XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Italian Paper Mola]

Creative

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one i give a higher score because of the creativness of it all, i like the colors most of all even if it was just paper but you went and made something differant and unique, kinda reminds me of an old egyption mask of some sort, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this might have been better maybe with some horns and feathers to really give it that wild feel

~X~

Fro responds:

I love the detail idea. After I get it back from my professor!

[Good Grief]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
I like this one aswell, the coloring is alright but might look better in some photoshop maybe if you added some effects with photoshop it would have a nice mixture of the two, anyways another good piece here i really liked

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i explained above, some photoshop or paintshop pro effects would really help on this mainly for some effects

~X~

Fro responds:

Yeah, I did this for an assignment and I would like to revisit it sometime and really improve it.

[My only 12 inch]

norbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, its actually a pretty good drawing / sketch, this might look nicer if it had some color maybe the "S" would be a red or something kinda makes it standout abit more but i believe this may be your best drawing yet i do like it so hope you make more for us soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like the s, anyways keep up the good work

~X~

Fro responds:

I was thinking about adding a background, color, and a leg to it in the future. I'll update it sometime. Thanks!

[Big Daddy's Big Brownies]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
hehe well this was cute, the phrase was the most best part i thought and he actually gives us a good little tip there which is always nice from a buff super hero or villin, anyways this was pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If i was to change anything on this it would probably to make the font more fancy and what not

~X~

[Capture the Moment]

I like it

~~REVIEW~~
this does look like it took some time, but also shows some good effort on your part, i like the design on the desk and the camera is pretty neat itself i like the light effect you have there, the wall seemed abit bland seems like there should be more stuff on there, anyways good stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more stuff on the wall, and maybe give the desk a more roundish design style kinda thing

~X~

Fro responds:

Ok, it should be busier. I agree.

[Dark Entry]

could be darker

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good for what it was, it could be abit more on the darker side, with some sunlight or lighting effects it will give it that i think, maybe even make it look like there was some stains on the walls and dorrs for the creepy feel, but anyways its a good piece you have here i liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well more darkness around the door and some blood stains wouldnt hurt either

~X~

Fro responds:

Great ideas! Maybe I'll update this soon!

[A strange easter bunny]

funny strange

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was cute, it does have a strange ness to it and all, the rabbit like creature is bouncing around with some fun ideas it seems hehe the backround seemed like it could have used abit more on the effort side but i still liked it none the less

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i would like to see more backround work here atleast a darker tone back there somehow

~X~

[Nigal The British Pirate]

hehe nice

~~REVIEW~~
aww this was great, has some awsome use of color not too heavy on the color either but just right i thought it might have been neater if ya showed the head just abit outa the water, and maybe abit more shine on the sword

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above abit more shine on the sword and have the head showing just abit

~X~

TheSpicanator responds:

sweet thanks man!!!

and yeah, i agree with you on both.

[Robotler]

awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is neat it really just jumps out at ya, great color , awsome backrounds, and just is there to catch your attention, i think the legs could be removed as it just looks abit off but what you have here is really good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
remove the legs and just have the body showing something about the legs are abit off

~X~