XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[dun dun]

nice

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat the black and white style is neat i thought but wouldnt hurt at all with some color just abit just here and there, like spots really, but you have something good here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, even if just the frames were colored it would be kinda neat

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[Carrying the Lunar Stone]

awsome detail

~~REVIEW~~
wow this character is so very well detailed, you added a good prop you had all sorts of clothing, and just gave it all the right colors, very good look you gave here love the look she has going, anyways very nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for the extra measure add some butterfly's flying around her or something

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[FATHER TUCKER 002]

lol funny and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
hehe this was funny and very amusing. the art was fantastic there seems to be some nice gradients atleast i think its gradients, but anyways, you had just black lines to devide the boxes you should probably have double lines and or bars

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have bars, and or double lines to devide the frame boxes

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[Mr. Bacon]

Kevin bacon

~~REVIEW~~
The drawing is superb, colors shades textures is all top notich, in my opinion it looks more like john travolta though but still has some simularities to Kevin bacon, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i thought the hair was abit iffy, maybe more fine hair might work in this case, well just an idea anyways

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thies responds:

Yup he doesn't look very much like Kevin Bacon on some points, espacially the eyes. He looks a bit like a mix of Kevin Bacon, John Travolta, and Ben Afflack. (like the guy below said.)

I actually tried to make the hair look more fine, but it didn't really look great, so I let it be like this..

Thanks for reviewing again :)

[to your room]

lol strange

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was abit on the strange side, but you really do know how to use the colors and bright ones but thats what i like, especially with these random and odd characters, so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more funny sayings and all

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[Wandering Ghosts]

Differant and interesting

~~REVIEW~~
You have something different here i like the ghosts and all and it kinda tells abit of a story not sure why the nakedness and all, but hey it is what it is. you should add in the summery a lil story on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of a story on this in the summery, it will help the viewers to understand the inspiration abit more

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[Elf Comic]

nice comic

~~REVIEW~~
Well now here is a differant kinda comic, i love that its not "UNIFORM" as just "BOXES" but yet its in other odd shapes and really just looks differant and unique if you ask me you should keep that style, the comic is actually pretty good nice drawings and good dialog

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more close ups like the eye shot

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Sangasan responds:

As I do with all art that's not mine, I have to refer you to ActionSquid, he drew it and I colored it, I personally find the dialog lame, but thanks. I think I colored it to the best of my abilities, and I agree, the eye-shot was my favorite to color.

[Red Baron]

Very impressive i like

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressive with the main character i even like what you did with another guy in the backround, this shows a good battle about to take place, and the main character has shown alot of effort on your part, so i really do look forward to more of your work, keep making great stuff for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Show some blood on the main guys weapon,

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beastkid7 responds:

Thanx a lot for the review! Will do sir!

[Playful Drakie]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
now this is cute with a storybook style feel the colors and drawing itself seem very storybook style, the little story in itself with the little guy and parant show abit of story which really got it going for me, so very welldone on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think i would leave this as is its just right in my opinion

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[PartyShock]

nice design

~~REVIEW~~
and here you have a nice designed character seems ready for action, i would have liked to see the character not so clean looking maybe with some battle scars and or blood in places well them are a few ideas to work with

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some blood steins like on the drill and some war scars some places

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