XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Run, We Are Your Friends]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
ok so nice job on this the {GREEN} is looking awsome perfect color on this guy, and i like the little red color details aswell, the {BRAIN} was great but im thinking, you should have had some red in the darker green shaded areas maybe it would look better that way, other then that the colors cameout very well, the {EYES} are perfect they are really just popping out at you wich i really liked so nice job there, This almost seems like the type of work you could put up on a dress-up game in flash so theres something there, so anyways tips for making this piece better, add a differant color in the brains darker shading. other then that its pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add a differant color in the brains darker shading.

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[King Tiger]

Impressive colors and design

~~REVIEW~~
Really like this and the color you got going i personally love anything with the use of {PURPLE} so this seemed to comeout very well, and with black it seemed to workout ok i thought, the lil touches of yellow or gold was working as extra so really nice touch with the colors here, some little {EFFECTS} like glowing of the eyes could have been used, i think in this situation it would have worked great if you ask me, something to try out for another time, but besides that tip it was a good piece, also another tip for making it better might be to add some backround work but not really needed , just a tip for making it even better then it already is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few tips for making things better, with some glow and even some backround detail, other then that it was a good piece

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[Counting Shiplights]

Love the detail and theme

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this and i am loving the {BLUE-THEME} and not overkilling either but you have some very nice detail in this like with the design within the hat, im thinking that design should be lighted grey or something, but anyways you have a good drawing has a good persona about her, so i can see ehy you like her, the little details in this is what works out the most, so verywelldone on those parts, if i was to suggest anything to make it better i would say some backround work, but i understand its about the character, so anyways great stuff i enjoyed this great character of yours and look forward to seeing some more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i wrote about some backround work but understanding its just about the character work.

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[Mother's Day]

Nice flower

~~REVIEW~~
Nice rose here the sketch and black and white style is pretty good, you should think about redoing, the rose but running it though paint shop pro or even photoshop so you can run this with some {COLOR} dont get me wrong its good but with some of the added color would make it much better, the sketch it self is good work great shading and nice detail, the rose part itself could use more shaping around the edges, the leaves came out great almost perfect, but anyways great job, so a few ideas of making it better are adding some color, some shaping around the flower edges, other then that it was ok, anyways nice piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Round out some flower edges, and adding some color would be great touch for making it better

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CaOmDaYn responds:

thank you for the detailed review! i definitely need work on this one yes it was done in roughly 10 minutes, and i do agree color would do a lot for it. But i have never been one to work with color, pencil and pen are what I do. Thank you tho! :)

[Out of the Dusk]

Decent skyline

~~REVIEW~~
Another nice piece, i love this one with the sorta {BUG} the red eye is a focus point, so im thinking, you should have made the red eye much more {BRIGHTER} or a much more {GLOW} the backround {CITYVIEW} was very impressive and you could also make it abit Cloudy and misty give the city a more mystery style city, just a few ideas that would make this much better in my oppinion ofcourse its already a good piece, i suggested these ideas because maybe they will help, but this was a pretty good one on its own, but besides all that it was pretty good and i was glad to see this and hope to see more of your work pretty soon, anyways nice job once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighted red eye and some misty clouds, are just a few tips.

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