Neat
Ok that was neat but only because I watched your video below on how to draw this. I do like those videos so you get a sense of the work and know it isn't fully stolen and their. I do like the reds and blues and the lines in the suits. Some lines aren't right porpotionally but it is doable. I think the background doesnt match the foreground....it seems unbalanced. I would try something else other then some squiggles.
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You have talent but the background needs work so focus on that next time.
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