XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ratchet and Clank]

Fresh looking

And here we have something fresh, something interesting and kind of nifty, there was a good element about this you really know how to bring things together in a good way, and i was pleased with all of what you presented here, making something pretty interesting. Ok so this was pretty neat you used some fresh colors, there seemed to be some "BLAND" areas that you could have filled up abit like the backrounds, maybe some sort of backrop might have worked. also noticed that you have a decent designon the characters but maybe more texture besides the design already in place, Your shadowing was pretty goodm and overall this was a decent piece some fresh use of colors. and just overall pretty decent. This brings us close to the ending of the review so While this was notbad at all i wouldnt mind seeing more to it, it was generally a good and decent art piece and the effort does show, i like how you presented this and it was just pretty decent so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for improvments i have a few ideas of some things i may have saw, But must say it was an alright piece, but here are a few suggestions and i do hope they help and make for a better piece of with your direction ofcourse, but in anycase here are some ideas of improvment. Add some sort of backdrop, the backround was kind of bland, and maybe more detail in the skin tone, more texture would be nice,

[Morrigan Aensland]

Decent art piece

Ok well to start off this review, this was not a perfect piece, it was interesting and could be even better then it already is, I think for the mostpart this was a unique and interesting piece of art, so thruout the review i hope you will find some fun and possitive ideas. I think my first idea should be that you should change out the "BACKROUND" color or put some design back there because theres alot of black edges on the character like wings and what not that it blends too much into the backround, so a differant color might change that abit, also the "FONT" could be much better the rainbow one in lower left and the one in the backround, maybe something more fancy next time, and with more depth. The drawing is decent nice lighting and some good color tones the whole character is great, its just the backround that effects and blended in too much with the character. I got a good feel with this art piece, it was interesting yet it could use a few improvments as stated already, but overall i thought this was actually a pretty good piece, so keep up the decent artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And my ending notes are that this was decent but still could use a few changes here and there so here are a few ideas and hope they help if not on this piece then on a future piece, just some good possitive advice for better impovments. So the backround needs change not to blend with actual character, so make the backround a differant color. The fonts or texts could be differant as explained before, Anyways nice effort hope to see some upgrades soon.

DragonPunch responds:

I appreciate your feedback! I look forward to hearing from you again soon! :)

['Frog Eclipse']

Lots going on in this one.

I was kind of happy to see this piece front-paged it was a random choice but also well deserving so nice work there on that award type, hope you get more like that in the future, I start off this review and its pretty awsome that you can find stuff like this, theres lost to see and admire, and i do enjoy some detail and love that its abit on the artistic side but then again most art is. So this was neat i like these types and they do look god in the black and white style, some things were hard to see as it was in black and white though, it was a good piece though, as for improvment i dont know i kind of like it, theres lots of nice detail, im big on "COLOR" so maybe some stuff an be colored or all of it. And its always stuff like you have presented here that i really enjoy, there was lots to see in this one and there was some good showen effort on your part, now doesnt say that there cant be some more effort but thats for later, anyways decent art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So anyways some slight improvments could be done, and it never hurts to try a few new additions, so i do hope the added suggestions will help on improving on this. But as i look at it it was ok some bundled up designs in there, and maybe some added color for later, but it was a pretty good piece.

[How's It Taste, Mother Fucker?]

Haha cool

You have a really interesting piece of art here, it has some creative and artistic looks, and i really came to enjoy this and all that it was worth, so as i do start this review i look forward to every detail and curve made here. cool a lion same sign as mybirth year so thats always a fun thing to see, the "LION" cameout very good nice detail and even better linework, I also like the style you had here, it was fancy yet nifty so nice effort here, I think one issue and probably the only issue well maybe two issues. and that being one some touch of color maybe just a little part or prop on the drawing it will for sure bring some interesting focus to your piece making it more enjoyble with a touch of color. The other issue maybe you can make a larger "CANVUS" maybe even then allow for more detail, of other things and will allow for more fin elements and more detail as mentioned, so make a larger canvus. And with all all that said i will not bore you any longer and will wrap this up, but on my ending notes here i do have to say and comment thats this was a decent piece here interesting and even entriging, so keep up the good work and always make things better with as much effort as possible.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here i willpost some ideas, maybe one maybe two maybe even a few more but whatever i do decide to suggest, they are only suggestions that could improve on this and even future works so use some use even one and imrprove on a decentpiece you already have here. so as mentioned in this review a larger canvus size would be one point of improving, and second some light touch of color on a certain area, like a tooth, or maybe the "EYES" something for the viewer to focus on.

