XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walk of the Mammoths]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece, with lots to see, all sorts of stuff, tobad you didnt ad in a differant tone of color though that might brig more focus to stuff, like this man, which he was part of the whole story like with the frogs and all, it all makes sense though, i really love all the differant characters like the ones that make the whole border of the windo into this story of all sorts of random and strange characters, so really awsome job on this one, i had fun reviewing this one and other pieces, just love the detail, so for this one if i was to suggest to improve on anything it would be again to be the bland spots, amybe even make some thicker borders, something along them lines, so that the art piece is more of a full art piece. but for what it is, its pretty awsome and very well detailed. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add to the bland spots, and make the borders abit thicker aswell.

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[Jesu Christos Fungus Experimen]

Awsome once again

~~REVIEW~~
Wow awsome indeed, every piece you make is full of awsome, so much detail, and love how you give it an old style feel, it really works well, the "BORDERS" here also give off the old feel, and the sephia tone really brings in that old style, which i really love, but i have to say its not even that, its the style, creativity and all the little stuff you ad in, such as this one the "STAR" on the middle of the head, or the guy in the one eye, and also you think outside the box which is again another awsome thing here, now im thinking you could even go more, like where the bland areas of the page are you could have "CRACKS" so it looks like its aging paper or something along them lines and all, something to try out anyways, so give it a try sometime, but anyways keep up the awsome detailed artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the bland parts of the paper or page look more aged, maybe even put some cracks in the borders aswell, to also give off that look.

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[Mountain of Goats]

Red is awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Wow nice once again as always, you amaze me with all the detail, and style you have on these, thats why you are one of my fave artists on here, but anyways, i love how you used the "REDS" here some darker areas and some not, and you gave this whole art piece, a "BORDER/FRAME" which was very nice indeed, now how can this be improved on hmm, i would ad a touch of blood red in there somehow just for the more focus on the red, but anyways good stuff here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
since this is all in reds have something blood red color with abit more focus on it.

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Jakubias responds:

Danke!

[Phantom]

Nifty sketch

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here was something, is it a ghost maybe not so sure, to be honest it looks like a guy with a gas mask on or something, hehe but anyways as for your sketch here the pecil work seems pretty good, maybe abit too dark at times, but still ok, i think you should have done something with the "EYES" like have them a differant color, maybe a green or blue something that sets them apart from the rest of the drawing but anyways, you do have a nice drawing here, i like that you had some backround and all, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad something to the eyes maybe a differant color or something

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[Fill In The Bubble]

Smooth artwork

~~REVIEW~~
And here we are with the awsome "SOFT" colors you like to use and all, you even left an open text box for something, now for me seeing this for the first time, i would assume he is saying, "WTF" or maybe something like "WHAAT" or just something really crazy since it seems like he is yelling it, now back to the colors, i love your use of colors on this and all of your art, just very soft and smooth as i like, and the character i dont know of this character but its pretty good, with you showing some good character details and really bringing the character emotion since he is yelling and all that good stuff, also love the backrounds, almost reminds me of the newgrounds style with the rainbow blast thingy, hehe, anyways once again you have presented some very nice artwork, my fave part about this all is the smoothness and soft colors that you have presented here, in really making a nice piece, So hope to see more of your work as you make it, and good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for this one i thought it was all alright, as for improving maybe fill in that text, and all but besides that it was just right if you ask me.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Space leaves place for imagination. ;) Thanks for the great review!

[Mario D]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i like this one of mario, he almost looks abit "FRENCH" even hehe, but anyways, this was neat and it had an artistic feel to it, i like that you didnt kill it with overpowering reds, the face was welldone and some good detail, gave him character, now if you ask me this could have had more work done on him like, the "SKIN" you should have gave it a pale or tan color not just the white, and in the backround added something, i noticed you dont do much work on backrounds? well i can understand that but also remember that it may give the art piece a more fuller effect and even tell a story of what you are working on, but anyways nice work and i did find this to be artistic and such, hell one last idea could have been that "LUIGI" is in the distance like a small one, nothing that would take away from the mario itself, something to try out in a future project or something, but once again an enjoyble and artistic mario here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some work with the backround something that shows more to the main character, i suggested a small luigi or something, and i also suggested some more color effort on marios skin, maybe even giving him a tattoo would be interesting.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Good point with the backgrounds, I draw scenery often but I don't think I've ever really combined them with something else in a vector, should do that, good tip with Luigi too. Thanks for the long review X!

[Hall of Angels]

Holy art

~~REVIEW~~
Ok love the lighting effects on this, and seems like your oldself is back on the whole "LIGHTING" effect style which i have grown fond of, now for this one being called "HALL OF ANGELS" i can agree with that one, but i also see another image on this like a sword of glory or a holy sword of some type, but it is something of holy, and the lighting effects really bring that to view so nice job there and yes you did show good effort and creativity, is this one of your best, i would say its in the top 3 of your works thats how much i like it, very welldone, and the effects are really showing forward once again, now as to improve onto this hmmm, This seems like it could use some more in the distance like with the blander spots or something, nothing crazy just something subtle in the distance some flying agels would be a nice touch actually, or maybe even a few stars in the distance, something that really shows it off, but anyways really nice art piece, let me know when you make more stuff so i can review it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some stars and or an angel in the distance on the left and or right sides, those were the bland spots

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review as for the blander spots all my creativity was exhausted LOL.