XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[M-Bot Reinterpretation]

Awsome as always

~~REVIEW~~
M-Bot is pretty cool, heh you should make X-Bot haha and he would be the ultimate reviewer, heh anyways but i like this one and love all the {BEAMS} here and you gave it that extra touch too which is also very nice indeed, the {STAR} could have more of a glaring shine to it though, its ok but just felt its the center peice and is kinda like his badge almost, you should make it really shine, As an extra touch on this poster i think you should ad in the backround some sirins or some sort maybe from a police car and or a police ship, it would ad abit to it i think anyways, but really for the mostpart you have a really good poster here, maybe not as impressive as p-bot but still really good, i love all the littel details you put in this, it really shows off the effort like the {M} on his arm and a few other things, its those little things that really bring the robot out, so props to you on an awsome job. but anyways keep up the awsome work on these posters and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give the {STAR} some shine to it a sorta glaring shine, also suggested maybe a police car or ship passing in the backround with the red and blue lights that would be a nifty backround scene

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

I don't think I'm doing other M-Bot... yet who knows. If I do I'll keep this in mind

[Star rings]

amazing

~~REVIEW~~
wow i really love this, i forget the guys name but this reminds me of his work he is also here on newgrounds and does alot of this {LIGHTING-EFFECT} Style of art and you do some amazing stuff here, particurly with this one and the turning of this, i could tottaly use this in a flash, something of like a {VORTEX} or something but really awsome for what you got going on here i really do enjoy this, now if i can offer any suggest of improvment, it might be give it more of a {WARP} in the middle somehow, maybe like some more twists and turns, but also wouldnt mind some, more lighting effect, and as for the outer {4-CORNERS} of the whole image they were abit bland, so this reminds me of outer space why not fill those bland spots with some {STARS} or something of that nature, it might make the whole piece abit more fuller and all, but anyways other then that it was a pretty good lighting effect based art piece and would hope to see more of your work soon, anyways keep up the good art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said just a minute ago, more use of lighting effects, fill in the bland spots this art pice had the 4 corners more bland, and maybe to spice up the image give the center abit more of a {WARP} feel.

~X~

[Thumbs Up!]

creative

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was interesting, thought this was something differant like some character, but as i look at it, its pretty neat, the whole image is kinda {BLAND} but its still neat i do like the {SUBTLENESS} of it and all, the star eyes and happy smile also the happy {TEXT} was neat, but maybe you could add more of a fancy {FONT} somehow??? it would bring it out abit more and show more style to the art piece as a whole. I like the {SHADES} and fresh look you have going on and all, gives it that fresh feel that is pretty neat i like it very much, you shoould do more art stuff like that, maybe even ad more colors in the backround so that you could also take away that blandness, the bland stuff im talking about is not a big issue but could use abit of effort in taking it away, As for your idea here with the character being a {THUMB} i thought that was really creative so props to you on the creativeness of it, you get points there, but anyways keep up the awsome work, i enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i wouldnt mind you making the text more fancy with a more louder {FONT} but also maybe much larger to fill in some of that blandness i see, Also another nice tip that may help would be adding some other shades of color to take away some of the blandness in the backround,

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad ya liked, thanks for the review! Also, everything is vectored here, there's no "font" used, but your right, the size could represent the degree of happiness in the picture, should be bigger.

[Santa is scary]

artistic

~~REVIEW~~
Wow your artwork really amazezes me, lots of artistic vale, but not just that you create a {SCENE} that is very creative, and all these wonderful colors it just comes out so very well and it makes us the viewers wonder what is this a {DREAM} or some kind of other strange world, but really awsome here, now i could suggest some improvments such as maybe a larger {CANVAS} so that you could add more to the scene even the fine details here and there, but anyways this is one of those strange but yet neat art pieces, and i find it very artistic, nice job sofar on all your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a larger canvas would help for adding more fine detail and also creating and opening the scene up more,

~X~

[Perfumed by an unseen scepter]

Artistic

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat, the art style was interesting, there is lots of {ARTISTIC-NESS} in this one, i love the paint style and all, and seems to really bring out the {TEXTURE} alot, which is neat about this, also like how you have alot in there to look at like what looks to be a {LAMP} and its magic smoke, the idea is that you really gave it a scene for the viewers to enjoy here, maybe this is the guys dream, or something like that, the creature above is also interesting, and as for the backround it was notbad but thought it could have had more scene back there somehow, just to give the whole art pice a more fuller look. anyways good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more texture or a more scene in the backround to give an ideaa of whats going on, i wouldnt mind seeing some improvments with some brighter colors and abit of shine to the colors aswell.

~X~

[Satan Claus]

Needs to be richer

~~REVIEW~~
Yeah i would have to admit that this {SANTA} looks more like satan, then anything else but i do like this piece of art, almost reminds me of that southpark episode with the satan, hehe, but anyways back to the art piece, theres lots of joy mixed with fire and chaos a neat combonation i thought was ok, now this is an ok art piece, i did however think you could have added some more sharper and brighter colors, like maybe bring this piece into, {PHOTOSHOP} and or {PAINTSHOP PRO} or any other art program, just something that you could bringout the {COLOR} more, and probably ad abit more {EFFECTS} and {DETAILS} stuff like that i thought, so my suggestions are it does need more effects and brighter colors to bringout the art more, great art piece with skulls and demons and presents a happy and chaotic time, so notbad of an idea but does need more effort on the color side of things. anyways good luck with your next entry thats if you still make anything, anyways once again nice piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More richer and sharper colors aswell as brighter colors to bringout the piece more.

~X~

[Strawberry pancakes]

Entertaining comic

~~REVIEW~~
This was awhile ago but i kinda find it {AMUSING} and while it is more of a sketch then anything else, it was still cute and had some creativeness to it and all, so i did enjoy it indeed, the drawings on the sketch was pretty neat, had some funny moments and the way you did draw some of the characters was pretty good i thoought, very like standouttish, like when it seems like the guy is yelling or something, but again it seems like it also lacked other elements such as. some {COLOR} would be nice, maybe with the chachters or even just some of the outer {BORDERS/FRAMES} something along them lines though, it would make the comic stand-out abit more i think. and just something that would bringout the detail instead of it just being a sketch or so, these are just some ideas that could spruce this up for an overall better outcome. but anyways i did like it, and hope the few ideas i suggested did help.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color wwould be nice, maybe characters and or the outer frames and borders, also adding more to the comic like more {SCENE-SQUARES} would also be a nice touch.

~X~

[Portal Protectors]

Awsome once again.

~~REVIEW~~
These are all pretty awsome, i like them all and you really gave them some awsome detail, The {I-BOT} i though could stand to use the more improving though, seems like he needs more {SHINE} to him, and just more overall gadgets and things on him, he just seems abit lightweigt, the other two were pretty impressive with nice fresh colors and awsome detail all around, i think if anything could be improved it would be more effects on ibot and maybe something more standoutish in the backround, well its an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flare and standoutish on i-bot and maybe even abit on the backround somehow.

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

OK. I'll keep it on mind.

[I-Bot (CrisisMode)]

Sleek and awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this one, love the detail, and all the effects in this one, awsome detail, i wish the {BEAMS} were more flasy like you did i think with the blue robot and such, but still this one was still good, maybe even the robot should have had abit more shine to it and all, but it should be a great piece for {ROBOT} day, the wall was neat but it looked to fine in detail maybe it shoould have more of a wear and tear on it like if it was just busted open or something, just looks too clean and all, but it was a pretty impressive art piece and great piece for robot day, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the robot, some more glare on the light beams, and more dirty look to the wall, just a few ideas that could make it much better i thought.

~X~