XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Waiting for a Turn]

Nice shine effect here

~~REVIEW~~
A nice piece here i like how you gave it lots of {SHINE} especially with the whole night and light shining on them, but anyways you have some nice character work aswell, very nice shades, and good poses aswell, and you gave them some good {POSES} like reading the paper and such, it all makes for a much better drawing with all the differant characters and such, now as to improve on this you could make the whole painting somewhat larger,and it wouldnt hurt to have abit more shine since you were going with alot of that, wouldnt hurt to spread that out abit more all around, maybe even some more shading in the backround, i can see how that would be harder with night and all, but with all that said it was not too bad at all, nice painting in deed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start you could make everything abit larger mainly the painting as to see more of the detail, Some more shine aswell wouldnt hurt.

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[Divinity]

Nice lighting effects

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art piece here, nice to see, you still doing artworks with the lighting effects and such, now for this particular piece, It looks like you have a big explosion or some sorta war and such, just alot is going on, maybe some sorta space ship behind and such, I love all the differant colors, and how theres alot of action going on, there is again too much going on aswell, so maybe you have to spread out stuff abit more so you can really create that scene you want too and by spreading out the images and design you can show much more details and more of your art ideas especially in this one, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the elements and effects more to show more of the detail

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[Night Watch]

Nice Texture

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i really like the {TEXTURE} in this and you actually have created a nice scene kinda like some sorta story here now ofcourse you could improve on this to bringout more stuff such as some effects on the character in the backround, like more of a {LIGHTING} effect, more of a {GLOW} to just be more shining around it something like that, maybe even have some smaller stars in the backround as to show some farther and closer stars, as you might in the real night sky, also this whole scene seems abit {BLAND} needs something else maybe a black cat walking around or some cute animal something like that, but its a good texture of art and you presented something neat here.so try and improve on those suggestions i made, and hope to see more next time, maybe next time you can tell the story just abit more, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more lighting effects, ad another walking character something like a cute animal, and more stars farther ones like in the distance

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[Les Paul]

Nice 3-d design

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good 3-d version i wouldnt mind seeimg some more pazaz, you had some shine on the base but wouldnt mind seeing that abit more, and the grey backround is ok but you should have done something more some crazy color or rainbow thing something to do with music would have really brought out the image alot better, nut what you have here is pretty good, very nice 3-d style just would have been alot neater with more flashy effects to it and all, just something that jumps out at you, so improving on this as suggested, but would be some more shine, more backround effect, more glitz and glamor, anyways nice job with what you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As to improve on this some more shine and more glitz like in the backround.

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HermanThaGerman responds:

Thanks for the review man.

I just make these images for the 3D model in it so i dont spent much time on the background.

either way, thanks for the review and i hope you enjoyed my work

[Happy holidays!]

Impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art you have here, very good shading and looking good and sexy and all that, the only few issues i really had with this one would be that the face expressions and emotion was not there, now dont get me wrong it was sexy as hell but the emotion was not there making it feel more like just a doll, the other thing was not bad at all just that it could use some backround to the scene something in a sexy setting would sufuce just fine, now these are just ideas and opinions i saw, but they are something that could make it much betterbut like i said its a pretty good and hella sexy drawing and you show off some good skills with it so nice job indeed, hope to see more of your work real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
give the character more life like emotion less doll like emotion, and some sorta backround would also help out.

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[Give me mah fish]

Nice Detail

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a nice drawing you have some good detail in there, allthough it is a drawing you should make it come alive with some {COLOR} and all, just abit anyways maybe have everything black and white and just the dragon in some color like a shart red, or even just the fish with will give more focus since there is alot of characters in this particular drawing and such, Now as for the drawing its pretty impressive i like the fine detail maybe also add a backround of some sorts to kinda give it a story of where they are and such. and as a nother detail point since the fish is dead and rotting maybe there a worm or two popping out somewhere, and maybe one of the birds has it, heh sorry but just though i would just throw in a few ideas that would really bringout the drawing more and make it more alive, but i like what you have sofar good stuff, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene would be a nice touch for improving the drawing as a whole, also adding some color or partial color to a focol point would be another great idea, and i suggested some worms coming out of the dead fish more little details like that really bring a drawing to life with a world of its own.

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ShadowElite951 responds:

Sadly, color in my artwork never sees color. Like maybe 1 out of a hundred drawings. Seriously lol. I'm just a lowly pencil doodler person. Not skilled with color and I tend to ruin the works. Backgrounds are another thing I tend to avoid. Mine tend to draw the attention from the primary focus. But I see how a little background could help balance the foreground.

Thank you!

[Phuss Flier: New Years Eve]

Decent start here

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one i like all the black and white style here and really seems like you cramped alot of stuff in here, i think you should spread it out abit more maybe even add a touch of color in there just a little bit give it that extra flare, you have some nice fine detail with differant stuff like the click on the ten and the differant fonts and stuff those i like but still seems all abit crowded so as said before spread it out again more so you can have a chance to see more of the fine detail, for the most part i really like it though, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i said you could spread out stuff abit more so it doesnt seem so cramped up

~~OVERALL~~
a good flyer thing but seems cramped.

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Galneda responds:

I agree, it's AWFULLY cluttered, and I'll try to keep that in mind in the future. I really had no forethought with this. The first thing I drew was the spiral, then the starburst at the source, and I thought I was going to make the spiral into a road. With street lamps and people walking around pointing inward, dirt and exposed pipes outward...but I eventually refined it in the time-limit specified in my comments into what you see. The result? Clutter. lol

The explicit instructions, though, were to make it black and white so they could print it on colored fliers. We'll see how they look in physical form.

Thanks for the badass review! I really appreciate it :D

[Tattoo Concept]

Nice design

~~REVIEW~~
Nice idea here, kinda like a tattoo, something i could probably see i see lots of nice detail and some nice detail work in here, now ofcourse i could see more of that aswell more {FINE-LINE} work would also benifit aswell, now as a non tattoo image i could see you adding some color in this, just a little here and there would be great, maybe like the tips of points and such, some reds and greens kinda to bring out the design abit better, also some backround color themes would also work in that aspect of stuff, now ofcourse that would be a more non tattoo design though, but other then that you have some nice design and linework with this one, and ill have to checkout your other works soon, so for now awsome job on this one, keep up the awsome designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like reds and blues and greens i know its meant to be more black and white style but with just a bit of color here and there maybe in the backrounds or some focol point to set aprt from the black and white it will show a more unique look, some "FRAMES/BORDERS" along the edges of your art piece might give it a more focused look and this piece just seems like it would look more complete with borders/frames

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