XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Portrait of Self]

Stange Face

Kudo's to you on this art piece, now that i got that out of the way lets move along here, So here we have something not too shaby, the artwork is notbad, in fact I kinda like what you did here, some more polish up here and there would be a good start of improvment though. Hmm I have to say that this one was pretty interesting some nice use of color and drawing of the character aswell, its kind of just there. But anyways good art piece here i like the effort you put fourth here, and it shows and shows the skills you have, you should make more stuff like this as i look forward to seeing more of it, so keep up the great work, i really like what you presented here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I look for some improvment points,this was a decent piece it could use some more efforts and a few adjustments for a better outcome so here are some ideas that may help, and i do hope they help as this is a good piece of art with some good potential, so anyways try some of them out if not all its all a plus for you. Wouldnt mind seeing more focus on the eyes and such, maybe adding more color all around would be a big plus.

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[Orestes: Apple?]

Skelly

An interesting skellie you have here. Skelly here with some really smooth lines and nice backrounds not sure I would change anything maybe adding more "SHINE" to the outter top part of his skull but thats about it. And so not much more to say except that i really liked this piece, there was some grey areas that could be worked on, but still really enjoyed what you presented here, and was glad I had a chance to check it out. so make more stuff like this because ofcourse ill be there to review it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If you were to improve on this, I would suggest some new ideas, Its pieces like this that make me enjoy art even more, so i may have a few ideas that i would hope could help you improve on stuff, But here are some ideas that could help to improve some things, More shine to the outter top part of his skull, and maybe even a sort of red hlow comming from the eye socket parts to add to that extra effect of the overall picture.

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[Me]

Pixle

Fantastic use of art in this one, This one kinda blw me away so very nice workon this one, and this is the sort of stuff that I have really come to love. you have Captured something great with some Flair and you have some good insight on the art world, so nice job here. Kind of like some pixle like art this was pretty nifty and the bright colors are cool, I think the only issue here is that the "IMAGE" could be on a larger canvus style. other then that it was decent. But anyways This was pretty interesting something new and thats always a plus when you see alot of the same styles, so keep up the good work and keep making creative stuff. So keep making nifty stuff as this one and always keep a creative mind. and keep making stuff that will make one think.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a decent piece of arthere so its a hard siuation to suggest some improvments but as they say theres always room for some sort of improvment. You have a good Installation here, Your Priority in the efforts here are high and thats why i liked it, so nice job here today. Making it larger in view screen size would be a plus maybe even adding some type of borders around would also be a plus, but overall it was decent.

~X~

[simplicity]

Simple

You seem Dedicated in some parts on this one and it was Refreshing to see more different syles of art here, I was pleased with most of this, while some parts could be better. Well I must say this is simple, but alos i see much more in this aswell, so when I do look at this I see from a distance a man walking a long path to his goal, maybe im strange like that but overall its as it is simple yet unique. I have had a good pleasure in reviewing this, you have a good visual up here and its all rolled into one decent submission of an entry, There is some unmatched creativity of effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Kind of like a car or house they do need a little work so that they can run better, Even if its a new one You find all the little kinks that need some working out, So here is my take on some of that on this art submission. if something is broken in the house you can fix it up easily or ad new things so lets try some things. While this was just kind of simple there was some depth to it, you could spruce this up by adding a border or frames around the edges or even a red dot or circle. "COLOR" does amazing things when its just a small amount.

~X~

[Short Comic #5 - Sethdd]

lol Cute

I personally feel that That this was an ok piece, but Lets start from the top and by that I mean the whole piece it has a certain style that keeps me interested but other areas kind of drew me away. Haha this one had some humor to it, I am thinking these might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself. notbad of a comic maybe added an extra set of boxes to make it a tad longer to extend the humor somehow. Things are set up and as this one is coming to an end, you have presented some interesting things here and I must say you presented it all in good fashion.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I always stress in my reviews of fixing this or adding that, but in all honesty this was nifty and I can see adding some good ideas here that will make this much better. extending the humor with a longer comic frame work is one way to improve, might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself.

~X~

[Chamber found a checkpoint!]

Decent

I have seen a lot of art in my time here, but I have not seen art as different and or interesting as this one, And its stuff like this one that keeps me enoying reviewing these types.Now here was something with some rich colors that really came through very well, I even like some of the "GLOWS" and lighting effects, really nice piece here. So this is not soft by any means infact this is exactly as it should be, you added your own twist, And with flavor if I say so myself, so nice work here and hope you keep it going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now here is something good and there are ways to improve on things, You should be able to work your way up to it. so here are a few things to work on. Little details could improve on this like more blood texture more dropping of blood on ground and whatnot.

~X~

[Satyr]

Nice Drawing

This was neat and strange and very impressive, it has a certain artistic feel to the art style and it was just strange but that was a good thing, I really liked it, This was a pretty good drawing here lots of detail shown, I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, but in reallity you did well on this one love the fine detail. No entry gets the perfect award, But what this entry does offer Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are a nice fit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that its a decent piece of art all in all. Like I say for most pieces of art it would be cool to find a few new ways of improving on some areas of needed attention. I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, maybe even adding a tad bit of color just one or two areas with added color.

~X~

[Liero!]

Strange yet exciting

The look of this piece could mean several things it has a certain uniqueness too it, but then again it has a simple nature about it aswell. So this one here is interesting and while it has a strange feel about it, there is also an exciting moments about it, shades are decent, backrounds look cool, overall notbad at all. I noticed a lot of small things that slowly pulled together something nice here and thats what caught my attention with this art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I recommend doing something with it to make it stand out more. It could be as simple as an effect or a change in direction here or there but maybe these options may help. I dont thik there was much to go on this one but if you are going with the "STRANGE" and "RANDOM" effect here I would do more random add-ons like maybe "EYES" on a random place and whatnot.

~X~

[Japanese Fox Spirit]

Foxy

I think I can envision this piece being part of a bigger flash game or movie in some form or another, and you made it seem that way, and thats what has caught my attention with this one. Very foxy with this one haha no jokes intended but you did a decent job here allthough the black and white is good maybe some added color here and there would be a nice touch up. maybe even some more backround detail about it. notbad work here though. Im not the biggest fan of this style, but I always keep the bias out of my reviews. But I must say this did catch my attention to some point so nice job on that part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could even get a little abstract with it, there are different elements and things you can do to make this that IT factor so lets try a few new ideas here. allthough the black and white is good maybe some added color here and there would be a nice touch up. maybe even some more backround detail about it.

~X~