XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sanjay Patel]

Haha funny

I guess this was one of those jokes or something from the forum bbs, or something, but the "CHARACTER" cameout ok, seemed kind of rushed though, it was more of a cartoony style and such, and there should be more effort on some backrounds you just had the plain backround, maybe show some distant backround some coloredpalate or some design pattern would even work. but other then that this was pretty "CUTE" and amusing i thought, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. anyways keep up the decent art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus, so take good thought into the few or even one or two of them, they all will improve on this, even if its just a little something here and there but do think on the tips and advice. So with this one, it was pretty good but needs some sort of backrounds, and maybe some better "SMOKE" effects or something.

[Lars Moisture Farm]

Decent

This was pretty neat, shows off some of your skill and showssome even more of the effort put into this, so thats always a plus, you can really tell when someone puts the time in on something and this one shows. But anyways this was neat, i like the "3-D" it was pretty impressive and has a real like-ness to the real one on the starwars movies so great effort there in making it look just like it, sky cameout pretty neat, i did thing the sky might look better with a differant element of color though like "BLUE" or something, But anyways a decent art piece, nice effort here, and i really liked it, Andmost of all i love the style you have here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This did not need much on improving but it could have used some stuff, but overall this was pretty decent, nice style niceeffort all around, hope to see more like it in the neer future. I mentioned above about maybe a differant sky maybe blue but like i said also it didnt need much changing at all.

[I'll Be Home Soon]

I found this one to be somewhat artistic

Yeah so i found this one to be artistic, clowns are pretty artistic to start, but this one ws pretty nifty and the paint style colors were nice, The "BLEEDING" of the paints was interesting the clown almost seems like he has a sad face and all and i guess thats ok does show the emotion you are putting into this, the backrounds could have been better as the backrounds were very bland and had very little detail if any at all, Also im thinking some improvment options might be some "BORDERS" so that you can make it like a framed picture and the main art piece is focused on more, and that would be a great plus. anyways nice work here it was very artistic and i liked it, keep up the good art-pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I found this art piece to be interesting, and had some artistic values to it, now ofcourse it could use some fix ups here and there, and i have some advice points with tips and ideas to improve on it, and while they are just afew ideas they should help to improve on the whole piece so think about them,

[Vince]

Cool art piece

So this was another cool, picture here, The black and white style of art is ok, nut with the nice drawing here seems like some added color would have been the perfect touch, maybe a prop or the backround or something in color allowing for a focus point of some sort, So thats one way of detailing it up with color, Its a strong resemblance, to one of the fulpboys, regardless this was pretty funny, just too much black and white and does need a touch of color. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An impressive piece of art you have here, now ofcourse there was some changes and upgrades that could be made to it as suggested in the review but for the mostpart this was a pretty fantastic piece, just look into some more ideas as suggested. starting with some color and even some backround work. but besides that this was pretty good i thought so keep up the decent work.

[House]

Wow this was nice

I love this piece because it has an interesting yet "SIMPLE" touch to it, also the whole black and white style is notbad, Now the black and white style is always fun I do think you can add a touch of color though, maybe a spot here or a spot there maybe a border or just something that would bring more focus to it. With this particular pic maybe the daisyleaves could be yellow and the rest all black and white, but regardless this was a pretty neat art piece. everything looked great and the black and white was notbad, very unique and differant.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this could use a touch of color as mentioned, and maybe a tad more in the backround scene.

[Red Arremer]

Nice texture

This was neat, the color really comes thru good with this one, love the bright and vibrant colors even on the demon, the orangish colors cameout well, and was pretty impressive, you even gave it some "SHINE" so that was a real plus, and everything on this was pretty fantastic, i think the best art was that it had some vibrant colors, so awsome job there indeed, You may want to think about adding some borders seems fitting espceially with your signature at the bottom would give off a sort of galery tyle and style of art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And some advice on this one probably as suggested some borders would be great here. other then that this was pretty good.

[Ruh Ruh]

Tree people.

This was very "CREATIVE" i love these tree like people, and i thought there was a "SIMPLISTIC" feel about them with some "SOFT" touches of color and elements and that was kinda neat and made it interesting, also want to give you some props on the backrounds as you presented some related stuff it was again simple and that seems to work here so nice effort there, So very creative elegant and something exotic you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a cool art piece, some more darker shadow like feel in the backround would be a plus on this piece, but overall it was welldone.

ConnyNordlund responds:

Haha I thought the " were you being sarcastic at first.
Thank you!

As for the background; That's a good point. The piece was actually going to be a concept piece more than a illustration, I just dialed in the background in a few minutes so that it would make the characters more interesting. I know what you mean with darker shadows but I didn't want to go too dark so the characters become too unclear, since they had to work as concept pieces in the end.

[Digital Farmer]

Hmmm interesting

And this was an interesting drawing, its not exactly Black and white, but kind of is, but it is neat, the backround seems to have a base color and that was a nice touch would be nice if there was more color though maybe the backround base could be a sharp red or something, or even in this case his "HAT" could be a red or green, something that stands out and has more focus to it, just something to think about and you never know it can make it better, just have to experiment more with differant stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i was suggesting Experimenting with new ideas and stuff, some color would be a suggestion some odd part having some color or even the backround some vibrant color.

[Western Zombies]

Zombies cool

Very nicework here, this was my choice of something to review today and the zombies really stuck out, you really gave it the dark touch and feel of it and such, I like how you put a couple of "ZOMBIES" in this kinda like they are in some attack phase, even the backround was pretty decent and was notbad atall, the drawings are good here, nice use of color to give that dark and grungy feel but really good in giving off the dark touch to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So an idea might to put more "BLOOD" more dripping blood, and maybe even farther aproach put some "SHADOWED" zombies in the backround like in the distance.

Artist-Lost responds:

Thanks for the critique ^.^ I see what you meen, some dripping flesh and blood like they have just fed would be a great touch, and the zombie silhouettes would make a good impression of a horde rather then just a cute zombie couple out for a wilderness picnic