XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kris]

close up

~~REVIEW~~
Well not a bad portrait, its really close up but maybe thats what you were going for, i would have liked to see more of some color in there especially with the close up, maybe something to work on in the future, anyways nice art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more skin texture maybe some color would help with this

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itsKris responds:

Thanks, I agree, colour would help. This was done for art class though so I wasn't allowed to have any :P I think I might do another self portrait though and that one will have colour.

Thanks for the review :)

[BumbleBee Music]

looks like obhama

~~REVIEW~~
Really nice sketch here, it has a very likeness to obama you know that guy in office hehe, its really good though, i think with some added color maybe even just have the musical notes colored and add a few more floating in the air

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More musical notes and some colored ones, just even one colored note would set this more aprt from the rest

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Rooshie responds:

This was done literally in 2 minutes. I was about to sleep and someone wanted to see a drawing, so i made it and didnt care if it was colored in or not

[McCain & Palin]

lol cute

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this is cute especially since i have a crush on sara heh, but anyways really good art and a big likeness on them, the colors just seem to work, it kinda looks like you have sara in a dumbfounded look

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this art piece seems to need a phrase or quote of some kind

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[The Cloak]

Interesing

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad once again this one is actually better then your other stuff, it has a more balanced backround, and the cloak is notbad either i think you should add some eyes to the character some glowing eyes of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as explained add some glowing "EYES" it will make it look more dark

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[Rockin the Suburbs]

Differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was a differant kind of art, it had some faded color style, so it didnt really stand out no but maybe with abit more color depth it could come out, he kinda reminds me of david letterman for some odd reason, anyways it was notbad keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More deeper colors some that really bring your point out and abit more focus on the color would be an idea

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SPace responds:

haha theres only 2 colors and b&w so i don't think i could have gone any deeper. the lighter pink pops a bit more when you see it in person. if i could scan this instead of taking a picture of it i think that would translate better.
i think i see what you mean about the focus, the keyboard is brighter so you don't see his face as well. thanks for the review!

[In for life]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
wow now this is very impressive with some very deep colors and the drawing itself looks pretty good, you went over the top on this one and thats a good thing, very well done, i will have to check more of your stuff out soon, anyways great job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some borders it might make it look more refined

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Eighth responds:

thanks for the review... and yeah sure, I'll try the whole border thing, thanks for that tip too...

[Naera-2010]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
wow pretty amazing on this kinda reminds me of a character from a game i play, i like what you did here its so very well detailed and shows lots of persanality and style great texture aswell, i love it nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some other ones flying around in the backround, and maybe a red sky would fit better for the darker feel of elements

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[G-Lu Animated Gif]

animated heh

~~REVIEW~~
well thats the first animated art piece i seen sofar in the art portal, its not a bad thing, i thought you could have had more art in the backround to give it that more artistic feel, but for what it is its pretty ok with me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More art style besides the black bland backround

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M-Shack responds:

It's more about the character moving than an actual painting or scenario. The gifs only allow a certain size and if there is too much in the image, the quality really drops and might be too big to upload. I used the black cuz it allowed me to use white outlines for the character since he is white. Thanks for taking the time to review, some of my other art has backgrounds and what not.

[Dark pass caravan]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
This is differant for sure, i like the black and white style and there alot of stuff to see here, maybe with some reds and oranges it might spice up the image up just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color maybe half of it is in red and the rest in black and white or maybe just a small portion is in color

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pingui responds:

first of all , thanx for commenting and raiting my work , my original intention was to create a black and white picture , i might add some colour in further projects , but for this , i'd like to keep it as it is , neatherless , thanx for your opinion , and have a nice whatever you may be having
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