XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Split]

Decent kinda artistic.

Very artistic with this one, i love how there were differant color bars comming across here and there over the face and such, that to me gave off the artsy feel and overall made it a more enjoyble piece, the actual drawing was very cool too but was not focused on due to the color bars but its the whole piece one must admire, and you presented a nice piece here and i rather enjoyed it very much so nice job on this one. i hope to see more like this style from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im thinking if you lessen on the color bars you could have more focus on the actual drawing, but other then that this was pretty impressive.

[Gish 2 teaser art]

Kinda dark but pretty cool

Wow this one was pretty dark, but the detail and texture was fantastic, but this is a great creature and you really brought it to life, now it is kinda hard to see some of the details because it is so dark, and could use some sorta blood "DRIPPING" from his mouth and or jaw, the other thing that lacked was the words "GISH" it seemed such plain of a font maybe you could style it up with a better looking font and even possibly shine it of with some lighting effects, might even go well with everything looking dark.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentioned some blood from the mouth and maybe even a better font something with some shine and lighting effects to it, besides that it was a decent art piece.

[Look Away]

Decent

I really like the feel of this one, the red and white colors blend so well, and its almost like a "MOLD" Of some sort, the backround seemed to be cool aswell and also has that mold touch, you said you didnt like the "FACE" but i think it fit perfectly with everything else, so awsome job on this piece it has an artistic feel, any tips on improving, i might have had the backround, two differant color tones and not the same as the character so theres more focus on the character,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For more focus on the character there could be a differant color tone on the backrounds, even red and blue would work.

[Alien >:0]

Decent but needs more

Ok so this one was rather "SIMPLE" not that, that is a bad thing but you could have put a little more effort in, possibly adding some "BACKROUNDS" would have helped aswell as making the canvas larger as it was just kinda small, also more texture and color in the aliens skintone wouldnt hurt eiether, so there were a few things just metioned that could have made this much better, more skin texture, some backrounds, better shading, and a larger canvas size, just a few things to think about, anyays it was notbad, kinda on the cute side.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvas so you can put more stuff in with more to see even the little details you cant see too much if it was on a smaller size, so forsure go with a larger canvas. but besides that more skin texture, some backrounds, better shading, etc.

[Waterfall]

Vibrant colors

Really nice and vibrant colors you have on this one, especially with the waterfall, the colors just jump out at you and thats what caught my attention, You even showed some good lighting effects where the light would hit, would have been nice to see some sun just above the rocks though, but regardless this was pretty neat very "VIBRANT" colors, fresh and sharp looking, maybe add a few more sparkle lighting effects aswell, but other then that this was a great piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would be nice to see the "SUN" and its effects add a few more sparkle lighting effects aswell

[Pig Skin Classic]

another odd one from you

But this was pretty good its a start in the right direction so that was a plus, the pig skin was the right color and texture, and the backround accented it well, the whole canvus should be larger and you should think about adding some "BORDERS" it would really improve on this piece, adding some more time and effort to the texture aswell would be nice, and the font you chose was notbad but could be slightly better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so as mentioned some borders would be nice, some more textuture and even some better font looking, but overall this was notbad at all.

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[Man of the wo]

Odd

Well this is an odd piece, it does need more effort and seems more like you were just testing stuff, but its ok and i like the molding and blending of the colors in this one, you should have took more time, and put more effort and used more colors and such. the green is overwelming you should mix it up with differant colors and such. anyways this was ok but could be better as mentioned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some advice would be adding a mix of colors taking your time and really putting more effort fourth

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[Commission-SomeGirls]

This was cute

Ok so this was cute, i like all the use of "COLORS" on this and all, and the drawings of the characters were pretty good and amusing, very detailed and you gave it a fresh look aswell, This had a cute look fresh and stylish and with that im thinking it could use some borders, that might complete it even better then what it is, some colorful bright and fancy borders would be great with this, besides that this was pretty good and i liked the color theme here, anyways good work, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some nice borders something bright and color related something fancy, i think thats all this piece is really missing.

[CHAOS]

Love the color theme here

That was pretty nifty if you ask me, love the color theme, wouldnt exactly call it "TWO-TONE" because of the extra color but guess its in thesame type of symbol and such, the colors are great and comeout well this is nothing fancy but more simple and thats what jumps out at me on this is that its simple yet complex with the color and character, so you gave it a nice fresh style and thats what i really enjoyed about this, besides that i was really glad to have seen this, and all i can really saynow is keep up the greatwork, and look forward to seeing much more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this has everything it can, and you dont want to detail it or add effects since the simple is really working here.

[brain-shot the thought sniper!]

Nice and simple

The idea here wa spretty simple and nice, the brian in a dome was another neat idea, this could use a few things and some ideas might to make the "FEET" bigger they seemed aout of place somehow, and adding some shine in differant places would also be nice, like on the"DOME" covoring the brain then on more metal parts of the armor, as for the backrounds that was pretty neat kinda simple maybe giving a more darker feel to that would also be a nice touch aswell, but anyways those ideas and tips could really help on this whole piece, but besides all tha, this was notbad at all, kind of simple but still pretty nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things mentioned were, more shine on a few focus points including the dome over the brain, and the foot seemed off kinda small, and last but not least, but darken up the backround somehow abit more.