[Nosferatu]

Nice

So its always a pleasure to see stuff like this they are both artistic and show off the Artists visions and skills, and with this particular piece you did present someneat and differant so i had some pleasure in revieing this, so nice effort here. Nosferatu was always a fave of mine, me and my other half at the time would watch alot of of these old classics such as what you were saying, But this was actually a really good rendition of the old but classic vampire, and leaving it in black and white is just the perfect touch, allthough you could spice thngs up with a touch of red "BLOOD" like on the tip of his fangs and such, it would be a nice little touch to cap this off and wouldnt take away too much away from theblack and white theme, but anyways good work on this classic rendition, I look forward to more. So that was a good art piece, some areas could be more creative but i do understand the direction with this, it was a pretty good presentation and something differant, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So how can this be improved well lots of things can but you have to take into effect of the artists view and direction, so my opinion with this is just to suggest few ideas maybe one or two may find its way into the piece or a future piece, so give some new ideas a try.

[Halloween Adventure]

Very unique

Congrats on the front paged, that is always a pleasure, and its well deserving, and really allows for alot of exposure, and this one was well deserveing for a front page option so nice job there. So i get alot from this image of art, and looks like you put in alot of effort and time with detail and such, i am also loving the detail even from the backrounds to the little shades and what not but there is alot of detail that has went into this and thats a plus so nice job there, I think the only suggestion of improvment i could offer with this one is that by making a lerger canvus of the art piece then you can have more details and more focus points aswell, so make a lerger canvus with more of that nifty detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here you have a good peice sometimes it fels artistic, but sometimes it could have a few adjustments for some better overall effects, so i hope with a few ideas and adjustments this could be improved, hope to see some soon. So as suggested maybe you can make a larger canvus for more detail ofcourse.

[Locust Fo' Evah]

very nice effects

So this was something neat and has a very good look to it, i really was attracted to how you used some effects like with the "BLURRING" out the backround as to keep more focus on the character, and there with the character very sharp and fresh looking nice lines and great color tones, the "PINK" horn on her head seems like it could have had more of a glow or shine to it though, This was a pretty good character design and drawing, maybe adding some shine to the metal would also help more of a sparkly type of shine, The "FONT/TEXT" you had up there at top was cool but maybe something more fancy would sufice, these are just some little details that could bringout the drawing abit more focus, anyways nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty decent i did suggest a few ideas that can make it somewhat more unique in a way so hope you consider some of the tips suggested, The pink like horn could use some shine too it, The font could have a more fancy look, And more shine on the metal, some spraklies here and there would be a great addition, just a few ideas to think about.

MindChamber responds:

i totally agree! and thanks for the tips!

[Litchi Faye Ling]

You seem to have a few of these.

So since you do have a fewof these maybe you should do some "COLOR" versions i think youdo have something differant here as you do, put in a backround type with these, and im thinking if those were all colored and the character in black and white it would give of a nice touch of black and white with a mix of color, just something to think about and would make for a really good combonation, but the "DRAWING" is good nice sharp lines and you also give abit of sexy-ness and thats always cool too, so nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we have some more decent work, its not perfect but is a good piece, and could use some little tidbits of changes here and there, but not much but i do think some of the advice may help so give the ideas a chance, unless you are completly happey with your piece. Well as suggested above you can have some color and some black andwhite maybe with this one you can have the backround colored and the character black and white, just an idea though.