for that bright and vibrant and in that case it was great some fun visuals here maybe think about this small tip and ad some flashy sparkles to ad to the vibrant colors, regardless keep up the amazing work.

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maybe think about this small tip and ad some flashy sparkles to ad to the vibrant colors

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[Amethyst]

Awsome

wow I have to say this was pretty awsome very alurring visual of this beautifull girl here the character structure alone is pretty impressive love the suggestive atire even very soft colors that are aluring in every way there is no changes on this as this was just so good in detail.

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Nice work no changes needed.

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[Catching Santa]

Vwey entertaining

Guess its hard to catch "SANTA" especially with a net lol, would have liked more light up of the tree and such but it was all good stuff here, And here we have an entertaining piece with lots to admire and I admire the beauty of the characracters and the amusing points of the humor and how you bring this all together in one big ending so nice work on that and great piece to the comic as it grows bigger and bigger.

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would have liked more light up of the tree and such but it was all good stuff here,

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[A Bullfrog]

Decent

This is well decent but nothing artistically spectacular. I do like your comic like cartoon style and the words were nice to go with the image but the words needed more fine tuning. They looked rushed and child like. Now your drawing itself was good and unique but I wish you focused more on the words. The style of the words isnt too bad but some letters are larger than others and we more consistantcy. I do like your style tho.

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Just try to improve on the lettering of your words. They need some work.

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[Christmas Dinner]

Cool another one

The color and art is so "DEEP" very welldone on that element, the humor here was pretty good not as good as some other humor of yours but I still found it amusing and funny, I had not seen any from you in a good while so didnt know what to expect allthough these are older ones but anyways another nifty comic piece you have here and I have enjoyed this one just as much as I have enjoyed the others do you plan on stopping at a specific number or anything, anyways nice job here.

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the humor here was pretty good not as good as some other humor of yours but I still found it amusing and funny

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[Force]

Brimming with sparkle

The "FORCE" is a strong thing to use lol anyways well exectuted joke here, love the color here and no changes needed at this time it was brilliant, I will say that this one alone is brimming with some sparkle you bring a whole style and ad your own kind of sparkle to that element and thats really a plus of things so very nice work there, keep on bringing a sparkle to our hearts with your lovely piece of talent and keep this great comic going as strong as ever, I absoulutly loved the jokes and humor in this one, one of your best.

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love the color here and no changes needed at this time it was brilliant

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[K/Da Akali]

Very nice

This was "COOL" I really like the "NEON" on this wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more, I really like when people make these styles of artwork, because its not everydy we get to see stuff like this so thats all a big plus. And so here is my Extended part of the review Appropriately done if I say so myself, And now As I do end here I will say it was a nifty art piece with some nice design elements, you have shown you have the talents of some nifty art. So my last wording on this is that this was a Symbolic piece of art.

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wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more

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SouredApple responds:

I'll make note lol Thanks ;)