XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jungle Madness]

Nice style here

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a comic book, well alot like a comic book, now my question is this the same guy cause you have two differant character versions there, now as it seems to be a comic book cover i am thinking it would look cool if it had some snazzy borders frames around it somehow, just might give it that little extra comic feel and touch, the hair in both versions could use abit more depth some sorta detail that shows its layers abit morre would be nice, also i like how you have the two differant guys and such but i am thinking there should be more stuff happing in the backround, kinda to really show that this would be the comic i want to read and such, regardless of all this and that you have some good art showing and a good rendition of a comic i really like this and thought it cameout well, so props and nice job on this, looks great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The hair in both versions could use abit of detail, some "FRAMES/BORDERS" along the edges of your art piece might give it a more focused look and this piece just seems like it would look more complete with borders/frames, some more backround happenings could be in place aswell

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[Digimon Fans are Really Hot]

It is cute

~~REVIEW~~
WOW this was pretty damn good, you are very "BOLD" you showed lots of "SKIN" in this one but i suppose that was sorta the idea but you did dress here up abit it is a her i think lol, but anyways onto the review, the character design was very welldone almost perfect, there was alot of skin but i like how you dont really show much of what would be "RAUNCHY" but anyways good design good colors also nice job on the shadow just there on the back of the shirt it reflected well, you also presented us with some good backrounds, all and all you have some awsome skills that really brought out a unique character with awsome shades and details, if anything could work even better i would give the "EYE" on the head piece a bit of a "GLOW" it would set it just perfect i think, maybe even have someone peeking an eyefull in the backround hehe, ohwell nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
put a glow effect on the eyeball on the head piece, and maybe have another character in the backround peeking an eyefull or something

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Tootmania responds:

Thanks for the neato review! And that's actually a cool idea, the whole glowing eyeball helmet thing. And thanks for the kind words!

[Rise Before the Fall]

wow very nice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really nice, you have the fighter showing some "ACTION" like if she is in battle and thats neat cause that shows emotion and a story from the picture, the "COLORS" are not too standout but more fitting to the events in the art, so props on that, the hands dont show much, but i would probably do the same, you should think about giving her some "WAR-MARKS" on her arms or skip points so that it seems like she has been in battle before, and on that note a tattoo wouldnt hurt heh, anyways nice job here i like this character and she grew on me as i wrote this so, props to you on some good character design here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some war wounds on her skin maybe some blood stains on her armor, and a tatoo or two wouldnt hurt

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[Quadruple Tards]

cute

~~REVIEW~~
lol now this was cute, the backround color was a nice add on and gives it a more feel of that they are dancing and such, now each character you do have there, look pretty good nice design on all of them and you made them all look as if they are really dancing away and enjoying there time, now if anything can be improved i would suggest add a bird character in the bland spot in the upper right area or something there so it doesnt seem so bland, but other then that its a pretty neat piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as stated have something like a prop or something in the bland spot

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[Ivory]

Nice variaty of work

Now you have a nice variaty of work here very "COLORFUL" stuff from the sun to the running elephants, atleast i think they are running, but you have really filled the "CANVAS" from top to bottom with alot to see, and you have a pretty good creative side which is always nice, i think the onlything lacking here is probably that it doesnt have any "BORDERS/FRAMES" along the edges which i think if you had some maybe even a colored up one since thats kinda your style, it would workout perfectly, but with all that said you have some fantastic work here and cant wait to see more soon

As explained some borders would fit i think.

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UnderARock responds:

yeah I see what you mean, borders are nice

[Alien Chicks]

Lime green

Well this was notbad i like it to be honest, its a really light feel as is the color, the backround, has really nothing to the visual view, but as for your main drawing here its very "FRESH" looking probably mostly from the light color, now this can still work with some sorta backround you dont have to go all out with some crazy dark stuff but maybe a darker mint green would sufice on the lime green of the drawing, or even a grey backround but even if you didnt go that way you could alsways go with a scenery or backdrop something along them lines

My improving suggestions would be add some sorta backround even if its a solid color that reflects with the main drawing

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PixelCake responds:

I think you missed the part where I said it was for the MONOCHROME ART COLLAB IN THE ARTIST'S COMMENT.
It's not supposed to have a background because I was limited to just those colors. Sometimes not having a bg makes the subject pop more.

Why is the bulk of NG so dead-set against a fucking bit of simplicity?

[Reanimation]

Wow intense

~~REVIEW~~
wow now this is really intense with alot of detail, lots of texture and you gave this little art piece some sorta story to itm it has some really deep and dark colors but for the character type that only seems normal, but somehow it seems missing something more on the upper area kinda like if this was a poster it would have a big slogan across or something, but anyways you do some good work, i will be glad to review more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe add some borders/frames around the edges for the "POSTER" look

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[The Elegant Parasite Black]

More basic then the rest

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was not your best, more basic and simple then the rest but still has a neat design or character not sure there, but it can be improved on such as adding some backround or some landscape in the distance, also giving the character more detail and ofcourse use of more color all around, as for the "SIGNATURE" i think you can either lose that or give it a more fancy feel as its abit on the sloppy side so could work either way, anyways its notbad for what it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove or make the signature more fancy maybe blend it with the backround more, also more details needed for the characters face

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Celx-Requin responds:

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[Tyrannical Boss]

nice work here

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice piece of art from you with lots to seem the pink creature being whipped seems like he is suffering so in that aspect of things you might want to show more emotion in that area, now your best work in this art piece is the Tyrannical boss now ofcourse thats your focus of art right there, his "WHIP" atleast i think its a whip seems lacking in design it needs abit of two tone color to it, and maybe a small design in it, as for the "TY" it was your best work here as i said awsome detail, lots of props and great skin texture to make it like it was really there, so nice work all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some design to the whip, and maybe show some emotion from the pink creature like he is in pain

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Celx-Requin responds:

I agree...

Thanks,
- Celx