XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Junkrat lineart]

Color

Yeah I will have to agree with you that this does need some color even just parts of it colored would be nice and what kind of paperbor canvus did you put this on it was different then the normal. But really. Anyways nice efforts here good style just needs some color into this so that's an idea for you to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color or part of it

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[Kittensvdragons work in progress]

Awesome

And here you have presented us with some of the starting stages of how it does get started you have a nice progress here and the detail is enhanced greatly very nice pieces here and you bring a nice style to the table I like how you have showcased this in a positive way indeed so nice effort here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvements needed on the learning process

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[Inktober Day 7]

Decent piece again

And once again we have another decent drawing of these characters not much for color in this one but still a fun piece to see and review of course that lil bit of color could be all filled as if it was a shield over eyes or something and could be transparent but anyways this was not a bad art piece at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A red sheild over eye guard

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 5]

Nice lighting

So now with this one you have really pushed the limits on lighting effects the greens the reds and fire flames very vibrant and lots of great color here and that glow effect has really come alive I can see you pushing it even more even harder and beyond with even more glowing and shine and just a beautiful use of color but you already outdone yourself with it I would also just leave it be and not have any changes. And the story really pushes forward and your characters really come alive I am loving the the close up shots like of the eyes very nice job there anyways keep up the great work is of work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A fantastic piece with awesome use of color

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[Inktober Day 5]

Decent

Decent piece of artwork here I think a nice effect would be to have smoke comming from the bullet holds cause from the gun it seems like it just shot and comming from the actual bullet holes shot it would show more realistic results just an idea though as this was a pretty decent piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some smoke from the bullets

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[Storm]

Fantastic

A fantastic piece now two things I have noticed is that the eyes are great but maybe showing red glow from the eyes will represent more anger and there could be more texture in the hair more meshed blends and such. But besides that this was a nice piece well done indeed so keep up this fantastic style you have going

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few color and glow effect changes including some hair texture

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[The Friendly Monster]

Different

Here a different style of stuff going on to make a full piece here with lots of colors and very fresh art style here as well the colors are bright and vibrant and standout a lot and that's all a positive thing really nice use of color and shapes to bring this forward. I like what you did here with this artistic piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was some bland spots where clouds could be placed to fill in these gaps

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[how to eat cheeseballs]

This is cool

You have really done something nifty and different here I'll first start off with the lighting effects you presented a nice feel and touch of it all and made it really reflect off the screen well and the lighting effects really do it's job and give this that effect that people look for and strive for everyday so very nice work there and second the art and drawing was fantastic no mishaps that I can see but what I do see is a beautiful piece of great detail nice effort and just plain beautiful work and a great days work so you should put yourself on the back as this was just a brilliant piece and no changes needed on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I mentioned no edits changes or upgrades it's a perfect creation if you ask me

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[Demon Girl]

More flame

This is one of those pieces that you could really use more flame more burning more fire and of course more shine just a very nice piece of art work you have here but needs that extra shine of fire and flame and nice burning sensation that would really push this to the next level of detail so try it out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flame more fire

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[Muffin Style: Trip Jutsu]

Cute

Lol this was something cute and funny it's a quick one and the animated part was notbad I think you can ad some sort of improvments like when the sprite falls down have more of an effect and some background effect would be nice too aswell as some lighting in backround but a nice effort here so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small lighting and backround effects

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