XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[fakebook and twatter]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one was very impressive, i like the awsome shades you have some deep texture in this one, and the {DRAWING} really seemed to comeout neat here, almost like a little story comic ext, the facebook Theres alot of stuff in the drawing, wouldnt mind if things were spaced out somewhatm also love the colors used seemed to really work off eachother with the greens and browns, An idea to give a more visual on the book maybe a glowing eye of sorts would be nice, just an idea though, and in the lower left and roght corners of the drawing could use something maybe something seems bland in that area. anyways decent drawing, and i look forward to seeing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good drawing here, maybe some spacingout of stuff, or if you like that style fill in the bland spots, and give the {BOOK} a more focus point as suggested the eyes or even some bloody teeth, anyways nice work.

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dommi-fresh responds:

i wanted to keep the colour bold and bland like their crappy logos.

[Creech Fanart]

Its a decent drawing

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually not half bad, now the {DRAWING} itself is decent well done, now wish there was some color added in there, would have been a plus, even if just a small portion here and there, sometimes just the outline is even awsome if colored and the rest black and white, but you can see some nice little detail in there which is always a nice touch, sometimes its hard to see the detail also because of all the dark shading but again its an ok piece i thought, you have filled the whole board there that is great but everything is so close together, maybe spreading out stuff just a tad, so more of the fine detail can be seen, regardless of all that, its pretty decent, and i look forward to reviewing more of your work in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spreading out stuff abit more for more visual detail, adding a touch of color would be another touch up,

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[Down with sound]

Yellow is cool

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is a nice piece here, very yellowish which is nice, and the theme, now im getting the idea this is more like an Audio theme it looks like but i could be wrong, i like the very {CLEAN} look you gave it, it is fresh and clean. and you have some nice shading in there aswell, a very welldone peice of artwork here, i still feel with the simple idea that you could have gone abit more though, like say with the {BACKROUND} not sure what the theme was but if it was say audio related you could use the backround to reflect the theme aswell, its not bland, but still could use some sorta reflecting theme there, and i love the yellowish feel and theme so with a final thought this was very impressive and very creative, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more theme reflecting to the art piece for the backround.

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[Rusty Shackleford]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very impressive, the color texture is very deep, not a bad thing, i love that you have added some backround to reflect off the koth, i personally think the colors are too rich and deep though, maybe give it some lighter tones as to reflect the cartoon style abit more, also on his {FACE} i thought you made it look too muscly like he is a body builder of sorts, the character you are drawing was more {SCRONNY} looking and skinny, kind of weak and such, the hat was a nice touh fit right in and i enjoyed it very much nice job all around though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the face was too bulky, and the colors are too deep , tone it down abit explained above

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[Waiting for a Turn]

Nice shine effect here

~~REVIEW~~
A nice piece here i like how you gave it lots of {SHINE} especially with the whole night and light shining on them, but anyways you have some nice character work aswell, very nice shades, and good poses aswell, and you gave them some good {POSES} like reading the paper and such, it all makes for a much better drawing with all the differant characters and such, now as to improve on this you could make the whole painting somewhat larger,and it wouldnt hurt to have abit more shine since you were going with alot of that, wouldnt hurt to spread that out abit more all around, maybe even some more shading in the backround, i can see how that would be harder with night and all, but with all that said it was not too bad at all, nice painting in deed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start you could make everything abit larger mainly the painting as to see more of the detail, Some more shine aswell wouldnt hurt.

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[Divinity]

Nice lighting effects

~~REVIEW~~
Nice art piece here, nice to see, you still doing artworks with the lighting effects and such, now for this particular piece, It looks like you have a big explosion or some sorta war and such, just alot is going on, maybe some sorta space ship behind and such, I love all the differant colors, and how theres alot of action going on, there is again too much going on aswell, so maybe you have to spread out stuff abit more so you can really create that scene you want too and by spreading out the images and design you can show much more details and more of your art ideas especially in this one, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the elements and effects more to show more of the detail

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[Night Watch]

Nice Texture

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i really like the {TEXTURE} in this and you actually have created a nice scene kinda like some sorta story here now ofcourse you could improve on this to bringout more stuff such as some effects on the character in the backround, like more of a {LIGHTING} effect, more of a {GLOW} to just be more shining around it something like that, maybe even have some smaller stars in the backround as to show some farther and closer stars, as you might in the real night sky, also this whole scene seems abit {BLAND} needs something else maybe a black cat walking around or some cute animal something like that, but its a good texture of art and you presented something neat here.so try and improve on those suggestions i made, and hope to see more next time, maybe next time you can tell the story just abit more, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more lighting effects, ad another walking character something like a cute animal, and more stars farther ones like in the distance

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