XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Son Goku - Tale 26.]

Notbad

So this was notbad of some work here I like the black and white theme here and you made it somewhat simple and the linework is pretty good I would suggest maybe some small added color maybe a few lines maybe some background colored details but this was a nice piece here an overall nice drawing and the black and white is notbad at all so I do look forward to much more work from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

~X~

[Finding Sanctuary.]

Nice detail

So there was some nice detail in this you can really see some of the texture in the detail of the art and that's what I really liked here it just jumps out at you and you presented some nice charchter design as well as some really nice backround even I love the detail as for any form in improvments I don't think you need much but overall this was cool stuff anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine but not by much

~X~

[gouch]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the dark element it seems too dark on the pants from the couch but I think you could ad some type of lightning source to reflect off that more but besides all that this was a well done piece with some really nice charchter structure and a good combo of charchters at that so adding a light source would be a plus on this if you ask me everything else is pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added lighting source would be nice

~X~

[EasyToonPractice.2]

Another cute one

So here was another cute one, that art into animation must be nice as its pretty good and makes it flow well, just wish you could make the canvus larger and gave some color in there even, its a good little animation from art, the drawing itself is not sobad either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just wish you could make the canvus larger and gave some color in there even

~X~

[I dunno lol]

Cool

So this was a cool peice I love all the art color you use in these pieces very vibrant and colorful some nice elements you use on these pieces, You even do some nice backrounds wich make it come out well so all I have to say on this piece is it was some nice work, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shading on the skin tones wouldnt hurt

~X~

[EasyToonPractice.1]

This was cute

Well this was a nice and cute little animation you have here, it was a short animation here on the art portal but nice to see you change art into animation, all this really needs is some color added to it, that would really push this one over the edge, a nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be nice.

~X~

[Revolver]

Nice detail

So this one has some really cool detail and I really like the "COLOR" and detail you have on this one the shadow backround was also cool, one thing that could be improved on here would be some more improved lines maybe a border on the edges but besides all that it was a decent piece of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
one thing that could be improved on here would be some more improved lines maybe a border on the edges

~X~

[Extravagance and Meditation]

Cool sketch

Another "INTENSE" art piece especially it being black and white was really brilliant, I would ad a frame or border of color to accent the black and white more, This was cool I have seen a lot of art and have to say this one was pretty good I love this drawing as it has a unique style about it, its a drawing and a sketch but brings some good quality to it so keep doing what you do because sofar its pretty good and solid work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad a frame or border of color to accent the black and white more

~X~

[Wash On Wash Off]

Nice Web-comic

Wow this was a really good comic here love all the amount of detail, Really no changes here with this one I would just suggest make more great comics, A nice Comic here I have seen more and more of these types of "COMICS" show up in the art portal and this one was actually pretty nifty, I love the direction of this particular one and has some really good visuals so nice comic you have dawned on us here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really no changes here with this one I would just suggest make more great comics

~X~

[DAMN MY LIFE]

A cool comic

I love the "DETAIL" you really know how to push some detail in these comics, no changes in this one as its a solid piece, And here we have another fine comic in the art portal I have actually seen a few of these and some simular but I like this particular one it brings on some nice detail and lots of flavour it has me "INTERESTED" right from the start a very good idea here for a comic and hope you make more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes in this one as its a solid piece

~X~