XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I-Bot (CrisisMode)]

Sleek and awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this one, love the detail, and all the effects in this one, awsome detail, i wish the {BEAMS} were more flasy like you did i think with the blue robot and such, but still this one was still good, maybe even the robot should have had abit more shine to it and all, but it should be a great piece for {ROBOT} day, the wall was neat but it looked to fine in detail maybe it shoould have more of a wear and tear on it like if it was just busted open or something, just looks too clean and all, but it was a pretty impressive art piece and great piece for robot day, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the robot, some more glare on the light beams, and more dirty look to the wall, just a few ideas that could make it much better i thought.

~X~

[want a fairy?]

Lots to see

~~REVIEW~~
I like this because there was lots to see, and there are lots of wonderful colors to see aswell, Now this kind of picture really shows all the differant stuff going on also showing how much effort the artist put into it, so props to you for that as its pretty impressive, one of my main issues i thought this could have had would be that it was all too "SMALL" i would like to see it on a much larger canvas, there seems to be so much happening i think more focus needs to be on each area like more understanding of whats going on in this scene, just an idea from the viewers point of view, your art style and color use is notbad, i thought some more texture could be used though and maybe even some more deeper colors, again making a larger piece here you could have more focus on all the happenings in the picture, So all in all its a nice art piece with lots to see and some wonderful colors, and once again by making it larger you can ad more of the scene, and adding improved colors so with this few tips i hope it helps, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i think a much larger canvas could help to show off much more of each and every little point, some more deeper colors might also help to showing off the colors better.

~X~

[Dad]

Brutal

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so when i first saw this i didnt think much of it, but i do have to say it is sorta brutal, that poor little guy is getting cut into, i thought it was sad in a way, but that was probably the idea i supose, but anyways i like the newgrounds logo thing, i thought it could be slightly better with a more thicker "BORDER" the one you have there is notbad but a more thicker one might bring it out more, and i thought there could be more blood around here and there, now a few more things is i thought the veins were abit much too much were on the upper arm, and might look more realistic if you lost a few from the upper arm area, while still keeping some of the lower ones, and while we are on the body, ad some of the blood there splattered on the upper chest. so that its more of a realistic feeling and such, Now while i really like this, i also thought this might comeout better with some backrounds, i know you have the small version back there, it just would be neat to see more, of a backround like maybe some dungeon or area from the game of the character, something along them lines that reflect the character more, anyways good piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things like, more blood splatter, some backround scene, some less veins, and more focus on the newgrounds logo, just a few tips and ideas that i hope will help.

~X~

Sonucais responds:

It sure helps :) You need to realize this was made long time ago.

[Rose Red]

Black bird

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work here, this is a nice art piece, i like black birds and this was a pretty neat pne and you did show lots of great effort great texture and drawing, it seemed to all come together, the rose and vine was a nice touch, the vine i thought could have looked abit better especially if he is holding it in his beek there, not sure if its called beek but anyways, maybe make the rose have dropping some rose "PEDALS" that would be a good idea and it would give it more of a story here, now as for the backround i thought it was ok, but seemed too bland just colors didnt seem to fit in my opinion, and i though maybe if you had him on a tree branch, and or by some rose bush of some kind that would seem more fitting, but anyways with all that said it was a nice piece keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the rose more bent at the vine where he holds it, and maybe have a pedal or two droping, and a differant backround would sufice, more details explained above

~X~

[Midnight]

Pretty awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice and deep {BLUES} of color blues and whites seem to always comeout best like this i like the moon you have in view, now with the moon you could have it have a more {GLOW} effect maybe even some aura around it, but i think it would look much better if you gave it a much more whiter effect as it would look better especially with the blue backrounds, very nice job though, and with what looks like to be the {PLANTS} that was neat and giveing a more just sadow feel, I think you could give the whole art piece one more touch and that might be have someone walking in the sadow form, by the plants maybe on the bottom and such, it would seem fitting like someone walking across the plants with the moonlight in the backround, but anyways, make the moon more bright, and all, but other then that its a pretty good art piece, i look forward to seeing more from you. but anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some whiter moon lighting, maybe even some glow around it, also another shadow of a person or something.

~X~

Imacow responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.

[Fractals and Light]

Yeah you get a 9 from me

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one i give a big "WOW" it is truly awsome in color light and not just that but design so you really outdid youself there and presented something really awsome, now it does seem like you put lots of time and effort in this, from what seems like the "WINGS" and the black and grey design is something really neat, now those parts i really liked it has somee much great visuals, so props to you there its "FANTASTIC" Now you know me i tend to find stuff that doesnt seem so fitting, so like i said the top points i said was great, but the stuff at the very bottom kinda doesnt fit i dont know why it just seems off, i bet if you removed the bottom stuff and just had more of the grey and black design like you do at the very top it would be just "PERFECT" because to me everything else is amazing its just that bottom stuff thats doesnt fit, so if you ever do make another version that would be my suggestion of change and improving but for what it is, its pretty awsome stuff, keep up the awsome art making,.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The bottom half bugged me so that would be my main issue as i explained above some changes where its just the grey and black design would make it more fitting

~X~

Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i would remove the bottom half next time i only added it cuz it couldnt be called fratals and light then.