XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pushing Onwards]

Good and solid

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something interesting, it has some dark color tones wich is ok, the {CHARACTER} is well drawn and seems to be in a running pose, my only issue with any of this would probably have to be the backround, as it seemed to not match with the element of running, it does however match in design and color, so with that aside, why dont you make a backround that shows him really running more like wind and line stripes showing that may help and represent a running style more. kinda like a warp feel, everything else was pretty good though even the dark colors were ok and i love the little smile face on his cap, very nice indeed, keep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround could show more of a {WARP} kinda feel as to show the character in a more running mode.

~X~

[The Ozzman VS The Batman]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Now this has some nice texture here really nice texture, and really love how you added some {GLOW} around ozzy it allows us too see the seperation, so anyways nice touch there, this was a good depction of ozzy its more of a {YOUNG} ozzy though, maybe you could do a {NOW} ozzy hehe but anyways this was nice very good thinking with the {BAT} and all, not alot of people know that, maybe you should have showm more bats in the backround maybe with eaten {HEADS} might be someone bazaar but would fut the drawing niceley, but regardless it was awsome to see a drawing of ozzy, and you did an outstanding job, hope to see more of your work, now improving this would be hard but i noticed you presented alot of reds here maybe the backround itself should have been a differant tone?? anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres alot of reds i would suggest to change it up with colors that will reflect off eachother.

~X~

Merol responds:

I used some pictures of a more {NOW} Ozzy as references, so I'm not sure why he looks that young.

Heh, I think many people know that. It has been parodied lots of times (even by Ozzy himself)!!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

[army chick 2: BAZOOKA JANE]

Love the detail

~~REVIEW~~
Oh this was nice, it has that pose and you gave here the sexy look even as tough as she looks, i remember bazooka joe so this kinda fits with that theme and all, and like that the backround was not exactly blank but still had a little something, Now the colors are pretty good i like that it has the dingy feel, and like all the {DETAIL} you gave here like some bruises and such, also nice touch in not giving her some bruises in her girls hehe, but anyways nice and sexy form here, now as for improving onto this one, Now me since i like backrounds i would work there but you are not too into it so i would leave it as is i suppose, but anyways great piece here you have i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more bruses here and there maybe a scratch on her lady to show she is really out battling the baddies.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks buddy

[OUTTA WORK]

Cool

~~REVIEW~~
Wow your art seems to get better the older it is, but i like this one, as i am a starwars fan, and while this is all drawing, i would have liked to see some color maybe even if just a little here and there maybe paint the {GUNS} only might allow more focus on the image and make it more of a uniqe style, but the storm trooper is neat and i really like how you take something already popular and add a little {HUMOR} to it with a line here or there allthough i thought you could have gone abit more with the humor on this one, maybe in the backround you could have put other starwars characters on strike or homeless even lol, would be another good little funny moment that would reflect more on this, but regardless its very good and funny, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color maybe just a prop is colored, and more in the backround to add more to the humor plot.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

theres no pleasing some

[mario eats a fleshy mushroom]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was awsome, Never thought i would see toad in such an uncanny way but i have to give it to you for presenting some very Zombified characters, you did a good job on the guts and eating up brain i think it is haha, its scary almost though, i do wish some of the paint color was not as faded as it is, maybe more texture in there would be one key, give it some brighter colors also, i know you have the whole zombie feel going on but this was still interesting and scary at the sametime, only because marie is such a cute character hehe, but from what you have here its pretty welldone and shows you have put lots of effort, You should do other mario characters like luigi and such, now i know your style is zombies but wouldnt mind seeing abit more grousome stuff aswell, this one was abit pg lol, anyways nice job, i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More grousome would be a nice touch,

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

you want more grusome then mario rpping open the head of toad and drinking his brains.

[back to the undead]

A blast from the past

~~REVIEW~~
Haha now this was cool, really takes you back to the classic movie, i have come to love, you seem to really like {ZOMBIES} but i like this one you have some good dark colrs, and this is neat, how its back to the future, and zombie mixed in so nice job on that aspect of things. Now what happened to the car is sad, bbut it was a decent little piece with a blast from the past, you presented us with some nice art on a classic, with some great use of color and you even added some color into this piece, wish there was some more parts and such, maybe in another future art piece, but anyways i love it takes me back.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it like a continuing piece with more understanding in each piece

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

we are doing the blues borthers next

[heaven. just a jump away]

Entertaining comic

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute like a {COMIC} and i could totally see this in the sunday comic strip, but anyways you really put some good humor into this now i was looking at this and thought is Jesus telling him to jump to the other side, to save him, or is jesus telling him to jump in because he is not worth saving? lol just thought it was funny because you never know, allthough that may not have been your intent, now to improve on this maybe put more dead in the hole, maybe to make it even funnier you can have some one hangin the jesus side but jesus has yet to help him just another silly idea i thought, infact i wouldnt mind seeing this in a more comic like feel, you could really tell a tale with this one hehe, anyways just another crazy thought, but it was funny and i enjoyed what you presented us with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe take it to a new level and add a comic like feel, with {FRAMES} also suggested a few wacky ideas for more humor above in review.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

wacky

[could it be true love?]

Interesting lovers

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we go, i love zombies and this was another decent ones from you, the {BLER} was a nice touch i thought, and you can kinda see some thought bubbles in the backround, the color and shades is dim wich seems to fit well its a very grungy look, I like that fact that you put more then just one zombie and there seems to be others but very very faint, thats ok too, i think you could have done a little more with blood, maybe they just came from lunch and have some dripping fresh blood?? well its an idea anyways, but none the less this was another impressive piece by you, as improving i suggested a few ideas, that would show more of the details, with fresh blood and all, but other then that it was alright, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fresh blood could be showing?

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

well its done now so no room for improvement

[fei lung (LEGEND!)]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece by you, as always great stuff, There is alot of line work in this one, cool and shows alot of the detail, and shows his action pose, would have liked to see the {PANTS} not all black but maybe lighter and with some shades in it or even some of that nice line-work in it, And with the white backrond kinda gives it a bland feel, so maybe some sorta backround would sufice, maybe some fighting place or even other fighters in the backround, you could even show some beat up fighters to really show he means busness, but really this was a nice pice and was very welldone, so awsome job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome linework here maybe with some backround you could show a more full piece,

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks mate another awesome critique