XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Short Comic #5 - Sethdd]

lol Cute

I personally feel that That this was an ok piece, but Lets start from the top and by that I mean the whole piece it has a certain style that keeps me interested but other areas kind of drew me away. Haha this one had some humor to it, I am thinking these might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself. notbad of a comic maybe added an extra set of boxes to make it a tad longer to extend the humor somehow. Things are set up and as this one is coming to an end, you have presented some interesting things here and I must say you presented it all in good fashion.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I always stress in my reviews of fixing this or adding that, but in all honesty this was nifty and I can see adding some good ideas here that will make this much better. extending the humor with a longer comic frame work is one way to improve, might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself.

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[Chamber found a checkpoint!]

Decent

I have seen a lot of art in my time here, but I have not seen art as different and or interesting as this one, And its stuff like this one that keeps me enoying reviewing these types.Now here was something with some rich colors that really came through very well, I even like some of the "GLOWS" and lighting effects, really nice piece here. So this is not soft by any means infact this is exactly as it should be, you added your own twist, And with flavor if I say so myself, so nice work here and hope you keep it going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now here is something good and there are ways to improve on things, You should be able to work your way up to it. so here are a few things to work on. Little details could improve on this like more blood texture more dropping of blood on ground and whatnot.

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[Satyr]

Nice Drawing

This was neat and strange and very impressive, it has a certain artistic feel to the art style and it was just strange but that was a good thing, I really liked it, This was a pretty good drawing here lots of detail shown, I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, but in reallity you did well on this one love the fine detail. No entry gets the perfect award, But what this entry does offer Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are a nice fit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that its a decent piece of art all in all. Like I say for most pieces of art it would be cool to find a few new ways of improving on some areas of needed attention. I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, maybe even adding a tad bit of color just one or two areas with added color.

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[Liero!]

Strange yet exciting

The look of this piece could mean several things it has a certain uniqueness too it, but then again it has a simple nature about it aswell. So this one here is interesting and while it has a strange feel about it, there is also an exciting moments about it, shades are decent, backrounds look cool, overall notbad at all. I noticed a lot of small things that slowly pulled together something nice here and thats what caught my attention with this art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I recommend doing something with it to make it stand out more. It could be as simple as an effect or a change in direction here or there but maybe these options may help. I dont thik there was much to go on this one but if you are going with the "STRANGE" and "RANDOM" effect here I would do more random add-ons like maybe "EYES" on a random place and whatnot.

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[Japanese Fox Spirit]

Foxy

I think I can envision this piece being part of a bigger flash game or movie in some form or another, and you made it seem that way, and thats what has caught my attention with this one. Very foxy with this one haha no jokes intended but you did a decent job here allthough the black and white is good maybe some added color here and there would be a nice touch up. maybe even some more backround detail about it. notbad work here though. Im not the biggest fan of this style, but I always keep the bias out of my reviews. But I must say this did catch my attention to some point so nice job on that part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could even get a little abstract with it, there are different elements and things you can do to make this that IT factor so lets try a few new ideas here. allthough the black and white is good maybe some added color here and there would be a nice touch up. maybe even some more backround detail about it.

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[MAD]

Notbad

You gave this one a different style and I do with other artwork was as different as this one was, there is a sense of Stylization and Flair about this piece, I like it. Alright this was different for sure, the "EYES" really come out with emotion so nice job there and nice touch on the backround as well, maybe a tad more "SHADE" on the walls though. overall nice job here. But now we do come to the end of this review or close to it and before I get to any helpful options I just want to say it was something different and thats good when it comes to artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my take here on this submission is that you do have something decent here, and this was notbad at all, kind of reminds me of a car or house that you still need work on them from time to time to get all the kinks out here or there. maybe a tad more "SHADE" on the walls though. and I would also try and improve on the "FONT" it was hard to read maybe something more snazy and up front.

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[V]

Cool pixle art

So indeed there was some decent effort of work here, The effect that this gives off was nifty and unique, But it was decent work. Alright these are cool, and the pixle art is always a plus, I still think these types of art works could be larger in "CANVUS" so that you can show more of the detail. Love the colors and you really made it come alive. Now As I wind down on this piece of art I just want to say this was actually a decent piece, some extra added effects would be nice but overall its decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I am pleased with all the outcome on a decent effort that you have put fourth on this one, And with this one you have set things in place and made some good things happen with this one, This was a good piece of work if you ask me. So anyways you have a good entry here. Now lets improve on some things. these types of art works could be larger in "CANVUS" so that you can show more of the detail. other then that it was notbad.

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[Me]

I like it

Theres always Something different to see in the art portal but thats what I love about it, and the entry you have here is no different, its different and unique in its own ways and brings a different style to the table. Its like the artist is ready to go out and destroy the world with art, I still feel there is something missing here like maybe in the back round show him done some of his work with that pencil maybe he drew a magical door and it could be glowing that would really bring more focus to the artist at hand. So Finally i come to the end of this review. So always hard to end on a review never know what to say but you have a nice vision here a nice skill and you have shown this very well, keep up the nice work. and my final Overview of this is that you have some good quality here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright here are a few things that may fit your direction in fitting just right with your art piece I have taken some time to put up some things that might work for you. Adding some of his work in the backround would be a plus, maybe even some color added.

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[cross]

Interesting

I have grown to like this you gave it a knockout touch and some flair about it, Kind of gotta take in all the elements of this submission. So this one is interesting good drawing could be better with better plcement of red parts thinking its blood and I would remove the "DOTS" entirely. overall it was not too bad. I like it. And so you have shown me what you can realy do with this piece here, you have showcased some awsome stuff with great detail, some small improvments could be made though but besides that you have done great here. So my ending Overview here is that this was pretty impressive, nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there is always room for changes, Not sure how to attack this one because the visuals are not too shaby but on the other side of things, things could use some slight changes. Removing the dots all together surrounding the cross is a plus, and adding more of a blood dripping down effect would push this art to the next level, give the blood more of a "TEAR-DROP" effect.

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[Errr yeah.]

Nice drawing

So I have noticed that you bring alot to the table with different styles and an interesting view here So as I get ready to critique this one, I find it interesting. So here is a decent drawing with some good shades the "BLOOD" effect could be better somehow more splatter of blood in the backround and whatnot, as the backround is too bland. And with all all that said i will not bore you any longer and will wrap this up, but on my ending notes here i do have to say and comment thats this was a decent piece here interesting and even entriging, so keep up the good work and always make things better with as much effort as possible.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So at times It can be hard to suggest new ideas sometimes the pieces are just right but in other cases it needs work, So here is some things to think about. More blood effect especially in the backround and whatnot.

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