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[I-bot Reinterpretation]

I-Boot complete

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i have reviewed any of your work, but i was glad to see you finally finished this guy, took you awhile but seems like its all done. and here in the final version you have trully made him complete with all out color in the backround, and shine and shaded areas, so the shades on this have seemed to really comeout well and i was pretty impressed with the final version here, i like it how it seems his head is just popping out of his body, that adds abit to his cuteness and all, I love the "SHINE" you gave to one end, while still giving some shows to the otherside, and with the backround you really put fourth the color and it just reflected well with the lighter tones of the robot itself, so all and all a very welldone robot and completion to the I-BOT something that i had totally forgot about, so nice job indeed on this, Now as to improve, im not sure you have covered alot of the bases and really made this an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe the bottom end of his gun shoould have some paint stains or something to show he has been paininting, just a thought though

~X~

[Won't You Be My Neighbor]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well this was very good i thought, i do see the effort you put into this, and you do have some good artistic value in this, kinda like a doll but then not, you really gave it a "SOFT" feel aswell that really brought out the unique side of this, now with all that said, i did really enjoy this it has some great detail and great effort on your side of things, I see you have a mask on there i would think about taking that off, and if its not a doll and say a real person, maybe you could have a "TEAR" and that would give this piece some emotion, it tells a story about this and what it can be or what it is, but really great job on putting that effort fourth, as to improve on this, not sure, i did mention no mask and adding a tear, and maybe even showing more of a "FULL BODY" for the extra touch of this, and i would go as far as even putting some scars on the body then even maybe some glowing eyes in the distance, just a few ideas to really spice things up on this, So anyways great piece, hope to see more great work from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentions, a tear, more emotion like maybe if it could be a person, some other detail touches here and there in the backround, something along them lines

~X~

[Shield (Orange)]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Ok wow this was really impressive and has to be your best work, it certainly is one of my faves of the day, i really like how you changed a dull color "ORANGE" and made it look really good, probably the black over the orange just works so well, as for the design of the shield i thought it was welldone with some good detail, and shows lots of effort, I like the shades within the shield, and you just thought this one out very well, so i was impressed with that portion of this great art piece, Now the backround i thought you could have done much better, the white just seems too bland, you could have had a "SHADED" grey and it might also bring the picture out more without taking any focus away from the main piece here, but anyways a great piece of art here, good colors and a good design, So all and all, another great piece i enjoyed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the white backround, more greish, and that might be it its pretty good though.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review, glad ya liked it!

[Only Human]

An interesting image here

~~REVIEW~~
Now with this one seems like you went all out, you have lots of color and even borders and frames, thats something i try and tell others about, and here you have really presented that, I like it how you didnt kill it with color either, but you really had some in there and some not colored, so that was pretty neat, i like the style with this as the linework was pretty impressive and again it all came together so really nice job once again, Now this had a sorta meaning to it and thats what i also liked about it, with the bottle and such, i think you should have had the bottle colored with some portion of color for the soda amount or whatever it was, it was notbad at all, and i had another pleasure of reviewing this, another pleasent piece, if anything can be improved i would add a touch of backround color but not too much, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a tint of shade in the backrounds, and some more tint color in the bottle were the liquid cuts off.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the long review X!

[Merry Christmas]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was interesting, it seems to work for the holidays and the theme you were going for, i like all the design and bright colors i thought, seemed very pleasent,, and just right, it was abit artistic and had all these colors just really made for an awsome piece, i like the light beams coming down, and what i really liked about this was the, Differant colors and how they all flowed into eachother giving the next, a much new feel then the last, really great stuff all around i thought, Would have been nice if you added some town and people down there somehow would make it even more pleasent, so all and all, a good piece here nice and pleasent colors that all blended well together, and overall i give this an A+ So nice job indeed, i Really liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad some people a town and show them in there jolly way.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, people would be a good addition, thanks for the review!

