XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Lantern Pico]

Interesting idea here

I must admitt its still an interesting idea with this one, i like him popping out or being swallowed by the backround thats always something neat and differant, i think as an added effect you could have added like some "BUBBLES" in the backround also like its some sort of liquid backround, and would just show more of something just taking him away, also love the referance to the green hero so that was pretty neat, things to improve on this besides the bubbles, not sure maybe some more texture in the backround, So with all that said this was pretty intersting, i like some of the ideas in here, i like the detail and art style the effort really did comeout, and i was generally pleased, keep up the decent art work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for some ideas of improvment, well this is where i suggest a few ideas and tips, your art piece was pretty good to be honest but there are a few things that could be worked on to make look better and have an overall better outcome so here are some tips i found. But i suppose with this one it was not much maybe some "BUBBLES" and some texture in the backround as suggested in the review.

[EYE BOL]

Cool Eye

And as we see somany of these types of drawings with just an "EYE" its always cool to see the detail especially when done with pencil and even black and white, the one thing that black and white lacks is the detail that color does bring out so you should think about adding some color touches maybe a piece here and there or just some props of color. But overall this was actually a pretty good drawing and nice style, the linework was great, Keep up the awsome work this was a great drawing nice effort shown some decent detail, and was glad i had a chance to review this very nice indeed, hope to checkout more of your work soon. for now keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
These are great types and styles of drawings, I have suggested some tips and ideas that could help on improving this, even just a little touch up here and there would be the idea, so try them out and let the quality shine, First of all add some color maybe just a touch, maybe the "OUTTER" eye or even just the "EYE-BALL" would be great and show more focus on the drawing itself, Anyways hope this review helps even abit.

[Media]

Notbad

This was kinda neat, i did something like this once, with all the tvs and such, this was actually funny with the "BUBBLE" text, would have been nice with some color though, the black and white is cool but some added color would have been nice maybe just some here and there. I was thinking this whole piece could be on a much bigger scale and even more in a comic style as thats where it was seeming to lead to, Anyways A decent art piece here, was entertaining and amusing with the visual and such, could use some extras though just here and there, thats more explained more below, but it was pretty good of an art work so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres alot of nice little artistic and amusing things about this piece, i did however think you could have put more into it, so below and throughout the review are a few tips and advice that could help improve on this, but overall i found it to be pretty good. So some added color would be great in this pice, also more of a comic style would also help. Those were the only things i thought could have made this more enjoyble.

[Female Glass]

Amazing

Wow everytime i look at your work or try and review it, i am so amazed at how well everything comes out and its just so realistic and impressive very awsome style of drawing, Now normally i would love to see some "COLOR" but thats just me i supose, but for the mostpart this is pretty fantastic, everything from the "SHADOW" to the line work so awsome job and props to youon a great drawing once again. And once again its pieces like this that trully amaze me, all theskill level and detail and so much effortput into this so that was very welldone and cant wait to see more, keep at it, this is top notch work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great stuff here, the onlything i would suggest for making it better, would be some color but thats just an idea, this piece is already great without that.

[Sanjay Patel]

Haha funny

I guess this was one of those jokes or something from the forum bbs, or something, but the "CHARACTER" cameout ok, seemed kind of rushed though, it was more of a cartoony style and such, and there should be more effort on some backrounds you just had the plain backround, maybe show some distant backround some coloredpalate or some design pattern would even work. but other then that this was pretty "CUTE" and amusing i thought, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. anyways keep up the decent art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus, so take good thought into the few or even one or two of them, they all will improve on this, even if its just a little something here and there but do think on the tips and advice. So with this one, it was pretty good but needs some sort of backrounds, and maybe some better "SMOKE" effects or something.

[Lars Moisture Farm]

Decent

This was pretty neat, shows off some of your skill and showssome even more of the effort put into this, so thats always a plus, you can really tell when someone puts the time in on something and this one shows. But anyways this was neat, i like the "3-D" it was pretty impressive and has a real like-ness to the real one on the starwars movies so great effort there in making it look just like it, sky cameout pretty neat, i did thing the sky might look better with a differant element of color though like "BLUE" or something, But anyways a decent art piece, nice effort here, and i really liked it, Andmost of all i love the style you have here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This did not need much on improving but it could have used some stuff, but overall this was pretty decent, nice style niceeffort all around, hope to see more like it in the neer future. I mentioned above about maybe a differant sky maybe blue but like i said also it didnt need much changing at all.

[I'll Be Home Soon]

I found this one to be somewhat artistic

Yeah so i found this one to be artistic, clowns are pretty artistic to start, but this one ws pretty nifty and the paint style colors were nice, The "BLEEDING" of the paints was interesting the clown almost seems like he has a sad face and all and i guess thats ok does show the emotion you are putting into this, the backrounds could have been better as the backrounds were very bland and had very little detail if any at all, Also im thinking some improvment options might be some "BORDERS" so that you can make it like a framed picture and the main art piece is focused on more, and that would be a great plus. anyways nice work here it was very artistic and i liked it, keep up the good art-pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I found this art piece to be interesting, and had some artistic values to it, now ofcourse it could use some fix ups here and there, and i have some advice points with tips and ideas to improve on it, and while they are just afew ideas they should help to improve on the whole piece so think about them,

[Vince]

Cool art piece

So this was another cool, picture here, The black and white style of art is ok, nut with the nice drawing here seems like some added color would have been the perfect touch, maybe a prop or the backround or something in color allowing for a focus point of some sort, So thats one way of detailing it up with color, Its a strong resemblance, to one of the fulpboys, regardless this was pretty funny, just too much black and white and does need a touch of color. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An impressive piece of art you have here, now ofcourse there was some changes and upgrades that could be made to it as suggested in the review but for the mostpart this was a pretty fantastic piece, just look into some more ideas as suggested. starting with some color and even some backround work. but besides that this was pretty good i thought so keep up the decent work.

[House]

Wow this was nice

I love this piece because it has an interesting yet "SIMPLE" touch to it, also the whole black and white style is notbad, Now the black and white style is always fun I do think you can add a touch of color though, maybe a spot here or a spot there maybe a border or just something that would bring more focus to it. With this particular pic maybe the daisyleaves could be yellow and the rest all black and white, but regardless this was a pretty neat art piece. everything looked great and the black and white was notbad, very unique and differant.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this could use a touch of color as mentioned, and maybe a tad more in the backround scene.