XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bear Boxer Girl]

Very nice

Very nice work here I think some more shine on her legs would be a plus and maybe adding some scars and bruises would also be a huge plus to show more detail other then that this was very good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra bruises scars and shine

~X~

DetrailedFires responds:

I do need to put more scars on some of my characters, especially since it looks hella cool given i dont mess it up :v

[from 2015 to 2017]

Blue

Very blue theme here I like the freshness of it all and love the smooth tone you have given this really nice stuff here you are very talented and it shows off well anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color themes would be a plus

~X~

Littlepinkmonkey responds:

Thank you! I will think about that next time :)

[Through the smoke]

Very nice piece

Wow a very nice piece here indeed with some nice drawings I do like the black and white style and was pretty nifty with all the details I wouldn't mind some color though that would really push this over the edge

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some or a lot of color would be nice

~X~

[Sea Witch]

Nice and dark

Well I must say this was a dark piece but that's what I really liked about it live the dark background and love the shine on the characters itself anyways nice work here indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not sure it is meant to be a dark piece so leave it be nice job over all though

~X~

[Megumi]

I nice piece of work

And here is a nice piece of dark work love how you postioned this so the eyes can stand out. Would have loved a more deeper emotions from the eyes maybe some blood or a glow effect of some sort but other then that this was nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow from the eyes or even some blood

~X~

[Pep-pep-pep-pepperoni, please!]

Cute

Well this was cute had some funny element about it and the cute characters make it that much better I like the color theme here so nice job over all here no major things need changing anyways keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught this was fine as is no changes needed at this time some nice work you have here and hope to see more soon

~X~

[Summoner]

Very nice

And here is something very nice in detail and use of really good lighting effects I like what you have done here the green with the lighting effects really come out. I personally would love to see more light come out of that green but still very nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra lighting for more of an effect would be a plus

~X~

Kaolinn responds:

Hey!
Thank you so much for your comment and for the compliments. I honestly thought I already overdid the light, woops. I will apply your suggestion, thank you!

[In my reflection]

Wow love this

Wow I must say this was a nice piece here I love the use of color here and love the texture and tone I think the only thing that I would really change up would be ad a bit of sparkle and shine to the water or element on the bottom

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine would be a huge plus

~X~

[Khonjin House - Bleeding Rainbow]

Nice and colorful

This one here is a nice and colorful piece I could see some brighter colors in the background maybe a fee of the circles more brighter but over all this was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentions some brighter touches

~X~

Jradgex responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep in mind to brighten up the backgrounds of future piece.

[Tethys redux 02]

Very nice

Well I must say this was one that caught my eye from the portal, I love the "LIGHTING" effect you have presented here, wouldnt mind more of a shadow presented or a beam or glare of light shinning in, but other then that you have really done some nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more of a shadow presented or a beam or glare of light shinning in

~X~

mematron responds:

I totally agree that's there's room for improvement! I hope that I can do that and show something that no one has seen before. I still think that there's room to do things that are new.

Once I put in backgrounds with other characters you'll see all kinds of interesting things happen. You probably will never see lens flares and light shafts because these things are photographed with electrons.