XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy holidays!]

Impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art you have here, very good shading and looking good and sexy and all that, the only few issues i really had with this one would be that the face expressions and emotion was not there, now dont get me wrong it was sexy as hell but the emotion was not there making it feel more like just a doll, the other thing was not bad at all just that it could use some backround to the scene something in a sexy setting would sufuce just fine, now these are just ideas and opinions i saw, but they are something that could make it much betterbut like i said its a pretty good and hella sexy drawing and you show off some good skills with it so nice job indeed, hope to see more of your work real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
give the character more life like emotion less doll like emotion, and some sorta backround would also help out.

~X~

[Give me mah fish]

Nice Detail

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a nice drawing you have some good detail in there, allthough it is a drawing you should make it come alive with some {COLOR} and all, just abit anyways maybe have everything black and white and just the dragon in some color like a shart red, or even just the fish with will give more focus since there is alot of characters in this particular drawing and such, Now as for the drawing its pretty impressive i like the fine detail maybe also add a backround of some sorts to kinda give it a story of where they are and such. and as a nother detail point since the fish is dead and rotting maybe there a worm or two popping out somewhere, and maybe one of the birds has it, heh sorry but just though i would just throw in a few ideas that would really bringout the drawing more and make it more alive, but i like what you have sofar good stuff, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene would be a nice touch for improving the drawing as a whole, also adding some color or partial color to a focol point would be another great idea, and i suggested some worms coming out of the dead fish more little details like that really bring a drawing to life with a world of its own.

~X~

ShadowElite951 responds:

Sadly, color in my artwork never sees color. Like maybe 1 out of a hundred drawings. Seriously lol. I'm just a lowly pencil doodler person. Not skilled with color and I tend to ruin the works. Backgrounds are another thing I tend to avoid. Mine tend to draw the attention from the primary focus. But I see how a little background could help balance the foreground.

Thank you!

[Phuss Flier: New Years Eve]

Decent start here

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one i like all the black and white style here and really seems like you cramped alot of stuff in here, i think you should spread it out abit more maybe even add a touch of color in there just a little bit give it that extra flare, you have some nice fine detail with differant stuff like the click on the ten and the differant fonts and stuff those i like but still seems all abit crowded so as said before spread it out again more so you can have a chance to see more of the fine detail, for the most part i really like it though, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i said you could spread out stuff abit more so it doesnt seem so cramped up

~~OVERALL~~
a good flyer thing but seems cramped.

~X~

Galneda responds:

I agree, it's AWFULLY cluttered, and I'll try to keep that in mind in the future. I really had no forethought with this. The first thing I drew was the spiral, then the starburst at the source, and I thought I was going to make the spiral into a road. With street lamps and people walking around pointing inward, dirt and exposed pipes outward...but I eventually refined it in the time-limit specified in my comments into what you see. The result? Clutter. lol

The explicit instructions, though, were to make it black and white so they could print it on colored fliers. We'll see how they look in physical form.

Thanks for the badass review! I really appreciate it :D

[Tattoo Concept]

Nice design

~~REVIEW~~
Nice idea here, kinda like a tattoo, something i could probably see i see lots of nice detail and some nice detail work in here, now ofcourse i could see more of that aswell more {FINE-LINE} work would also benifit aswell, now as a non tattoo image i could see you adding some color in this, just a little here and there would be great, maybe like the tips of points and such, some reds and greens kinda to bring out the design abit better, also some backround color themes would also work in that aspect of stuff, now ofcourse that would be a more non tattoo design though, but other then that you have some nice design and linework with this one, and ill have to checkout your other works soon, so for now awsome job on this one, keep up the awsome designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like reds and blues and greens i know its meant to be more black and white style but with just a bit of color here and there maybe in the backrounds or some focol point to set aprt from the black and white it will show a more unique look, some "FRAMES/BORDERS" along the edges of your art piece might give it a more focused look and this piece just seems like it would look more complete with borders/frames

~X~

[Pig warrior]

Awsome in 30 min

~~REVIEW~~
OK so first off this is a pretty good art piece especially for just 30 minutes so props to you for that, i was highly impressed with what you came up with in that short time, this {CHARACTER} reminds me of something from Teen age mutant ninja turtles but anyways its still an awsome piece, shading seemed to comeout well, would have liked to see some improved {Lighting effects} but other then that it was pretty good, I would have also liked to see some {BACKROUND} stuff maybe a wall a run down city but something that reflects the main character more, but really other then that you have a really good art piece here and once again in 30 min is a fantastic job, i look forward to seeing more of your work very soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i wrote you should ad something to the backround, and add abit more on lighting effects just a few touches here and there

~X~

[3/3]

Like a forrest

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad at all, i saw a bit of the other artworks that were simular to this aswell, but it was neat it kinda has that dark forrest, maybe even some sorta burrning trees in the back so that in that aspect makes it pretty impressive, needs more {FOCAL} points maybe like a scared little animal somewhere but something like that to focus on aswell, it would be a nice touch there now if it is a burnning forrest highlight the fire a bit more aswell, so it standsout more aswell, just another idea or two. but anyways it was a rather dark and neat piece you have here, but still i could see it improving with more visuals and extra effects like animals and lighting effects, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things i suggested were more fire highlight in the backround if its a forrest, and maybe a scared little animal in front for a more focus point.

~X~

CptBeefcake responds:

well it doesn't actually stand on its own; it's part of a triptych. the focal point of the piece is in the second panel. btw it isn't necessarily fire, you might taking it too literally. Other than that I agree, the warm colours sit back instead of jumping forward, and this piece didn't incorporate the same obvious lighting the other two did

thanks for the review

[war]

Could be larger and indepth with some more detail.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something very impressive, you really gave the skin a nice texture giving it that real feel to it and all, would have liked to see more with the {EYES} maybe abit of red in there for that extra detail or something, and as for more improving on this, maybe some sorta fake {BLOOD} just an idea though, now i dont mean to complain or anything like that but you should give an even more fuller {VIEW} of the whole art piece, it would bring out the little details abit better, and just overall making it much better, now these are just one reviewers opinions and ideas, but really for the most part you have a really nice piece here and would love to see much more of your work in the coming future, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe instead of just the white eyes add some red in there just for more detail to the picture as a whole, maybe even some fake blood out of the wounds.

~X~

ramymagdy responds:

thx man ...really appreciate your comment .... you have a point here ..