XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klide 06 (Sun Blast)]

Decent again

~~REVIEW~~
And another cool design you have here i love the gold feel of it all, that was pretty impressive, i think in this one it lacked the lighting effects that you did well with the other past designs, but must say this was still pretty good, and i liked how there was more effort on this, mostly as just said with some more lighting effects and what not, and again i think these types of designs need more of a larger canvas as i have said in a few of them now, but still i enjoyed these and thy are all pretty impressive so keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty nifty as a design, it did lack in a few areas, such as more lighting effects, and probably a larger canvas sise, but you been hearing that from me.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies

[Klide 05 (Ice Blast)]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this one cameout even better then the last one, as it has more of the effects but with the use of white colors here you really made some nice design here, i wouldnt mind seeing some more of the spiky feel you gave this maybe even adding some more of the redish color on the outer edges, thats just my opinion though, it was pretty neat, so for some slight improvments, some more spiky stuff more redish color around the edges, anyways nice job. keep up the awsome designs they are pretty nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some m,ore spiky stuff more redish color around the edges, also like one of your other designs give it a bigger canvas for more of the design to shine, but with all that, this was pretty nifty.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies.

[Klide 04 (Flames)]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
So this was notbad, i love the colors used in this one, you really pushed the oranges and such on this and the lighting effects are pretty good i thought, really brought out the effects and colors so nice job there, a few things could make it better like making the canvas bigger, allowing more detail for everything else and more of that neat effects you been pushing in these types, anyways nice job all around, i look forward to seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty cool with lighting effects and what not, it could be set on a larger canvas and what not other then that this was neat stuff.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies.

[communication]

Pretty good stuff here

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very nice and it was unique at the sametime, the little color was ok, it gave into the imagination of the drawings and the bodies yet still seeing so much, no it would be nice to have abit more toch of blood even other random colors since there is a random feel in this all, the backround even cameout alright, all pretty good stuff here and a good drawing i enjoyed it all, and was welldone, so nice work and i hope to see more of your work soon. as for improvments some touch up s of extra color here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more colors, more random touches, but it was pretty good for the mostpart.

[Seras Victoria]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was notbad, i like the in your face kinda theme here, the backround was somewhat bland though and since its vampire related, you could have had some blood dripping in the backround, or just go with some fainted picture of blood but something that was related to the main art piece, the character does have a strong anime feel so you did get in toch there and that was retty neat, so nice job on that and it was actually pretty good drawing, anyways keep up good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backround was lacking, and could use something, more, the rest was good anime style and very sharp in design, nice job all around.

linda-mota responds:

Oh gosh I loathe looking at this picture. It's true it needs a background. This is a very dated drawing with dated inking/coloring. I will more than likely redraw this with a lovely background. Honestly I don't know why this piece is popular. It's terrible and the perspective is a wee bit off. But that you for the improvement tips. They're super appreciated.

[Dreams]

I love this and the creativity

~~REVIEW~~
So i saw your piece on the art forums and wanted to give it a propper review, now this caught my attention mostly for the "CREATIVITY" of it all, the darkness and the mystery of all that is happening of creatures and little moon type men was all the creativeness of it aswell, now with the darkness it could also allow for some nice "LIGHTING-EFFECTS" such as the backround maybe a star, or even some distant creature but i understand you had your ideas already set, but anyways it was a pleasure seeing this it will be one of my faves now, awsome job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great creatuvity with this as i just mentioned as for some tips of more of that creativity some lighting effects seem like they would work great also as suggested above.

[red baron]

Love the color theme

~~REVIEW~~
I love the color use on all this, respecially using some color in the name in the backround, so in this cse the "TITTLE" fits very well on this piece, and while its red colored based, theme was pretty awsome you didnt over do it either, now i can see where this could be slightly better even i thought, such as with his big sword you should have it dripping with blood onto the ground that would have been a nice extra use of the red color aswell, but anyways great piece here and again the tittle fits so perfectly with this one, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some red blood dripping but other then that this was pretty good stuff.

dommi-fresh responds:

man you sure love that blood don'tcha thanks all the same