XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Hominid Plushie]

nice

Now for sure this was different you made one, and its ever so cute and seemed to come together very well, love the "BUTTONS" as eyes, anyways nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
cute creation here maybe you should make other versions in other poses and what not.

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[this is an obsession]

Kinda different

Well this was different there was some ok line work in here and some decent sketching, this could be bigger and show more detail, but maybe thats something for next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail needed and more larger of a canvus.

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[Archon68 Glowing Logo]

Nice shine

You presented some good skills and while this seems more like a test of things you have presented some good skills of shine light and color and thats what I liked about this piece, so nice job here and hope to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure with this piece as it was more of a test piece then anything else, maybe some other colors.

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[Grotesquely Elegant]

Scary

While I do say this is "SCARY" it brings some nice detail and nice after effect to the view of it all, I wouldnt mind some color in there maybe just a tad bit more then what you have going on now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra color would be great on this piece.

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[Woah Nelly]

I like it

This one was kind of different with the soft use of colors and what not, but thats what really made it worth the while, it doesnt need anything flashy, it was just right.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I can see some "WACKY" borders of some type.

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[Boob]

Different

Well this was different but you made it kinda unique, not sure what this is from and if its some random creation but you made it simple yet complex, a nice piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest adding one more color in there but then again its pretty good as is..

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[James Fritz]

Nice work here

Now this one I like it represents your character just right especially with the backround you have and you gave him some emotion that made it all just right, nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think this needs much work to it, it was what it is.

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[Kirby]

Nice

This is a nice lil piece on good ol kirby you did him up just right, wish there was more to this piece maybe with some backround scene or something but other then that this was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work would be great or more character portraits.

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[Maiko (Glamorous)]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, it has a lot of "SPARKLE" to it wich is a nice add, maybe of her red top you can ad more of that bubbly shine aswell, just an idea there for you, it was pretty good piece though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine in a few places would be a plus.

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Vortex00 responds:

thanks for the feedback

[Lann]

Nice

This was notbad, I wouldnt mind you doing more of these or even multiple characters in one entry to see maybe different styles and such, just an idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more content such as suggested above.

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