XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bullet ride 4]

Oh nifty

Ok so this was something nifty, it has the feel and touch of that just like a reall "COMIC" it has all the elements of an action packed comic book, with some good action scenes, i think that some of the text boxes could be better though, maybe you could have more larger text, and maybe even an added colored border, but anyways this was a good art piece and i was glad i had a chance to review this so nice job all around here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned maybe some larger font/text maybe even some colorful borders around the bubble boxes.

[Black Omen]

Very dark

OKso here is somethinggood, it is dark but i guess that was the theme you were going for, dont get me wrong i like it and like the drawing and the colors is good, but im thinking that more effects like with some "GLOW"on the eyes especially, but with some effects it could have that extra touch, But anyways nice work here, gooddrawing, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some glow effects mainly in the eyesmaybe some shine areas.

[Teacup]

Nice artwork here

Now this one was pretty neat you have some good ideas here its a cup but its so much more then that with a whole world there, so thats was a plus, i like how you brought the two together and made it pretty unique, the design on city and backrounds seemed to comeout well so nice job all around, but as for improvment i dont know i think you have done an outstanding job regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suppose if anymore improvments are to be made you could go by adding some people maybe climbing mountains or even swimming in the coffee/coco.

[Battle Ready Jessie]

Another cool drawing

So you have another cool drawing here, It would be nice to add some color on these, maybe even adding color glow to the linework would also help, but some sort of color would be a plus on these, they are great drawings, also some more detail, and more shades, but more little details would be a nice touch in pushing this over the edge, just something to think about, but i do like what you have here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color andor some extra details and shades. would be a nice start for this fine piece.

[16-Bit Joe Energetic Idle Anim]

Interesting

Haha ok i got a good laugh from this, it was pretty amusing, the writing i thought could have been better, and maybe some slight more animation but i guess this is the art portal so its notbad i suppose, and seems like you have alot of thse guinipig, and they are amusing and the art work is simple yet nifty, so you do have something here, hope to see more soon untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As some sort of improvment, not sure but i did mention more animation and possibly some differant font writing of some sort.

[Battle Ready James]

And here is something neat.

I do wish this was a colored version though, dont get me wrong its pretty nifty, and kind of entertaining, but maybe some added color and or all of it colored, the whole linework of it all really is nifty and welldone, or as an idea keep the main character be black and white while the backround could have some color to it or even vice versa, anyways nice work here, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one some added color would be nice especialy if it was in the backround while still keeping some black and white to it.

[Barrio]

Haha this was cute.

I found this to be real cute i guess its a sort of "PIXLE" like look and touch wich is nice as i mentioned the backround is something that could be worked on with something, So maybe in a pixle like form, of trees or something and somewhat, but it is pretty impressive and i liked it so nice job here, maybe theres a way to bringout the colors more but anyways its still a good piece i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought maybe bringing out the colors abit better, also doing something with the backround so it doesnt seem so bland back there.

[My Special Hat]

Aww something differant

OK so here you have somethomg differant and unique i really love how you added alot of random stuff here, could have used more random stuff if you ask me, but you did present some interesting and unique stuff here, another thing that i would have liked to see on this is some more "VIBRANT" colors more colors comming out and alive, maybe thats something to think about on the next one, i have added this as my fave because of the random and unique feel and touch it gives off.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good, i suggested some more random stuff going on aswell as more vibrant colors and such.