XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Satan Claus]

Needs to be richer

~~REVIEW~~
Yeah i would have to admit that this {SANTA} looks more like satan, then anything else but i do like this piece of art, almost reminds me of that southpark episode with the satan, hehe, but anyways back to the art piece, theres lots of joy mixed with fire and chaos a neat combonation i thought was ok, now this is an ok art piece, i did however think you could have added some more sharper and brighter colors, like maybe bring this piece into, {PHOTOSHOP} and or {PAINTSHOP PRO} or any other art program, just something that you could bringout the {COLOR} more, and probably ad abit more {EFFECTS} and {DETAILS} stuff like that i thought, so my suggestions are it does need more effects and brighter colors to bringout the art more, great art piece with skulls and demons and presents a happy and chaotic time, so notbad of an idea but does need more effort on the color side of things. anyways good luck with your next entry thats if you still make anything, anyways once again nice piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More richer and sharper colors aswell as brighter colors to bringout the piece more.

~X~

[Strawberry pancakes]

Entertaining comic

~~REVIEW~~
This was awhile ago but i kinda find it {AMUSING} and while it is more of a sketch then anything else, it was still cute and had some creativeness to it and all, so i did enjoy it indeed, the drawings on the sketch was pretty neat, had some funny moments and the way you did draw some of the characters was pretty good i thoought, very like standouttish, like when it seems like the guy is yelling or something, but again it seems like it also lacked other elements such as. some {COLOR} would be nice, maybe with the chachters or even just some of the outer {BORDERS/FRAMES} something along them lines though, it would make the comic stand-out abit more i think. and just something that would bringout the detail instead of it just being a sketch or so, these are just some ideas that could spruce this up for an overall better outcome. but anyways i did like it, and hope the few ideas i suggested did help.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color wwould be nice, maybe characters and or the outer frames and borders, also adding more to the comic like more {SCENE-SQUARES} would also be a nice touch.

~X~

[Portal Protectors]

Awsome once again.

~~REVIEW~~
These are all pretty awsome, i like them all and you really gave them some awsome detail, The {I-BOT} i though could stand to use the more improving though, seems like he needs more {SHINE} to him, and just more overall gadgets and things on him, he just seems abit lightweigt, the other two were pretty impressive with nice fresh colors and awsome detail all around, i think if anything could be improved it would be more effects on ibot and maybe something more standoutish in the backround, well its an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flare and standoutish on i-bot and maybe even abit on the backround somehow.

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

OK. I'll keep it on mind.

[I-Bot (CrisisMode)]

Sleek and awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this one, love the detail, and all the effects in this one, awsome detail, i wish the {BEAMS} were more flasy like you did i think with the blue robot and such, but still this one was still good, maybe even the robot should have had abit more shine to it and all, but it should be a great piece for {ROBOT} day, the wall was neat but it looked to fine in detail maybe it shoould have more of a wear and tear on it like if it was just busted open or something, just looks too clean and all, but it was a pretty impressive art piece and great piece for robot day, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the robot, some more glare on the light beams, and more dirty look to the wall, just a few ideas that could make it much better i thought.

~X~

[want a fairy?]

Lots to see

~~REVIEW~~
I like this because there was lots to see, and there are lots of wonderful colors to see aswell, Now this kind of picture really shows all the differant stuff going on also showing how much effort the artist put into it, so props to you for that as its pretty impressive, one of my main issues i thought this could have had would be that it was all too "SMALL" i would like to see it on a much larger canvas, there seems to be so much happening i think more focus needs to be on each area like more understanding of whats going on in this scene, just an idea from the viewers point of view, your art style and color use is notbad, i thought some more texture could be used though and maybe even some more deeper colors, again making a larger piece here you could have more focus on all the happenings in the picture, So all in all its a nice art piece with lots to see and some wonderful colors, and once again by making it larger you can ad more of the scene, and adding improved colors so with this few tips i hope it helps, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i think a much larger canvas could help to show off much more of each and every little point, some more deeper colors might also help to showing off the colors better.

~X~

[Dad]

Brutal

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so when i first saw this i didnt think much of it, but i do have to say it is sorta brutal, that poor little guy is getting cut into, i thought it was sad in a way, but that was probably the idea i supose, but anyways i like the newgrounds logo thing, i thought it could be slightly better with a more thicker "BORDER" the one you have there is notbad but a more thicker one might bring it out more, and i thought there could be more blood around here and there, now a few more things is i thought the veins were abit much too much were on the upper arm, and might look more realistic if you lost a few from the upper arm area, while still keeping some of the lower ones, and while we are on the body, ad some of the blood there splattered on the upper chest. so that its more of a realistic feeling and such, Now while i really like this, i also thought this might comeout better with some backrounds, i know you have the small version back there, it just would be neat to see more, of a backround like maybe some dungeon or area from the game of the character, something along them lines that reflect the character more, anyways good piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things like, more blood splatter, some backround scene, some less veins, and more focus on the newgrounds logo, just a few tips and ideas that i hope will help.

~X~

Sonucais responds:

It sure helps :) You need to realize this was made long time ago.