XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Invader Zim Halloween]

This was pretty cool

Some fresh looking stuff here I love what you have done with the color here very bright, and good light effects I think if there was anything to be changed here it might be to brighten up the windows in the back buildings but overall still great stuff.

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brighten up the windows in the back buildings

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[Oh the Joy of the Undead Party]

Crazy

Well this is kind of crazy, but still nice work, I did think that some of the "BLOOD" could have been darker maybe even have a blend of a few reds, but it was an overall nice piece and I like it so nice job indeed.

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More mixture of blood would be nice indeed.

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[Time of Immaturity]

Really nice work here

Now this is some really nice work here, the shades are really good, and you gave some good shades and "LIFE-LIKE" look here so really nice job here and I was really impressed with this, and it tells a "STORY" really nice work here. hope to see more work of yours soon.

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I like this as it is doesnt need any changes.

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[Harley]

Beautiful

Wow this is great it reminds me of a friend, so beautiful in the heyes, it really shows the eyes and the deep detail great shades and the soft touch of it all really comes alive in this piece.

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Would have loved to see the joker in the backround somewhere.

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[Speedpaint Krita 3.0.1 | Jacksepticeye - Undertale]

Dark and creepy

Now here was something that is a great choice for the month of october, this one actually reminds me of a young joker, you did an outstanding job here, great design, awsome color tone and shades, the "BACKROUNDS" could use something maybe like a "CLOUDY" or smoke backround.

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Some better backrounds as described just above.

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MartsArt responds:

Thank you so much for your critique;) And yeah I know backgrounds are not my strongest domain :( but in this one I actually didn't have time to do one, I had only 2 hours to paint this and then I had to do things for school (In general I have school from 8am to 10pm so I don't really have much spare time)

[Help Me]

Scary

Well I must admit this one was different but you have gave it that scary and creepy feeling the backround could use a bit more detail and such, but the main focus was very nice.

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the backround could use a bit more detail more tiny detail, but still is notbad.

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[Bomber Man]

Love the color in this one

Well I love the color in this one it really just jumps out at you very sharp color and this is an awsome piece of work even the drawing jumps at you. keep up the great and amazing works of art.

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This is pretty solid, maybe some brighter lighting effects but not really needed.

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[Hunger]

This is nice

you have some good drawing skills and this was just a taste, now I do think if you added some color, not to the whole things but maybe just the apple, that would really set this above the rest.

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I really like what you have in this black and white style now dont get me wrong they are great but you should try a colored version it would really bring out the whole design more, or ifyou are not into that, try just bit of color here and therem maybe an outter frame, or some focus point in the middle. such as this apple or the eyes.

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AuraVaury01 responds:

Thank you! honestly since it's Inktober I don't add much color, but I've been thinking on buying red ink for future drawings. Perhaps when Inktober is over I can paint some of these and add a little more of color, can't really focus much on drawing these days since i have a lot work to do :)

[Flyswatter of Doom]

Wow nice

I can just imagine how long this must have taken to put together the black and white style really fits well with this piece, and even the shades come off well, I like the scary feel aswell, a good entry here if I say so myself.

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Hmm I think just a spot of "COLOR" would have been nice on this like maybe the "EYES" or something.

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[New Recruits]

This was interesting

Here was something interesting I like all the different characters, Would have liked to see some brighet colors and all, on these like the cobra commander's helm. but still pretty good.

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So while this was nice and there was a shaded theme in color some brighter colors of focus points would have been a nice point also.

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