XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Graveyard Shift]

Really nice work here.

This is very detailed and just overall some nice work all around here, the "STONE" really looks like stone would love a bit of "SHINE" in there though, maybe on an edge or corner or something with a sparkle or shine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine or sparkle would be a nice touch here.

~X~

[May it be]

Wow

Now I must say pieces like this really speak volumes and the details really show off well, and your ideas really seem to come alive in this piece. This was very impressive with its dark feel and touch the clowdy shadows was really nice aswell. And now near the end of this review I must say you have outdone yourself its the little things that really jump out at me and thats what you have done here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe some specs of light in the backround clouds somehow.

~X~

[Augered Spiral]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, has a certain "SCI-FI" feel to it but thats what i like about this piece, you ad that certain touch and thats the topping on this one, so nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some thicker lines and more glow on the lines would be key.

~X~

[Cat Eye of Chaos]

Nice

This was pretty neat and nifty the "EYE" really speaks volumes you should put more focus there like some more shine around it, and maybe making the the whole picture larger somehow.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on the eye with some more shine would be nice.

~X~

[Together We Sing Comparison]

Something different here

You have a good Concept here And Quite Frankly it has tons of Potential I found this to be mindly interesting actually it was pretty good and Yet also kind of weird but then thats what I came to also enjoy about it, and also what makes this work. Well I must say as I am getting into this piece it really jumps out at you, you really made it glow and shine in the after picture, so nice job. There alot of things about this submission, but there was a few instances that showed a good Concept of Visionary But again this was a decent submission. and I have really come to enjoy this style, hope to see some positive improvments.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have enjoyed what you put up here sofar, Some more glow like you did in the after pic.

~X~

[Trashbot - Robot Day Game 2011]

Interesting

Well here are some interesting designs here now with this piece I wouldnt mind more of a "SHINE" on the can and maybe even some "GLOW" on the eyes. but anyways nice design here. kind of unique.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the eyes and more shine on the can.

~X~

Luwano responds:

Good points. Thanks for your review.

[Octopus Sculpture]

Awsome

Well here was an awsome piece you really go all out and add that extra detail, now in this piece I wouldnt mind some more "TEXTURE" like on the head and maybe even some bigger eyes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some bigger eyes, more texture on the blue skin type.

~X~

[Absolem Sculpture]

Cool pieces

Some nice pieces these scultures really come alive and you put all the right details ahead, so really nice work here and it was a pleasure to see what you have designed here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure with these kinds but some added shine would be a plus maybe even a sparkle or two.

~X~

[Imperius]

Awsome piece

Now these kinds of art pieces have always amazed me with the depth and style and it sure does take a lot of effort and thats what you you have shown here. Im a big fan of diablo myself, And once again this was an awsome piece with lots to be desired and glad I saw this with a nice visual about it including great detail. so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you did a pretty good job all around but maybe adding more lighting effects would be a plus.

~X~

[Marvin Sculpture]

Awsome again

And once again you have come up with another cool design here and the talents show off well, I was very impressed, there is amounts of detail in all these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more of a backround but then it doesnt need it.

~X~