XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Purplex]

Lighting effects needed

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is another neat entry from you, now "PURPLE" just happens to be my fave color, and you really went with a deep purple like i like here, now here you didnt show much of the lighting effect that i am fond of, but i think it would have been perfect for thei image design, such as the "LIGHTER" center point here, i love the wave design you gave this and all and purple is a good colortone to go with, just that this needed that lighting effect you are so very good at, so work on that maybe in a differant version or just something to remember for the future, as the lighting effects you do is your best stuff based on all your works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said, the lighting effects are needed in this one as it would have worked so well with the deep purple in the backround and gave more focus to the design itself.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review and actually i tried with the glow effect with this one but i kinda liked the original piece.

[Airavat]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting, i am slowly but surly getting to your other works here, but anyways this one, kinda reminds me of the "OIL" in the gulf of mexico the dark purple being the oil, and the bluish being the water and ocean part of things, and looks like the dark purple thing in the middle bottom is the tube and all the oil is spreading around for destruction, then again it also reminds me of a chainsaw lol, but regardless of all that its pretty neat, i like all the darker colors in this one, so kinda hard to review but still a nice design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Mix up some more colors in here

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review

[True Devil]

Awsome color.

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i guess you did make some new stuff i have not been paying attention, but this one i really like, it has tons of Color, all around, and correct me if i am wrong but there is a little man in there? or that would be the demon lord? if so you did a very good job, cause all the color represents the power and such that he is going to destroy us all with and i think you represented that pretty well, some improving might be that the little guy was raiding his arms and you have light coming from them hands that really just spark what is to be the color and lighting effects, I am really impressed with all the extra color added stuff alot better then some of your earlier stuff, so i was really impressed with this one, and wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this one, you really outdid yourself once again, ao anyways the only changes i suggested here would have been the raising of the arms with a more light effect coming out, anyways good job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i suggested some color fixes with the little demon as he raises his arms something like that but for the most part its pretty neat.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i didnt expect that youll like it that much :D

[Piconjo's sword]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so another 3d render, which is not bad, i like what you did with it, like with textures and really making it shine, i think you could have still gave it abit more of a shine, more brightness on the shine part, like if it was out in the sun or something and the sun is directly over it especially being out on the sand and all, I thing the handle should be more thicker, something that holds all that blade should have more of a grip and such, and there was a little green "GEM" at the bottom, i thought this could be more brighter maybe with more of a glow and such, maybe even bigger in someway, As for the sand as the backround i thought that was a nice little backround maybe it should be more lighter like in some sorta sandy dunes type of thing, well these are a few ideas that could really help, maybe or maybe not but something to think about if every wanting to improve onto these, nice little sword or knife here i thought it was very impressive even as is, and i look forward to seeing more of your designs and artwork in the near future, so good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
suggested a number of ideas and improvments above, such as brigter gem, bigger handle, brighter shine and sandier sand.

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Manuel-Dangelo responds:

in fact this is not a little sword, this is a huge masive sword. haven't you ever played NewGrounds Rumbles? try to unlock Piconjo's charapter and you'll know what I'm talking about.

[Exploited view]

Better i thought

~~REVIEW~~
and here are some better pieces with more of the visuals more detailed then the one with the logo and all, it all seemed to be a work in progress as there was lots of parts that really needed to work together, i have really enjoyed reviewing these as i love to see how things work, but awsome job all around here very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think Some sorta crazy backround like a rainbow warp in the backround would really show off the pieces in a better light.

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[Cheese Grater Use Manual]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Ok here was more of the one of the final version, and here you show lots of differant versions everything in this one seems to be just everywhere and doesnt show much of each part as the big "LOGO" is also blocking the way, but anyways it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would remove the logo so you can the actual 3d abit more in detail and such.

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[Easy Cheese Grater]

Neat 3d

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting something differant and the 3d style is pretty neat i thought, Kinda differant from your side of things and seems like you put lots of effort in these so that was pretty neat, as a cheese grater i guess there is not much you can do there but its still interesting, i think if you had a view portion of it grading some cheese it might be pretty interesting aswell, just an idea for more of an effect of the grater and such, really there is not too much to comment on this but i did find it pretty neat, so maybe more effects next time like the actual cheese and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested an effect like cheese coming out would be something neat.

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[The Masks we wear]

The mask

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is something differant, in this one you give off a good msge, anout hiding behind a mask because we need to be a certain way for the public eye, so for the meanning i really got and thought it was pretty neat how you put this through art, as for the "ART" it was very good, nice group of shades, very fresh looking not dark and detailed but just something more fresh looking and that works out, also liked the back writings aswell allthough you cant see them all, it is still well presented to flow woth everything here, so nice job here, Now as for improving on something like that, not sure as you have once again covered all your bases, but if i was going to suggest anything at all, i would have a "TEAR" on the guy behind the mask as to show abit of emotion, that could really show off the meaning abit more and what you are trying to get across, and just an idea aswell, As for your "SIGNATURE" you could have it look abit more "FANCY" as it looks too squished together, anyways hope that helps and once again great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentiond an idea of a tear on the guy as to show more emotion, and also making the signature look more fancy and more spread out as to read abiit better

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Manuel-Dangelo responds:

Thanks.
And by the way. I don't cry any more. I think I'm out of tears since I was 10 years old.

[I-bot Reinterpretation]

I-Boot complete

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i have reviewed any of your work, but i was glad to see you finally finished this guy, took you awhile but seems like its all done. and here in the final version you have trully made him complete with all out color in the backround, and shine and shaded areas, so the shades on this have seemed to really comeout well and i was pretty impressed with the final version here, i like it how it seems his head is just popping out of his body, that adds abit to his cuteness and all, I love the "SHINE" you gave to one end, while still giving some shows to the otherside, and with the backround you really put fourth the color and it just reflected well with the lighter tones of the robot itself, so all and all a very welldone robot and completion to the I-BOT something that i had totally forgot about, so nice job indeed on this, Now as to improve, im not sure you have covered alot of the bases and really made this an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe the bottom end of his gun shoould have some paint stains or something to show he has been paininting, just a thought though

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