XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klide 03 (Rose Ocean)]

Nice color here

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this one just kind of jumps out at you, i love the little {DESIGN}in the middle and while i love color artpieces you seem to have added some nice {BLENDS} like the warping feel on some of the stuff, and i have noticed you have gotton better with each new art piece you do comeout with so nice job there, Im thinking this should be larger though, seems abit on the {SMALL} size make it more like a desktop backround size or something, but other then that it was pretty good, keep up the good work, i look forward to reviewing more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the size much larger, maybe have more of that design thats in the center broaden out more into the outer edges aswell.

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LadyJava responds:

thank you.

[Klide 01 (Flower Growth)]

Orb of color

~~REVIEW~~
I just love the color on this, and the texture seems to be its like a circle or like an orb of sorts, the differant colors seem to really balance out with everything else, the light from the {CENTER} could use abit more brightness to reflect more of a shine and more of a focus area, its all a pretty good piece of art the size should be bigger but i understand that this was one of your earlier works, but regardless its pretty nifty, so to improve on things you should possibly add more shine, make the size larger and add some deeper colors, anyways great first piece i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated before add more shine, make the size larger and add some deeper colors.

~X~

LadyJava responds:

thank you.

[Mr. Bernard Berkeley]

Very artistic

~~REVIEW~~
and so we have another decent piece here this one has some really good {TEXTURE} now the idea of the cat in a suit is pretty interesting, you seem to have this interesting style like hidden in the artwork with the flower like vines kinda makes it your own and you did this with this one wich was pretty decent, the backrounds were pretty neat, it all seemed to work together and made for some good artistic feel to it wich was a really nice touch and i liked it, Also nice touch on giving the backround a lighter feel to focus on the main parts of the character, so very nice job all around and i like your work and look forward to reviewing more of your stuff even your newer works anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im thinking some {BORDERS} or frames would make this even better almost like a painting on a wall or something

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Araelyn responds:

I thought about putting a border actually. This is such an old picture though, I doubt I'll revisit it. Thanks for the review!

[Purple Insides]

Decent and colorful

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat i love the differant colors used in this, allthough the {VOMIT} seemed abit on the blurry side? maybe that was the effect you were going for, but anyways back to the color theme like how everything had it own color, and still had the texture along with some great linework, and seemed to come all together, i think the only work of improving might be adding more texture and clarity to the vomit or if you like the blurr effect then blurr it even more, and maybe some differant texture in the pink backround, other then that its pretty impressive so nice work on this one, cant wait to see what you come up with next.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround texture and more clarity and change of texture in the vomit area

~X~

Araelyn responds:

Thank you!

[Bernini's David]

Classic

~~REVIEW~~
Now hers an older drawing but still amazes me today, a fine piece of artwork, the charco seems to work well with this, i really like this because you were able to bringout the {FACE} and all the little details of the character here, you really striked that pose of him {THINKING} it would have been nice to see some color even just a little here and there, very nice indeed on this piece of fine artwork even though its an older piece it still amazes me, so i was pleased to see it and even review it, so nice job all around, Now as to improve on something like this, well as mention some color wouldnt hurt maybe even some {LIGHTING} from where he is looking at just a few ideas that could be improving on this other then that it was very impressive and it was a pleasure reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some suggestions of lighting effects in the upper right corner and some touches of color aswell

~X~

[Unwanted Child]

nice colors

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now this was something new and differant and i never reviewed your stuff it seems, but this was very nice, i really like the touch of {SHINE} and darkness like with the gloves and and such, as for the child it was great work aswell you gave it some good emotion like something really is going on, kinda like theres a story there and not just a painting, the {BACKROUND} is notbad, but i wouldnt mind seeing more color there or something more then what you had in this one, it seemed bland but that was notbad at all, now as for improving as suggested some more color in the backround, maybe even as an extra measure a {TEAR} from the child, eye or something could show more for that dramatic but thats just an idea or two, but anyways its a great piece nice color use could use abit more,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more color in the backround, some more emotion like a tear from the child would be a plus also.

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Letal responds:

Backgrounds were made by a friend who work with me sometimes, but I agree ,I should have done some goth city or something... The tear is a good idea too.

[Art Block]

Unique and differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is something really differant, i like this, you used your {IMAGINATION} with this one and you presented something that tells a small story wich is always nice to see, the backround is {BLAND} though, you should have added more to it besides the black more of whats going on maybe some more boddies? hanging something that really tells more of whats going on, now the rest is awsome each little thing is something differant from the other wich is why i liked it, and you went and made something differant from just the normal, wich is why i also added it to my faves list, now as for improving i already mentioned more detail in the backround, besides just a black but if you insist on just the black then why not try the {SMOKE} or cloudy effect in the black backround, just a thought though, anyways nice work here on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround needs some work, and maybe more brighter colors on the tube and ray from gorls head more brighter like its an element or something.

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[Ugy]

Decent could have more detail though.

~~REVIEW~~
Interestings character you have here its differant and neat, the character itself is differant, so decent work there, good color tones, and shades, and creative ideas here, the downside to this would be you didnt add enough on the detail side, you should have detailed the character more, maybe some tattos, more scratches and scrapes here and there, and also more stuff in the backround like some other characters and stuff to show more is happening and stuff, just a few tips that could have gave this that much more, Also the {COLORS} were more basic then anything else, some more blending of the shades would be nice just something more then just the basic. other then that i thought it might be ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blending of color and such, more going away from the basic, and more happening in the backround.

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Mosamabindrawin responds:

Thanks allot for the review/advice!
I would have added more detail but this is most likely going to end up as a background character- but if i choose to make it a main character ill definitely be adding more detail thanks!