XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario and Peach]

Haha this was cute

I like this it wasmore on the "SIMPLE" side of things and maybe that was the direction you were going after but i still found it to be too simple and such, maybe some extra detail and shading aswell as some sort of related "BACKROUND" would really help in this situation, just an opinion but i think it would look more improved if you did take it to the effort abit more. But its still pretty good and has a good cute factor to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cute and simple, could use more details, more effort in some shading just a lil something extra even if it is the simple theme you wanted.

[Elk's 2D Fighting WotLK RPG]

So this was interesting

I like this but the one thing that bothered me on this piece was that it was kind of small in size, so one improvment i would like to suggest is make a larger "CANVUS-SIZE" maybe then you can show more of that detail, even throw in a mix of more color aswell, these tips would improve on this greatly, it does need some mix of color though but other then that i thought this was a nice and nifty piece, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a larger canvus, show more detail, but mostly add some more color.

ElkDarkshire responds:

its pixelart though :)

[The Blue One]

Notbad

OK so this was kinda interesting, at first it looks a tad basic but then it grows on you, it could be better though, sime you were going more for a simple look here could use more "SHADES" more wear and tear like on armor even some shine like on sword for shine, show some gashes and dashes thruout the armor since to show he was in battle over ther years, just a thought though, and i would also go even farther with a deeper design of a backround, amybe some sort of woods or something in the distant, anyways hope to see more from you, this was notbad but could also have some enhancments.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, some more shines, more battle marks and dents, even some blood stains would be another nice effect, and ofcourse some more depth in the backrounds.

[Cammy]

And another cool drawing here

Ok cool so you have been on this wave of drawings and the black and white is cool, this one was cool the drawing really comes out well and shows off the skill and time you put into these so nice effort there, However i do think you could use some more color and more depth to these, i love the "FRAME" style in the backround im thinking if you just colored the fame and borders and bars it would be great, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested add some color if not to character add to the backround and or bars it would really bring this one out, just something to think about, anyways nice job.

[CannonBot Transformation]

Wow very nice here.

Now this is something differant and its something beyond art, you put a little animation in there, i just wonder how long this did take you to do since it looks very detailed in the animation and transformation part, the art detail is fantastic, and its an overall good looking piece here the transformation of it all is fantastic aswell, now to see how this can be improved but i think you did an outstanding job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was small, maybe a larger robot of transformation with even more detail would have been even a more plus on things and such.

[when I wake]

Nice color here

So this was a nice piece with some good color about it all, was kind of interesting, allthough there could be some more shine to it all, like the backdrop "STAR" maybe brighten that up more with something more shiny and more glowy and such, just a little more shine to it would be nice, maybe even a few more sparkles here and there on some of the other stars and such..but i have to say this was notbad some good color interesting style and good texture all around, keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some shine to the falling star maybe even some glow to it.

[Dr. Robotnik]

Really nice piece here

Here was an interesting piece here, i am really enjoying this art piece, and like how you used some deep and rich color and texture, The lighting effects are ok, but could be abit brighter especially around the glasses maybe some more shine there, the lighting behind him seems ok but that could be in a more progressive way, but anyways a good art piecevery rich and deep colors here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as said, some shine or improved shine around the glasses, and not so overpowering shine on the backecn of his head, just an idea though.

[Her Name Was Misery.]

Oh wow im in love with this piece

Wow ok first off this was "AMAZING" the color was my fave ofcourse, but using all purples really brought this out for me and i really liked everything from the overtop "VIEW" of the city, and the camera angle of it all, you did some amazing blending and the drawing of the girl is, anyways really amazing as for making this better or improving, maybe some better "LIGHTING" effects. but it was one fantastic piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lightinmg effects like on some city lights and some light and dark areas of the deep purples. just an idea though.

[Remember me...]

I like it

And here we have another decent art piece, sometimes entertaining but mostly pretty decent like your style of art and while sometimes this could use more effrot and a tad more detail, its still a pretty decent artpiece. But anyways i guess this was one of those characters again from the bbs back in the day, everything here was pretty "SOLID" nice use of color, nice font, and its "FUNNY" so you did give all the elements, i suppose the onlything it lacked was some "BACKROUNDS" And the backrounds shouldnt be that hard and they dont have to be fully detailed just a lil something there, As this review comes to an end i just want to say that it was a pleasure seeing this and reviewing it, while it was not perfect or bad, it was just right and showed some skill of art and in the end it was pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here is were some ideas and tips are suggested, So i do have one or two maybe a few more ideas to improve on this and some are pretty basic ideas that you probably already figured them out, just takes time and effort to put them forward so go ahead and be creative. But the only real issue i found with this art piece was that it could use some backrounds, Add some backround detail or full art color, maybe even just a colored base maybe some related content backdrop but there does need to be some sort of backround in place.besides that it was pretty good if you ask me.