XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mantis]

Nice work

So first off I would like to say that I found this pretty interesting it was differant and has a unique feel to it, so I was glad to have found this, I like your style here its a good piece, and kinda jumped out at me. but thats what made this all the more interesting. A nice piece of drawing here, the Praying mantis is a scary outside insect of sorts and was scared of them as a kid, so good drawing you did it to its exact detail. Now i was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And i do look forward to more of your work here soon enough. there are some things that could have a more Polish to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And there it is anawsome creation that shows the efforts, and I wouldnt mind seeing a tad more improvment points as its never a dull time for improvments even just the little ones, I would also Find it very Helpful with more options. so here are a few improvment options and choices to chose from. Wouldnt mind seeing more of a shine on the eye globes but it being in pencil may hold back on that.

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[ClampWrench]

Nice drawing

Now here was a nice art piece, it was differant and unique, pretty neat how you made this comeout, So to start off this is a great art piece and i really like what you have done here, and hope you continue to keep up the skills on success to fantastic stuff. And here we have another good drawing everything to an exact T, I wouldnt mind more of a "SHINE" you did ad some but maybe more focus on the shine and sparkle Alrigh you have something good here i like the artwork that you have presented here now I wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and i do look forward to more soon. Yould extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I try and always suggest some form of improvments and such, So here are some ideas a little bit of advice, and i hope you take a good look into them. Sosome things i know you need to make Priority but atleast look into some of these ideas that could make this somewhat better. maybe more focus on the shine and sparkle on those corners and whatnot.

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[Crab]

Nice work as always

This was pretty neat, shows off some of your skill and showssome even more of the effort put into this, so thats always a plus, you can really tell when someone puts the time in on something and this one shows. So i hope you continue those standars because it does show well. And here is a good drawing of a crab and I thought the shadows came out pretty good maybe more focus on deeper shadows would be a plus, just something to think about. But anyways a decent art piece, nice effort here, and i really liked it, Andmost of all i love the style you have here, keep it up. maybe a few touch ups but besides that it was notbad at all. this is something i would tell all my friends anyways good day for now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here I found a good art piece that was really jumping out at me, it was interestinga nd abit artistic, it can be even better with a few fixes here and there, I wouldnt mind seeing improve from what you have it as, so here are a few ideas that could help in that improvment so try some of the ideas out. would say more focus on the shadows more texture and more deeper ones aswell

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[Strange Sailor]

Different

Emitting from this piece is some unique style about it, even gives off a mysterious effect about it, But thats what caught my attention on this one. I found this to be interesting but also noticed it had some "BLAND" spots that could be filled with some kind of activity and whatnot to give the art piece a more full effect about it, notbad work though. Its this type of style does great at times and other times its just average, But this time you have caught my interest and I like what I have seen sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Creating something like this is perfectly fine, but adding more to it more details the little things here or there is always a plus in making it standout even more. So lets see if a few ideas work. So as stated above there was some bland areas that could use touching up other then that it was a different and unique piece.

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[X Man 2]

Golden

This was a bit different and kind od nifty, I wont ad any filler here just want to state that this was a bit on the different side but thats what I enjoyed about it. The skin texture looks very golden maybe that is the idea here, but I must say you really gave this piece some "EMOTION" like her is running, I wouldnt mind seeing a crouwd of on lookers in the backround cheering him on somehow. There are things that could be smoother but I will talk about help methods in the help section, not sure if this needs too much work anyways, no art is perfect but you still have something of interest here. you did bring a balance of elements that made this pretty nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have an interesting submission here, So lets build off of it and see what we can do with this piece, maybe add some depth here or there or something, but lets get some ideas rolling. seeing a crouwd of on lookers in the backround cheering him on somehow. would be a plus to the backround detail of it all.

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[Exp]

Decent and dark

And here we start up with another art entry, Its always tricky finding the right words for the right pieces, not too harsh nor too easy on anything but lets get this one going regardless. I like the dark feel here on this one, and alot of times with dark elements the lighted areas could use a glow and more of shine like the sword and lighting But now we do come to the end of this review or close to it and before I get to any helpful options I just want to say it was something different and thats good when it comes to artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so now we come to this part of the review and I would say not the best part of it but I am sure we can find some things to work on here and there maybe a small detail or maybe just the directionlets give it a shot. So lets give this a shot, maybe a helpfull idea here or a tip there maybe some insight on your direction, but regardless lets figure a few things out. could use a glow and more of shine like the sword and lighting, even the demons "EYES" could have a different color maybe a brighter green or yellow.

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[Halo: Olive-Drab]

Notbad

And here we are with some artwork may it be old or new you can never go wrong with imagination and thats what we start off here. Aww cant ever forget halo as that was part of my gaming world, While this is an older art piece it still cameout decent maybe a bigger canvus for more of the detail to flow though, And I would even think about adding a "GLOW" to the visor screen to give it that extra buff. Now As I wind down on this piece of art I just want to say this was actually a decent piece, some extra added effects would be nice but overall its decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well what can I say art is not so easy to review but I think I did find a few things we could work at or add in, here is what I came up with. Maybe some glow in the helm or visor, and maybe adding a larger canvus view for more details to show up.

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[Break the Chains!]

Decent

And these drawings look decent. I wouldn't mind seeing them more bunched together somehow and adding something in the backround would be a plus. just something to think about but overall this was pleasing on the eye.

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[DX XD]

This was kind of interesting

I like the black and white feel here I sense that this may have been better with a touch of color somehow though but overall you gave it that touchof darkness but still comes to life so nice efforts here on this one.

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[Point and Clicks 2014]

Haha these are cute

Ha I must sy these are kind of cute, simple nice solid colors and interesting, while not a lot of detail here they are still amusing and entertaining. I can see them being used for a number of stuff, but anyways nice work here, I like what you have done here.

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TinyStuffz responds:

Thank you! ^.^