[Suffer No Guilt]

Fantastic design and detail

~~REVIEW~~
and wow this was as awsome as they can get i suppose, so much "DETAIL" from the eyes to the horns and lots of fine detail here and there it all just really flowed as one but there are somany pieces, i even noticed that the horns were almost transformed into like moons, now with this one on the color seems if like a fresher color tone was used then in the other ones, but again and you will probably hear this alot from me but ad another bit of color to have more focus on it, but you are on the right track with the amount of detail and effort you put on, anyways verywell done here. So improvments would be to ad some color maybe some bright reds and or blues as explained for some focus since there is so much all around and such. anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well again i suggested some color just a tad here and there.

~X~

Jakubias responds:

Roger that! Thanks for pulling the effort to actually write something with sense, I appreciate it!

[Excrement]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is another great piece and you are going on my faves list, but anyways with all your work including this one you give meaning to these pieces you do like this one with the drawings and such, very welldone, the sketching of all this, is very well done and seems to all fit well together, you also really make it all kinda funny in a way that you dont see, so props to you for making this an awsome piece, Now to improve onto this i thik it could have a more "BORDER" like presence, so it seems like a poster type of thing, so maybe ad frames/borders onto it, the text shows it off as something like that, Now again i say ad abit of color like maybe the pile in his hand could be slowly turning into gold or something, just to give the idea, but anyways it was a nice piece as always and glad to see your work on here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested possibly some borders and frames, but its just an idea, and you already have something really good.

~X~

Jakubias responds:

Thanks, that border thing might actually work.

[The Tongue]

Brilliant piece

~~REVIEW~~
Really awsome artwork here, i really noticed, it right off the bat, but anyways you are a unique, artist and your drawings, the style is really neat, it has some good full view of lots of detail, and i like the one tone it is, but i would like it to have is some color not alot, just a little bit like little points here and there, like say for this piece you could have the picture as is except the backround star could be in color like a red or even yellow to really bringout things, but fro the mostpart its some pretty interesting work that i really enjoyed, and i do plan to checkout some of your other works, this one with the frogs was very welldone and lots of detail, and does show off some story you really presented it well, and im glad i had the chance to review this so nice job indeed, The color tone on this was very neat, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a touch of two-tone-color, would be nice but its pretty good.

~X~

Jakubias responds:

Thanks! Maybe someday I'll do little experiment with those colors.

[MindChamber the begining]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Now i have not seen work from you in a long while and this was pretty impressive, now here you really give some story in this image, the "MIBDCHAMBER" and such a brilliant piece i thought, very dark though, might be kinda neat if it was somewhat brighetr, or have the brighter parts more brighter like really lighted up or something like that, Or another idea might be here would to have the robots eyes "GLOW" somehow maybe a neon color like red or green i think it will give that alive feel, kinda like a mad scientest has just created his Frankenstein or something hehe, but anyways great colors here and verywell done, and awsome job all around, cant wait to see more of your work and the many robots aswell, so awsome job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested maybe glowing of the eyes, and maybe more brighter shining or lighted points, just a few ideas i thought.

~X~

[Japanese Wolf]

Needs brighter colors

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one was the most oddest ones of the bunch, while it does remind me of a wolf and is the most clearest of all the other designs, its also seems to have abit lesser quality to it, it might be because the texture is not showing so well or theres less color to this, it might even be that the color is that of a darker one, something to think about, as the Brighter colors "RED" "BLUE" "GREENS" tend to comeout much better, the whole moon above is also kinda odd, and the "LETTERING" seems too think over the other designs, but anyways its not my faveourite by any means but i still like it, and as i have said in the others it has a pattern likeness and needs that extra push to give it its own "UNIQENESS" for this one i think it needs a brighter color, I would suggest using more then one color, like you could have the Wolf one color and the "MOON" another brighter color, it might show off better, and then as said before backrounds would be nice and give it that uniqueness i been talking about, so these are all things to think about when creating these and or new designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated, something with more of a personal touch on each one so they are not such the same, in this one some new colors for the wolf even a second color for the moon would sufice, the texture was just not showing up in this one.

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

yes, the problem is the photo because i dont have scanner yet u.u but thanks for the review!