XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I.V. 5]

Hmmm ok this was differant

So this was something differant, it was interesting though,there was one or two things i thought could be better on this like, The "SIGNATURE" by the leg the coloring was matching the backround so it kinda just dissapeard into it, maybe if you change the color it would focus more. and im thinking if you are going to have the "RED" outline around the character make it "GLOW" more like a neon red or something. but overall it was something unique with some nice colors used here. hope to see more of your work, and one thing i have noticed is you do all sorts of styles wich is always a plus with any artists.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here are a few changes and things that could make it standout somewhat more, Change the color and outline of the signature or even the backround so they dont mix into eachother since the colors were too much simular. The outline around the character can have more of a glow to it aswell.

[The Magic Bullets]

Fantastic

Wow this was fantastic and wonderfull, it has so much color and is like a thrilling ride into some crazy world of color, i love the design, i love the color and i love how everything works together from one pattern to the next so that was all a plus, and i will be faving this one, its just too good not too, love the jacket and how it matches aswell as the backround and how that matches, so you have a real eye for detail here, and it all came together very well, a big plus on your part. but anyways good work here very artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with this one i dont think you needed to improve on anything, it was just pure fantastic and wonderfull. i guess if anything give it a border but also follow the same patteren with a differant theme.

[Skull Mask]

Decent

So this one was differant, i guess without a scanner and just a pic of it the "QUALITY" kind of got lowered, and would have been nice to see more of the quality on this , this actually looks good even as it is, the skull is cool and the backround is cool, maybe it could be ran thru photoshop or something to bring out the colors in a more vibrant toch and look, I like the effort but just seems like the quality is low on this maybe you can reproduce this somehow, or like i said run it thru photo-shop, but anyways decent effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here i found a good art piece that was really jumping out at me, it was interestinga nd abit artistic, it can be even better with a few fixes here and there, i wouldnt mind seeing improve from what you have it as, so here are a few ideas that could help in that improvment so try some of the ideas out. But anyways the only issue here was that the quality was abit low maybe that can be fixed somehow maybe even thru photoshop or another art program.

[Beware of Dogtooth]

This was interesting

I really like the dark feel here and dark touch, also the touch of black and white with a touch of some blood was also a nice little piece of work there, this whole piece was great of a zombie like hunter, allthough the body "PORTION" seemed off as his legs looked odd from the rest of the body, maybe it was just the view of it and all, but it was no big deal just a little notice, i wouldnt mind seeing more blood someplaces and maybe some of the eyes in the backround more glowing and so on, just an idea and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think you need to improve on anything particular, maybe just some more glow in the eyes of the distant zombies in the backround but thats about it i suppose.

sucho responds:

my perspective here was total shit. thankfully i think i have improved on that somewhat, if only through underconfidence and more photo-referencing.

[Chesire Cat]

Very interesting.

Very interesting here with the cat, now i love the color tones you have used here with black and purple they seem to really work well together, but the btush strokes here seem to work well together and everything seemed to fall in place well, i think the only issue i really had with this was that the backround and looks like a crown could use more effort though, as that was more on the simple side, while everything else was very dynamic and detailed, but the whole piece is pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improvments why not have more detail in the backround and what seems to be a crown of sorts could use a more 3d style with lots of flair and shine to it.

[Mario and Peach]

Haha this was cute

I like this it wasmore on the "SIMPLE" side of things and maybe that was the direction you were going after but i still found it to be too simple and such, maybe some extra detail and shading aswell as some sort of related "BACKROUND" would really help in this situation, just an opinion but i think it would look more improved if you did take it to the effort abit more. But its still pretty good and has a good cute factor to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cute and simple, could use more details, more effort in some shading just a lil something extra even if it is the simple theme you wanted.

[Elk's 2D Fighting WotLK RPG]

So this was interesting

I like this but the one thing that bothered me on this piece was that it was kind of small in size, so one improvment i would like to suggest is make a larger "CANVUS-SIZE" maybe then you can show more of that detail, even throw in a mix of more color aswell, these tips would improve on this greatly, it does need some mix of color though but other then that i thought this was a nice and nifty piece, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a larger canvus, show more detail, but mostly add some more color.

ElkDarkshire responds:

its pixelart though :)

[The Blue One]

Notbad

OK so this was kinda interesting, at first it looks a tad basic but then it grows on you, it could be better though, sime you were going more for a simple look here could use more "SHADES" more wear and tear like on armor even some shine like on sword for shine, show some gashes and dashes thruout the armor since to show he was in battle over ther years, just a thought though, and i would also go even farther with a deeper design of a backround, amybe some sort of woods or something in the distant, anyways hope to see more from you, this was notbad but could also have some enhancments.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, some more shines, more battle marks and dents, even some blood stains would be another nice effect, and ofcourse some more depth in the backrounds.

[Cammy]

And another cool drawing here

Ok cool so you have been on this wave of drawings and the black and white is cool, this one was cool the drawing really comes out well and shows off the skill and time you put into these so nice effort there, However i do think you could use some more color and more depth to these, i love the "FRAME" style in the backround im thinking if you just colored the fame and borders and bars it would be great, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested add some color if not to character add to the backround and or bars it would really bring this one out, just something to think about, anyways nice job.