XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark pass caravan]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
This is differant for sure, i like the black and white style and there alot of stuff to see here, maybe with some reds and oranges it might spice up the image up just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color maybe half of it is in red and the rest in black and white or maybe just a small portion is in color

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pingui responds:

first of all , thanx for commenting and raiting my work , my original intention was to create a black and white picture , i might add some colour in further projects , but for this , i'd like to keep it as it is , neatherless , thanx for your opinion , and have a nice whatever you may be having
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MementoMori

[Grooooovy...]

wicked

~~REVIEW~~
wow now that is pretty wicked great drawing awsome texture and great shades of color, just needs a backround now, this character kinda reminds me of something outa starwars, anyways great drawing here, cant wait to see whatelse you come out with

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a slight backround would be nice maybe some other creatures lingering in the backdrop

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[Sunrise In Space]

Dazling

~~REVIEW~~
This is "DAZZLING" the effects are spectacular and amazing, the shine and glows you have throughout this seem to really shine through, this could really be great as a screen saver or just a desktop nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see some borders/frames around this make it look more like a poster

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[Star Wars Funnies: Ackbar]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
aww another funny and entertaining comic strip here, i still think there should be another strip so that you have two rows, and that way you can get off more jokes and humor, anyways hood and funny stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i said add a second strip on these

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[Twitter Bird]

Tweet

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was a pretty good idea you have here, the colors and texture was very in-depth, i like the amount of detail you put into this, im thinking there is something to make this abit more like the twitter version and theme

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some quotes all around in the backround as to show all the tweets and such

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[Deus Warmachine]

nice design

~~REVIEW~~
You have a nice design here and i like all the differant models and differant versions, i find that this art piece is abit on the smaller side so maybe you could make it larger

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the view screen abit larger as to see more of the details and such

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[Violence]

nice creature here

~~REVIEW~~
this was pretty good, i like the creature and even like the killing of the man, even the blood is good, this art piece could look better and more realistic if there was some sorta blood spatter on the ground

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some blood spatter on the ground, give it that more realistic feel

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[Cloak's doin' Kill Bill]

Its entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was so-so the colors seemed not right there is not much texture, and shades in the colors, you made a decent design though, maybe the character itself needs abit more personality though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more characteristics to the character

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[On the Roof Tops]

hmmm notbad

~~REVIEW~~
the character was the main focus here which seems very welldone, but that building in the backround doesnt match to well, the main character has a 3d feel while the building is more of a "FLAT" feel to it and all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on making the building not look so flat it needs some sorta 3d portions so that it all matches with the character at hand

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BearPawMedia responds:

Thank ya very much ^_^

Yeah, I need to work on my backgrounds for sure. >_<

[{BT} The Musician]

I like this

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat like a silince of moment, this was bland in the backround but that might be for the best if anything you could add some audiance in the backround maybe just the heads

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above add some shadowed people in the backround

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BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree, people might make a nice addition to this scene.