XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unfinished Comic Page 2]

A nice black and white

And here was a nice black and white drawing that you have presented here for us, the design is well details and welldone, I love the effort that you can clearly see and while there is no or little color it is a nice piece you have here and the talent shows off well, I enjoy this piece for the idea that makes it from lines to black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some outlined of color would be something nifty for this.

~X~

[SFV - Laura Redesign]

Very nice

So here we have a very nice character a nice hat a nice outfit lots of details, really nice character work you have here, and some good detail you put a lot of energy into this and it shows off very well so nice job here, I hope you make more like this, now as for this one I think you could ad a bit more depth to the backround, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in the backround, as it was a bit plain maybe adding some depth like a pattern maybe a design, maybe some scene of some types or some random colors in the back end just something so the backround is not so plain.

~X~

[Unfinished Comic Page 1]

Nice sketch

This was an "INTENSE" piece and almost like a comic, really love the dark shadings in this one, you should frame this with some colored frames and or borders, So nice design or sketch here regardless it being just black and white is kind of cool and has some nice elements about it some nice details here and there, these are the types that really show the raw details before any color is added so nice work indeed on these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should frame this with some colored frames and or borders

~X~

[Pokedab]

This was cute

So a nice three combo of "CHARACTERS" here it was a nice rendittion of them and I like the lighting effect but I think you should have had more lighting beam come down on them as it was a nice effect, anyways great character combo here and some nice art detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~I like the lighting effect but I think you should have had more lighting beam come down on them as it was a nice effect

~X~

[Diamond]

Amazing submission

Nice "DIAMOND" this was pretty cool I think you should have made the diamond colored, Love the submission you have here for us today its full of life and full of detail, I love how you bring it all together, not just the story or humor, but the adventure, really comes alive and is so vibrant in all that you bring to the table, Iwonder if you will ever start other comics from side characters from this comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have made the diamond colored

~X~

[Hit]

Cool

Wow I would have to say thats an "OUCH" it was a nice entry would have liked to see more blood but its cool as is, Another great comic submission this one was just very amazing and comes alive, I know I have reviewed tons of your stuff but they never get old and its always fun seeing how the story and adventure unfolds into a great climax of sillyness and chaos, so keep doing stuff like that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
it was a nice entry would have liked to see more blood but its cool as is

~X~

[Tobuscus]

Nice

So this was some nice work here, its a "PORTRAIT" piece and he is in an action "POSE" pretty good pose if you ask me, I think as for the backround you should have more details maybe even a patteren or design instead of the gradient one, but it was a nice portrait piece you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for the backround you should have more details maybe even a patteren or design instead of the gradient one

~X~

[Wrong Kind]

Nice series

lol the "BOTTLE" up your rage is deadly lol I really like how this one plays out from start to finish, the story stuff you bring to these are really good, Good story and even better humor as always, so what I can say while theres a dozon of these of sorts they are still awsome in there own way. so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added backround detail of the store or something might have been cool.

~X~

[HiPico.png]

Different

Well I have to say that this was pretty different and random and thats ok I like the "FACE" love the "H I" that was just so random but the art itself was pretty nifty and it just came out very well Some color in the backround would be nice. but anyways good random art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color in the backround would be nice, just a suggestion though.

~X~