XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Digital Farmer]

Hmmm interesting

And this was an interesting drawing, its not exactly Black and white, but kind of is, but it is neat, the backround seems to have a base color and that was a nice touch would be nice if there was more color though maybe the backround base could be a sharp red or something, or even in this case his "HAT" could be a red or green, something that stands out and has more focus to it, just something to think about and you never know it can make it better, just have to experiment more with differant stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i was suggesting Experimenting with new ideas and stuff, some color would be a suggestion some odd part having some color or even the backround some vibrant color.

[Western Zombies]

Zombies cool

Very nicework here, this was my choice of something to review today and the zombies really stuck out, you really gave it the dark touch and feel of it and such, I like how you put a couple of "ZOMBIES" in this kinda like they are in some attack phase, even the backround was pretty decent and was notbad atall, the drawings are good here, nice use of color to give that dark and grungy feel but really good in giving off the dark touch to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So an idea might to put more "BLOOD" more dripping blood, and maybe even farther aproach put some "SHADOWED" zombies in the backround like in the distance.

Artist-Lost responds:

Thanks for the critique ^.^ I see what you meen, some dripping flesh and blood like they have just fed would be a great touch, and the zombie silhouettes would make a good impression of a horde rather then just a cute zombie couple out for a wilderness picnic

[Algebra.]

Nice drawing

So here is a nice drawing, its well done actually this was kind of interesting and funny at the same time not sure if the legs and body portions are supose to be that way, but you did a fantastic job with everything else and the "SHADING" was fantastic nice detail and nice eye for detail with everything else so it was a clever little piece of artwork i thought, nice effort all around, as for improvment onlything i can think of would maybe to add some color and some sort of backround aswell just a little something to improve on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some suggested ideas and tips, maybe a backround, some color and or some body portions but it does look interesting in that sense.

[Dem Hips]

Nice pose

Haha so i must say that this art piece was something differant has a good pose with the girl even all the skin tones and texture really cameout well and made for some really nice art style here, i really like the"POSE" and you have a view shot of looking upwards that was something differrant but i guess it allowed for more view of the texture and was something differant so notbad there, the onlything i thought could be better was the "BACKROUND" as it wastoo dark maybe some differant color choices in the stripes would work, well something to think about in anycase.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought could be better was the Backround as it was too "DARK" maybe some differant color choices in the stripes would work, well something to think about anyways it was notbad, good art piece.

[Emperor Eva, General Blackie]

Decent sketch

This was a pretty neat drawing more like a sketch though, so it would really be nice to see more of a full version of this maybe one with full colored options and such, and also a bigger scale in size of "CANVUS" so while it is just a sketch it could be abit better, and there could be a few added things of improvment more suggested below, I do like the sketch, its pretty good and shows the effort and skill and even put time into it, but a nice effort regardless of it being a sketch or not, anyways keep up the decent art work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned above there could be some improvments on this sketch, maybe a larger canvus size, some added color would be another point of improvment, and maybe even some ink work aswell.

[Daft Punk]

Haha cute

OK so this was cute i even like thelittle animated stuff you got going on here, also like the three differant "VIEW" shots shown, so the effort is there and it really shows in the detail of close ups and such, the "HAPPY-FACE" was another nice focus spot that was a pretty good idea i thought, the one thing i thought about this it could have been larger, the whole piece, maybe even addings some borders would have been neat, but anyways nice job and nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested above, add some larger view screen, and even some borders but most of all this was a decent piece.

[Witch Hut]

Nice and dark

Sothis was interesting i love this for alot of things actually, starting with an overtop view great view there, the little "ANIMATIONS" was also a plus aswell, Then there is the actual drawings very fine work, nice detailing and nice use of shades and color, it all came together to make for one dark moment, so the effort does comeout in this and thats a plus, ithink the onlything that could make this better was that you could make the canvas or view screen area a much larger scale, something to think about anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there was alot of possitive stuff here the only improvment would be to show a larger scale canvus so maybe you can show more stuff or more of theworld you are creating, and allowsfor more detail to show off aswell.

BagamCadet responds:

Thanks you.
The original is a normal drawing without an animated smoke and flies, and is alot more larger.
I just made it smaller so that the animations would run smoothly.

[Agua y fuego.]

Wow i love this one.

This was something neat here it was unique and differant, i really love random stuff like this because it really shows the creativity of the art style and artpiece itself, the "EYES" really cameout well and the raindrop style here is notbad either, In my opinion i think there is alot of "WHITE" areas in there that may be your intent but with the big cigar or joint maybe abit darker area there so that you can acent the "SMOKE" and fire of it abit better, but besides that this was pretty good i thought, I amreally looking forward to more of what you have in store for us here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned, too much white areas maybe some darkening up here and there would be nice, and more smoke effect aswell, just an opinion though.

Jlescobar responds:

thanks for watching, and your opinion ;)

[Controllers - Super Famicon]

Wow

Wow i remember this, this takes me back because way back when, before the super nes cameout this was the version over seas, so it was pretty neat, the controllers cameout nice, love the "SOFT" feel you are giving it here as it is realisticly, i love the shine you gave it, really nice work here, cant see anything that could be better as its alreaty pretty good if youask me, but maybe a more "3-D" version would be a plus, anyways nice job here takes you back to yesteryear.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned its already as good as can be but maybe a 3d version of some sort

datamouth responds:

yeah. i had the US version of the sues. with the lavender buttons. i always was a bit jealous of the people that had the non US version. the color buttons were so dope. i will make a 3D version for sure. i already started an xbox one and i'm planning on doing the Turbogrfx (with the turbo buttons) and the genesis. eventually i might do NES and Sega Master System ones. thanx for the great review!