XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A story including you! 2]

Interesting

Notbad of an art entry into the portal Some of the visuals here are pretty interesting nice design overall just some decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I can really try and help but you bring a lot of talent to the table, but lets see where I can actually help, but anyways lets give it a go.

~X~

[Fat Dragon]

Dragons are cool

Well I particuarly love "DRAGONS" and this sketch here really represents a solid dragon great line work great sketch work all around, maybe a color backround though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Yeah I would say adding a color back round behind a black and white sketch would be pretty awsome.

~X~

[The Doggy Goes...]

Nice Hand

Well nice hand drawing here the shades the lines, all very good light texture here makes this a pleasent, would have loved some more stuff or focus in the back round but you still have a solid piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus in the backround maybe even a small point of focus would have worked.

~X~

[Zangief Character Select]

Nice work

This was actually pretty good, I like that he is looking at something maybe you could have added what he may be looking at, just something to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some more focus on what the character is looking at, Or I would even go as far as putting a tear down his face.

~X~

[Hell on planet X poster]

Interesting piece

Well here is an interesting piece of art I like the mix of two different forces and whatnot, the colors and lighting effects are pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could show a bit more flare and shine on some of the explosions.

~X~

[HOW (not) TO WALK AWAY]

This jumps out at you

This is one of those pieces of art that really can stand out at you and tell you a story about the piece at hand, these are the types I really come to love. This one for sure jumps out at you and you seem to have added all sorts of elements in here, and I really like the mix and variaty in this pieces. Theres alot to tell on one piece of art and dont have all the words but I will say this piece of art was interesting and it can get you thinking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So lets see if this help section can improve on a piece that may or may not need it, but I may have something for you, here we go. Well I think with all the elements you added in this one you can have a larger canvus types to show off more of the detail and elements.

~X~

[Jack In]

And this is nifty

And with this one you find some nifty pieces of talent, the shine the view shot you have it placed at, overall a good piece maybe a tad more shine though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And this one I think could use much more shine to it and such more on the frontal view of it all.

~X~

[gold finch]

Nice piece of art here

Now this is what I call some good talent, the light colors are just right the backround was pleasent, and It all seemed to come together perfectly so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
While the backrounds are pleasent it could use some more touces in the backround maybe even some shadows of some sort.

~X~

[Fly Honey]

Artwork is always interesting

I tend to like these kinds of entries more then others because of the style that it is, and because of the vibe that extrudes out from these types. Really love the use of color here and your style is pretty impressive, Glad I got a chance to see this one. also nice detail on this one. I hate to end here because this piece was different and I like what it represented in an art type, it was interesting and does give off a unique vibe.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And with a good vibe about this piece I will do my best to pinpoint a few things, but anyways here is what I could come up with. Hmm not sure here but would love to see much more of that extra detail its the little things that make it stand out.

~X~

[Trading Cards]

Interesting art here

Yeah I have to say that this is interesting art here, the colors are light but you really bring it out and make the texture stand out wich is pretty nice, so some effort here really shows off well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with this one I wouldnt mind seeing some "FRAMES" or portraits surrounding each characters, maybe something fancy.

~X~