XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Nice tank

Nice newgrounds tank you have going here it's very 3-d and notbad at all would have liked more color in this whole piece and maybe even more newgrounds like backrounds but overall a nice piece of work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More themed color use and more of a backround

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[Let It Grow -A-]

Lol cute

Well what do we have here this was cute the colors the lines all very nice work I even like the shine on the sun glasses so you have done a fantastic job here with a nice piece not so small either but a good piece of art work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a sparkle or two on the shine points glasses etc

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[Mary with child]

Love it

A very peaceful piece you have here very subtle and pleasent so I would normally suggest some changes and or improvments but if anything I would just say add some slight color of some sort maybe even in the backround

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color theme would be a plus

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XantyLeger responds:

Thank you for the idea, I'm gonna try it next time ^-^

[Just Chillin']

Cute stuff

This was some cute stuff you have here the pink the snow the soft element it all just works out so well and brights your day a very nice work of art here not much I can suggest for improvments as this was pretty good if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was great as is

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[The Legend of Zelda]

This was pretty fantastic

Just as the title says this was actually a pretty fantastic piece of art with very fine detail love how you have some lighting effects in there but you should have some sun light really beam down in on them not too much but show off some lighting effects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more sun and lightning effects would be a huge plus here

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[AjitPsi]

Fresh and flashy

This here was fresh and flashy I like your style I like the sprite mode about this all and the flashy whirly circle behind it. I would love to see some lighting effects really come alive in this from that flashy circle thing. Just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects as mentioned

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SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks for the review! I didn't go too crazy with it and give it lighting effects because I was trying to emulate the EarthBound sprite style but I always appreciate constructive criticism. Cheers!

[Rottytops]

Cool

Very nice work here I like the feel of this very fresh and new. The green cloud seems like it could have more of a glow on it. Just something to think about but besides that it's actually notbad at all not much more to say about this other then it's fantastic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow behind the character would be nice

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[Gone Shopping]

Nice

A nice design here it allows us to see what's really happening in the underworld of the water lol no but really some nice job here I like all the details of this and all the focus points I could see you adding some more little detail stuff here and there making it even better nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few little more tid bits of detail items would be a plus

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[Raven]

Fine work

A fine piece of work here with some amazing shine texture and detail just overall great designs here with a realistic design it's a plus on all fronts with this one love the deep colors and textures I would not suggest any improvments at this time as this is great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a backround scene

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OddmireAsh responds:

Thank you! I agree that I do need to work on designing backgrounds, most often I just draw the character and have a simple colored background.

[Notebook 04]

Very nice drawings

And here we have some very nice drawings good linework not too fancy but you gave us a good idea of your style and it's very well done. Now I personally would love more color and more fine detail within the drawings but that's just me. Some color would be very nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some color. And some more detailed lines

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