XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beware of Dogtooth]

This was interesting

I really like the dark feel here and dark touch, also the touch of black and white with a touch of some blood was also a nice little piece of work there, this whole piece was great of a zombie like hunter, allthough the body "PORTION" seemed off as his legs looked odd from the rest of the body, maybe it was just the view of it and all, but it was no big deal just a little notice, i wouldnt mind seeing more blood someplaces and maybe some of the eyes in the backround more glowing and so on, just an idea and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think you need to improve on anything particular, maybe just some more glow in the eyes of the distant zombies in the backround but thats about it i suppose.

sucho responds:

my perspective here was total shit. thankfully i think i have improved on that somewhat, if only through underconfidence and more photo-referencing.

[Chesire Cat]

Very interesting.

Very interesting here with the cat, now i love the color tones you have used here with black and purple they seem to really work well together, but the btush strokes here seem to work well together and everything seemed to fall in place well, i think the only issue i really had with this was that the backround and looks like a crown could use more effort though, as that was more on the simple side, while everything else was very dynamic and detailed, but the whole piece is pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improvments why not have more detail in the backround and what seems to be a crown of sorts could use a more 3d style with lots of flair and shine to it.

[Mario and Peach]

Haha this was cute

I like this it wasmore on the "SIMPLE" side of things and maybe that was the direction you were going after but i still found it to be too simple and such, maybe some extra detail and shading aswell as some sort of related "BACKROUND" would really help in this situation, just an opinion but i think it would look more improved if you did take it to the effort abit more. But its still pretty good and has a good cute factor to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cute and simple, could use more details, more effort in some shading just a lil something extra even if it is the simple theme you wanted.

[Elk's 2D Fighting WotLK RPG]

So this was interesting

I like this but the one thing that bothered me on this piece was that it was kind of small in size, so one improvment i would like to suggest is make a larger "CANVUS-SIZE" maybe then you can show more of that detail, even throw in a mix of more color aswell, these tips would improve on this greatly, it does need some mix of color though but other then that i thought this was a nice and nifty piece, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a larger canvus, show more detail, but mostly add some more color.

ElkDarkshire responds:

its pixelart though :)

[The Blue One]

Notbad

OK so this was kinda interesting, at first it looks a tad basic but then it grows on you, it could be better though, sime you were going more for a simple look here could use more "SHADES" more wear and tear like on armor even some shine like on sword for shine, show some gashes and dashes thruout the armor since to show he was in battle over ther years, just a thought though, and i would also go even farther with a deeper design of a backround, amybe some sort of woods or something in the distant, anyways hope to see more from you, this was notbad but could also have some enhancments.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, some more shines, more battle marks and dents, even some blood stains would be another nice effect, and ofcourse some more depth in the backrounds.

[Cammy]

And another cool drawing here

Ok cool so you have been on this wave of drawings and the black and white is cool, this one was cool the drawing really comes out well and shows off the skill and time you put into these so nice effort there, However i do think you could use some more color and more depth to these, i love the "FRAME" style in the backround im thinking if you just colored the fame and borders and bars it would be great, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested add some color if not to character add to the backround and or bars it would really bring this one out, just something to think about, anyways nice job.

[CannonBot Transformation]

Wow very nice here.

Now this is something differant and its something beyond art, you put a little animation in there, i just wonder how long this did take you to do since it looks very detailed in the animation and transformation part, the art detail is fantastic, and its an overall good looking piece here the transformation of it all is fantastic aswell, now to see how this can be improved but i think you did an outstanding job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was small, maybe a larger robot of transformation with even more detail would have been even a more plus on things and such.

[when I wake]

Nice color here

So this was a nice piece with some good color about it all, was kind of interesting, allthough there could be some more shine to it all, like the backdrop "STAR" maybe brighten that up more with something more shiny and more glowy and such, just a little more shine to it would be nice, maybe even a few more sparkles here and there on some of the other stars and such..but i have to say this was notbad some good color interesting style and good texture all around, keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some shine to the falling star maybe even some glow to it.

[Dr. Robotnik]

Really nice piece here

Here was an interesting piece here, i am really enjoying this art piece, and like how you used some deep and rich color and texture, The lighting effects are ok, but could be abit brighter especially around the glasses maybe some more shine there, the lighting behind him seems ok but that could be in a more progressive way, but anyways a good art piecevery rich and deep colors here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as said, some shine or improved shine around the glasses, and not so overpowering shine on the backecn of his head, just an idea though.