XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Canubus plant]

Nice

This was differant but it was kinda neat, the whole plant was neat and i like how you changed up the colors and matched them aswell on the plant aswell, One thing i have noticed is that you use alot of the backrounds you may want to change, them abit maybe add some design to it and such, also you should make the plant bigger but again you may need to make the canvus size bigger, anyways nice job.

So again as i go through your art there could be some better backrounds and the canvuses could be larger.

[Box]

A box

Ok so not sure what you were trying with this one, It is a box and hasall the sides but im thinking with a little more practice this can be even better, the backrounds really look nice and some nice effects were used, i think that the darwing skills need to be fine tuned better though as this was, so some things to work on would be start more practicing with the drawings take your time and just keep at it, other then that this was ok, but could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effort on the drawing part is needed, maybe lose the borders and let it be more of the page and such.

[Sunset]

This was better

Ok so this was better, alot better then your other stuff and with this one you can see you putting in more effort with shades and lighting, the view screen is kinda small so thats another area you may want to work on, so a few things here first the size could be larger, and more stuff like props could be in there, these are a few things that could be better, so put in some more effort and such, other then that it was pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The size of the canvus could be much larger, that way you can show more detail and even add more stuff in the drabwing itself.

[NBA Strike 2011]

Oh this was neat

Now this was kind of neat, The art style seems kind of plain though and could use better detailing and texture, i like the idea and the meaning is sorta neat and i remember this on the nba so that was a nice gesture and all, but again the art could be better needs more fine tunning and much more detail and ofcourse more effort on your side, so try a lil better with this, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said, needs more effort needs more art color and texture, and just more overall detail about it.

[Comic Book]

Really nice visuals

This was nice and i really like the visuals in art here and it is like a comic, and really love how you give this some suspense and emotion in each frame, onething i thought could be better though was that the frames are too close together, the linework and shading cameout well and also has a dark feel and touch to it that was all pretty good, now as an idea for improving, spread out the frames some maybe even put some bars in bewtween, kinda like sunday comics of sorts, but anyways good comic here hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the frames abit more so its not all so bunched up, other then that it was pretty good.

[chinese zodiac]

These are differant

So these were all pretty neat, and you have a decent idea here, great textureand color aswell as some nice creative ideas here, kinda reminds me of some cut outs with a mix of pokemon in there, so that was a nice feel to it all, and the art was fantastic with some good quality detail and texture, nothing else i can say about that, im think as any kind of improvment though you should put them on a larger canvus with some backrounds kinda like a group just an idea though, anyways decent work here, keep it up, i look forward to more of your creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of the "LONG" board stle give it a more group style with some nifty backround.

[a-voiding kassadin!]

This was nifty

This was pretty nifty. great designa nd drawing on the character, even love the backround you worked with too, The pink was kinda neat but seems like you should have put a little more detail maybe some more shades on the "GLOBE" and the other pink slashes and such, and you may also want to give the "HORNS" some shine and even some glare of some sorts it would be a nice little effect, You have a great drawing here just wish there was more effort on some effects and so on, but besides that this was notbad at all. but great piece regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a few suggestions as mentioned above, some more shades on the Globe, give the Horns some shine and even some glare.

[The Wild Hunt pg.1]

This was decent

Wellthis was a decent little strip here,it seemed too bland in some of the "FRAMES" though, andwould really be nice to see some color, now if you arenot all for color thats cool, but even just a touchof color here and there would be nice like say a tree or a light post etc while everythingelse is kept black and white, but as for the comic itself it was pretty interesting just seemed blandas there could have been more drawings and linework in some of those bland areas, i guess what im saying is fill in the blank areas abit more, anyways you have a decent piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i mentioned some tips on making things better like,some added color or just some focus points of color, And also there were some bland frames that could be filled abit better,

[Paper Mario]

This was pretty cute

Now im abig fan ofmario and such and this was pretty cute,the characters were "FRESH" looking and really just looked great fresh and smooth design on them you really gave themthat whole mario feel, The only thing i thought could be better or improved was the font of text maybe it could be more toony like or maybe it was the bubbles but something there was abit off, regardless the whole scene was amusing and love the backround detail of differant products and also i like the little pun of joke in there, anyways cute piece i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above the font was the only issue really, butother then that it was a cute piece.

[The Cupboard]

Fantastic

So i looked at what the art portal had to offer today and this one is the one stood out to me, maybe it was thepurple or thesefunny looking characters just jumping out of the page but regardless it was cute, i like all the little shines and details and you really gace this art piece some character and brought it to life almost like outside of the box so nice efforts there, the balls at top with shine could use more of a shine maybe even some glow to it, but besides all that this was pretty cute and i found it to be a pretty fantastic piece.always looking forward to see what new artists bring to the table, this reviewer enjoyed this piece today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned maybe abit more shine and even some glow on the "BALLS" at top, butother then that this was apretty cute piece.

SplendidDevil responds:

thanks for the review, it is an awesome review and i appreciate the criticism :3

it's like my first photoshop piece, im still getting used to photoshop and it's mindfuckery :)