XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Down with sound]

Yellow is cool

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is a nice piece here, very yellowish which is nice, and the theme, now im getting the idea this is more like an Audio theme it looks like but i could be wrong, i like the very {CLEAN} look you gave it, it is fresh and clean. and you have some nice shading in there aswell, a very welldone peice of artwork here, i still feel with the simple idea that you could have gone abit more though, like say with the {BACKROUND} not sure what the theme was but if it was say audio related you could use the backround to reflect the theme aswell, its not bland, but still could use some sorta reflecting theme there, and i love the yellowish feel and theme so with a final thought this was very impressive and very creative, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more theme reflecting to the art piece for the backround.

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[Rusty Shackleford]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very impressive, the color texture is very deep, not a bad thing, i love that you have added some backround to reflect off the koth, i personally think the colors are too rich and deep though, maybe give it some lighter tones as to reflect the cartoon style abit more, also on his {FACE} i thought you made it look too muscly like he is a body builder of sorts, the character you are drawing was more {SCRONNY} looking and skinny, kind of weak and such, the hat was a nice touh fit right in and i enjoyed it very much nice job all around though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the face was too bulky, and the colors are too deep , tone it down abit explained above

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[Waiting for a Turn]

Nice shine effect here

~~REVIEW~~
A nice piece here i like how you gave it lots of {SHINE} especially with the whole night and light shining on them, but anyways you have some nice character work aswell, very nice shades, and good poses aswell, and you gave them some good {POSES} like reading the paper and such, it all makes for a much better drawing with all the differant characters and such, now as to improve on this you could make the whole painting somewhat larger,and it wouldnt hurt to have abit more shine since you were going with alot of that, wouldnt hurt to spread that out abit more all around, maybe even some more shading in the backround, i can see how that would be harder with night and all, but with all that said it was not too bad at all, nice painting in deed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start you could make everything abit larger mainly the painting as to see more of the detail, Some more shine aswell wouldnt hurt.

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[Divinity]

Nice lighting effects

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art piece here, nice to see, you still doing artworks with the lighting effects and such, now for this particular piece, It looks like you have a big explosion or some sorta war and such, just alot is going on, maybe some sorta space ship behind and such, I love all the differant colors, and how theres alot of action going on, there is again too much going on aswell, so maybe you have to spread out stuff abit more so you can really create that scene you want too and by spreading out the images and design you can show much more details and more of your art ideas especially in this one, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the elements and effects more to show more of the detail

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[Night Watch]

Nice Texture

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i really like the {TEXTURE} in this and you actually have created a nice scene kinda like some sorta story here now ofcourse you could improve on this to bringout more stuff such as some effects on the character in the backround, like more of a {LIGHTING} effect, more of a {GLOW} to just be more shining around it something like that, maybe even have some smaller stars in the backround as to show some farther and closer stars, as you might in the real night sky, also this whole scene seems abit {BLAND} needs something else maybe a black cat walking around or some cute animal something like that, but its a good texture of art and you presented something neat here.so try and improve on those suggestions i made, and hope to see more next time, maybe next time you can tell the story just abit more, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more lighting effects, ad another walking character something like a cute animal, and more stars farther ones like in the distance

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[Les Paul]

Nice 3-d design

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good 3-d version i wouldnt mind seeimg some more pazaz, you had some shine on the base but wouldnt mind seeing that abit more, and the grey backround is ok but you should have done something more some crazy color or rainbow thing something to do with music would have really brought out the image alot better, nut what you have here is pretty good, very nice 3-d style just would have been alot neater with more flashy effects to it and all, just something that jumps out at you, so improving on this as suggested, but would be some more shine, more backround effect, more glitz and glamor, anyways nice job with what you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As to improve on this some more shine and more glitz like in the backround.

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HermanThaGerman responds:

Thanks for the review man.

I just make these images for the 3D model in it so i dont spent much time on the background.

either way, thanks for the review and i hope you enjoyed my work

[Happy holidays!]

Impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art you have here, very good shading and looking good and sexy and all that, the only few issues i really had with this one would be that the face expressions and emotion was not there, now dont get me wrong it was sexy as hell but the emotion was not there making it feel more like just a doll, the other thing was not bad at all just that it could use some backround to the scene something in a sexy setting would sufuce just fine, now these are just ideas and opinions i saw, but they are something that could make it much betterbut like i said its a pretty good and hella sexy drawing and you show off some good skills with it so nice job indeed, hope to see more of your work real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
give the character more life like emotion less doll like emotion, and some sorta backround would also help out.

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