XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death hole]

Cool

I like this I think the "EYES" could be glowing a deep red or even yellowish or something like that but other then that this was well drawn love the brick and such you should have had more brick showing though, but you have some nice work here, I look forward to more of your work efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some glowing eyes and more showing of the brick.

~X~

[da retro bridge]

I like it

It has an old style feel to it especially with the backround and the scratchy old feel to it, you designed the car very well and the faded colors seem to make it very well also. so all around nice job here it came out well and glad I had a chance to check this out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think I like it as is no changes at all needed at this time.

~X~

[Priest of Thorns]

Pretty amazing

I must say this was pretty amazing style of art you have here this one kind of reminds me of beauty and the beast for some reason but anyways I like this the backround was notbad and the rose or flower with it's glow effect was cool I think one idea that would ad to the story here and give more depth to the whole scene here would be that there could be some fire fly's or butterflies flying around with that same effect of glow and shine to give off that magical feel and aura going around so that's just one idea to ad some depth to the story here and a little magic in the art anyways other then that this was awesome work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some backround creatures to show off the world would be nice

~X~

Fluff-Copter responds:

Thank you for the feedback!
Lighting and background are things I'm planning to work on more. I tend to shy away from deep contrast but that's a comfort zone I'll need to step out of more often :3

[School]

Very nice

And here you show off your skills on color because you use some nice blues here and lightning effects really come off well with the effect this seems to have a blue effect about it and theme and you pulled it off just perfectly so nice job indeed so nice work and can't wait to see more of what you bring to the portal

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice lighting I think you did awesome and no changes are needed at this time

~X~

[heartbroken]

Oh wow

Wow this was absolutely stunning piece with lots to see I like the little animation of the snow dropping also that's a plus right there the lighting and just everything that comes with this was very pleasent a very well rounded piece if you ask me I like what you have done here so nice job indeed anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is no changes needed

~X~

radshoe responds:

why thank you! ;D

[Sewer Team]

Awesome work

And you have some awesome detail here you went all out with shadows and shine and little things like that. That really showed off well so nice job there. I do however think that you should have shown much more light effect and shine on this whole piece. Even from the lantern there should be some sunburst or sparkles of light reflection outwards and then some shine on the shield and armour would also be nice aswell just an idea to reflect more of that light and shine all in the right place but you have really outdone yourself here with some nice effects nice artistic drawing and a good style all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects and bursts of light effects

~X~

[Girl face]

Very cool

Well this was pretty cool and nice idea here I like the vibrant pink you have added here like with the eyes I am thinking as an idea maybe use that pink for the border frame as well as the signature it will just something that will really bring out things more the rest will be fine as is though and gives it some small depth

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of the violet or pink on other areas

~X~

[Dave Commission]

Notbad

Well notbad the art is smooth and it's good that you both are very happy with the results. I myself wish you could do more with the hair but it's all still good. It's nice but maybe a few curls so it don't look too painted on and such. A very nice piece of work though and nice cool colors as well so you did good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small changes with the hair would be interesting

~X~

[Untitled 128]

Very nice work

And here we have some very nice art work love that eye as afocus point but I do like the darkness in this and that may be your focus but that eye could be some light up area with some tint of color but you do have a nice idea here and it's always cool to see stuff like this anyways nice job on all fronts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tint of color or even some light

~X~

[Trench Patrol]

Nice detail

Well lots of detail in here the backrounds the effort shows alot of detail here very nice style. But the amount of detail is very good it's just the little things that really jump out and honestly that's what I liked here so nice job on this piece here anyways good work and hope to see more soon. It was a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't know seems pretty good as is

~X~

foamymuffin responds:

thanks, appreciate all types of feedback. ye i see what you mean with trying to get things to pop out more.