XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[AF robot_0002]

And onto number 2

OK so this was pretty neat the second in the series of shiny robots, i like that this one has a red beam here, and like the other one this one could use more of a "SHINE" and sparkle to give it that much more of an effect therem he has all these arms and hands, maybe you should have him "HOLDING" something like a soda can or something, but anyways once again simular to the first one but still differant it was notbad and i like the style, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So for things to improve on i suppose as suggested more shine, maybe in this case a prop for him to hold and such.

[AF robot_0001]

Ok so this was interesting

This was pretty intersting and i guess you have three differant robots as i look at them abit more close, i thought they were differant variations of the same and in away i guess they could be, but anyways The "SHINE" youput on this one was pretty neat, but i think you should have had some more of that shaine with some sparkle to it, The backround cameout well and was very fitting to this, you should have also added some sort of "LIGHTS" like flashing but since this is more of a still make it just a red light.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A decent robot like character here, could use some more shine and maybe some red and blue lights and such.

[Through The Glass]

Nice drawings

So this was a really great drawing, i like how you gave this emotion, the eyes really cameout well, now i understand this was a sketch drawing but i think some added "COLOR" would have been nice though even if it is just a little bit of it, maybe just the glass could be colored, but anyways great job on the drawing it was fine detail in every part of it, other then that this was pretty good stuff i thought. keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some touch of color or bits and piece of color here and there wouldnt hurt.

[Digital Salesman]

Differant

Ok so this is kinda interesting, it is some sorta drawing and or sketch, he is screamming something so you did show some "EMOTION" in the art piece and thats always something i look for, you could have done abit more with the white backround though, aswell as throw in some color maybe even multiple colors, seems kinda silly with him so angry, but i found it kind of interesting but seems to need more effort regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could have done abit more with the white backround maybe some color base, so that you can have more focus on the character itself, and a touch of color in the sketch is also needed.

[Gish 2 teaser art (ink)]

Decent in ink

Ok so this was the black and white version, notbad, you can actually see more of the "DETAIL" that you couldnt with the color version, i think with this one you should have atleast had some parts colored or just one piece like an eye or tongue, might show off that detail portion of some sort, but anyways this was pretty good, not a fan of black and white but it was pretty good otherwise. So add just a bit of color maybe one item of the drawing, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while its black and white thats cool, but adding just a touch of color not the whole drawing would be a plus.

[LOST IN SPACE!]

Cute and funny

haha ok i found this one to be funny, now it was more cute then anything else, almost seems like you should have put up some sorta font or text something with humor, the art look neat, has a fresh and cute look, i like all the props, and even the moon looks pretty good, the stars could use more "SHINE" and bling to them though, but other then that this was a pretty good piece, kinda funny and cute though, so untill next time keep making these decent art pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There could have been more stars, have some even in the distant, other then that this was pretty good.

[Split]

Decent kinda artistic.

Very artistic with this one, i love how there were differant color bars comming across here and there over the face and such, that to me gave off the artsy feel and overall made it a more enjoyble piece, the actual drawing was very cool too but was not focused on due to the color bars but its the whole piece one must admire, and you presented a nice piece here and i rather enjoyed it very much so nice job on this one. i hope to see more like this style from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im thinking if you lessen on the color bars you could have more focus on the actual drawing, but other then that this was pretty impressive.

[Gish 2 teaser art]

Kinda dark but pretty cool

Wow this one was pretty dark, but the detail and texture was fantastic, but this is a great creature and you really brought it to life, now it is kinda hard to see some of the details because it is so dark, and could use some sorta blood "DRIPPING" from his mouth and or jaw, the other thing that lacked was the words "GISH" it seemed such plain of a font maybe you could style it up with a better looking font and even possibly shine it of with some lighting effects, might even go well with everything looking dark.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentioned some blood from the mouth and maybe even a better font something with some shine and lighting effects to it, besides that it was a decent art piece.

[Look Away]

Decent

I really like the feel of this one, the red and white colors blend so well, and its almost like a "MOLD" Of some sort, the backround seemed to be cool aswell and also has that mold touch, you said you didnt like the "FACE" but i think it fit perfectly with everything else, so awsome job on this piece it has an artistic feel, any tips on improving, i might have had the backround, two differant color tones and not the same as the character so theres more focus on the character,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For more focus on the character there could be a differant color tone on the backrounds, even red and blue would work.

[Alien >:0]

Decent but needs more

Ok so this one was rather "SIMPLE" not that, that is a bad thing but you could have put a little more effort in, possibly adding some "BACKROUNDS" would have helped aswell as making the canvas larger as it was just kinda small, also more texture and color in the aliens skintone wouldnt hurt eiether, so there were a few things just metioned that could have made this much better, more skin texture, some backrounds, better shading, and a larger canvas size, just a few things to think about, anyays it was notbad, kinda on the cute side.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvas so you can put more stuff in with more to see even the little details you cant see too much if it was on a smaller size, so forsure go with a larger canvas. but besides that more skin texture, some backrounds, better shading, etc.