XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demon of Habit]

This was differant

ok so you do have something differant here, the "CHARACTERS" are nice, the colors are funky and i got a good luagh from the quote so nice efforts there, good detail on characters, im not familuar with what these characters are realted to and all but i did find it amusing and maybe in the end thats all that matters, as for improvments maybe make the canvus musch larger that way you can add more detail to your piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything i can see getting some work is possibly making a larger canvus area for more added touches of detail.

[DAD Wallpaper]

Wow i love this.

Wow so i really liked this one, its a nice looking piece with some great color choices even if DAD is purple, but the character drawing is amazing in itself so very nice job here i really came to enjoy this piece, and ill add this one as one of my faves, so nice job and nice effort, anyways keep up the fantastic work, and again i really liked what you presented here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was already perfect so nice effort here good job, no need for any improvments.

[Crimson Chaos 2nd]

Oh wowthis is nifty

OK so here is something pretty nifty, i love the use of color, and the whole character design is kind of neat, kind of reminds me of an over powered "STICK" character, so notbad at all, but you went beyond that and added some nice detail some good drawing elements and even went as far as added some backrounds so nice job on this piece. allthough you have a red hoody and then theres a red backround, why not change one of those colors so that its not all the same.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So theres alot of use of red sometimes that just doesnt look right you need balance between backround and main focus, so i would change out one for a differant color i think a purple forthe backround might work even better though.

[Commission: Rih]

I love it

and i love these drawing types, now ofcourse with some color they could even be better though, the drawing itself looks pretty impressive nice detail, nice design i even like the "MOOK-LIKE" design in the backround, as an idea that moon could have a bright glow or just base colorn while the rest is in black and white, thats my input on that, but its nice to know that you can draw and design stuff besides your popular animated series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color like a backround piece or there would be nice.

[COD4 Soldier Sketch]

wow very nice

Wow these are really nice, especially since it shows a before and after, and you can really see how the "DETAIL" and color make it come alive with some vibrance, from the soft lines to the finished product, a welldone piece, and this is what people should do more of, very welldone and top notch if you ask me.would have been nice to show more of a backround but as you said it was more of a magizine mock up, anyways nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You cant really add much here since it was a mock up, but some backround design would have been nice.

[Bullet ride 7]

and here it really gets started

So the comicis really shaping up at this point, with alot of action scenes and i really like how you were working out of the box in this one, it gives that real comic touch and thats why iam taking a big liking of this, so nice job there and props to you on an outstanding piece. hope to see more of your work soon, now as for improving as i have mentioned in the past and seems like you went with a differant style of a more comic style but anyways good stuff regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here as it was top notch just keep doing what you been doing, its great stuff, no improvments needed at this point.

[Bullet ride 5]

ok cool

and once again we have another part to this exciting, This one seemed more exciting then others, with more action and close up scenes i belive thats what really jumped out at me, but you did have a good story going here, again the only real issue here was the bubble texts, could be larger and more comic like, but i see thats how you have it all, but notbad still.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As sugested maybe a more vibrant and larger bubble text boxes.

[Bullet ride 4]

Oh nifty

Ok so this was something nifty, it has the feel and touch of that just like a reall "COMIC" it has all the elements of an action packed comic book, with some good action scenes, i think that some of the text boxes could be better though, maybe you could have more larger text, and maybe even an added colored border, but anyways this was a good art piece and i was glad i had a chance to review this so nice job all around here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned maybe some larger font/text maybe even some colorful borders around the bubble boxes.

[Black Omen]

Very dark

OKso here is somethinggood, it is dark but i guess that was the theme you were going for, dont get me wrong i like it and like the drawing and the colors is good, but im thinking that more effects like with some "GLOW"on the eyes especially, but with some effects it could have that extra touch, But anyways nice work here, gooddrawing, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some glow effects mainly in the eyesmaybe some shine areas.