XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burst Open]

Love it

Oh this piece here is very nice I love how everything has it's own design here or mesh the colors came out just right and the sparkling stars on the girls dress are good but maybe the stars should be more brighter and more sparkly more jumping out at you but with that said that's all that I could see changing up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brightness on sparkling

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6khaos9 responds:

thanks, i appreciate the feedback and the kind words.

[Sugar]

Very good idea

This was a good outcome of things and glad you went ahead with this as notmany would have gone this far in depth, but very nice style. I really like the idea here of a clock crew comic I dont think I have seen one or a few before so its nice see one now and you did a great job and some very nice use of the comic frames and design of the characters, I hope you make more stuff like this it was pretty nifty. So some very good stuff here, A refreshing piece of art and design, and shows off the talent from within, and shows you really outdid yourself with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The frames were great but maybe that outter grey frame should be a red or green or something brighter.

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[Spectrum]

Cool design

And here was something that you could do with all sorts of stuff as this had some nice things flying around here and there, I love the center piece and stars that fly out, there could be some better lighting effects on the flying stars and center piece, but overall nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there could be some better lighting effects on the flying stars and center piece

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[Guardbreak Girl]

Nice

So with this one everything seemed to come into place with the colors the shadows, the lighting even the backround fit in well with this, so there wont be ny needed upgrades or changes to this piece as this one does not need any extra changes, those are the best kinds to have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
These are the best kinds of pieces to come onto as this particular one does not need any improvvements or changes or even upgrades for that matter.

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[Red Latex Suit girl]

Nice work

This was pretty good the front end is very shiny but That might be the intent, lots of nice shades and detail all the way around here, the onlything you need here would be to add some backround scene or visuals here its pretty nice work though I like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just could use some backround work.

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[Pepita]

Love the color

These are all so unique meaning these types of pieces, Thats why I enjoy finding these unique types of art and designs, they bring different elements out and about. You did an outstanding job on the color here, I think you could have had some of the brighter colors really shine out more especially with the "EYES" but for what you have here it was pretty intense stuff and a nice style of artwork here. I have come to enjoy a lot of things about this piece, but mostly is that it probably took a lot of time and effort to put this together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some brighter eyes maybe some other brighter points aswell.

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zekromlover responds:

I couldn't change the eye color. They are mean to be yellow as in the movie.
https://goo.gl/hgweqv

As I said, she's from Disney, this is just a fanart. But thanks for the meaningful comment.

[Cthulhu Rising: Defiance]

Very nice

Wow this was very nice. you have filled a whole world on this one, that beam of light is also so perfect you could use it even more you should maybe lighten that up even more with more of a glow on that beam, maybe have the green on his head glow more too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few lighting effects could be upgraded.

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[Macroos]

Decent

Well I must say this was pretty decent, I do think you could have added some "SHINE" on the hair maybe even more texture in the dress itself, love your backround here aswell it allows focus for the character a nice job indeed, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the hair and some texture in the dress.

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[Hotline Miami]

Love the use of color

You really did an outstanding job on color here, especially this backround I do think the "GUN" should have been a different color like a dark or light grey, but other then that this was a fun piece to review and you did great with it so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A different color on the gun

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[Peach]

Really nice

This came out very well still keeping with the pink and golden blond hair and the crown ofcourse you made it realistic and she is very top heavy now but I guess thats ok too this is more of a modern look and such but still an outstanding piece of art very nice indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe draw a castle or even mario and luigi in the far distant backround.

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